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 Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:04 pm
Okay, i tryed to make this a cool but very sad SasoDei passage but I think it's really sad because I cried wrting it! Here it is, please rate it from 1-10.
My eyes caught sight of something in the forest though, which made them widen by a fraction.
This couldn't be true!! I didn't want this to be true!
In the distance, I saw a figure with a black cloak with red clouds on it and short messy crimson hair.
It was my Sasori-danna…..he wasn't dead?
Here I am, about to die…just to find out that no one will be waiting for me at the after life.
I could see a small sincere smile on his face as I saw him mouth four words from his mouth.
"I love you too, Danna." Deidara mumbled, one unfallen tear streaming from my azure eyes.
The bright flash of the explosion covered my vision of my Danna. Then, it was black.
I found myself to be standing in an endless field of grass and flowers.
I wasn't sure exactly where I was, but I only knew one thing. No one was here waiting for me.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:22 am
hmm tht was good the story would be great blaugh 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:16 am
Awwwwwwwwwww. thats soooooooo sad....good job!
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:45 pm
Thanks everyone! smile I wonder what the story could be...That is a good idea...I am so going to try and write one!
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:23 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:42 pm
Well done! crying so sad!
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