++When the sun sets over cherry blossom skies,
And the twilight fills the air...
You can see the snow on the mountaintops,
Through the veil, of Old Japan...++
:: It's good, but there's one part where it looks like you tried to draw her left arm up and didn't erase it. That's all that's bugging me. Other than that, it's very cute. ^.^ I think the dress might use some work too.
8/10. ::
++On an island lead by all the ancient ways,
Just a million miles from here...
And yet it seems like only yesterday
That her song rang out so clear...++
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