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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:19 pm
Heaven or Hell
"Go away.Please just leave me alone.Why?Why did this happen to me.What I do?Someone tell me!I don't want this!Make it stop!Mommy!Help!I don't want to die!Get me out of here!" It was a small dark room.It had no windows and a hidden door...somewhere...but she wasn't sure were.There was a small fire in the middle of the red room.A young girl was cowering in the far corner.She was shaking,crying,and muttering things to herself.She was deadly afriad.Her eyes were as wide as the full moon. Her name was Akira.She was only ten years old.She was quite sharp for her age,and she was attending a private high school.But in this kind of condition her intelligence didn't really count,for she was trapped with no way out.On the other side of the room there were two dead bodies...Her mind was flustered and she couldn't think clearly.She was too terrified. The thing was that she could normally think through things like this but...one of those bodies...one was her mom.She just sat there starring at her mothers face.The body rested next to the fire.Her mother was drenched in blood and she was facing Akira.On the other side of the room was...the killer. Earlier that evening the young Akira was carefree and new nothing of what was to expect.Then she and her mom were attacked and brought here.In a little room with no way out. Her mom had tried desperatly to fight back.She would then scream to Akira to find the door and get out.But Akira was just sitting there to startled to move.Then suddenly her mother was pinned down with the killers hand on her head.Then there was a loud SNAP! Her mom had stopped struggling.She had stopped breathing,moving,everything.She just stared at Akira.A tear rolled down the young girl's cheek.She whispered for her mom to move,to get up and keep fighting.But nothing happened. Anger began to well up within Akira.She stood up and saw a small toolbox next the fire.She walked over and opened it and found a hammer.She walked up behind the man that had forgotten she had even existed. She then lifted the hammer,sobbing.Then she brought it down several times.It all came in a rush.Her mom,the man,the blood,and the tears.The blood flew everywhere.Bodies on the floor...blood on the wall and Akira...and she was left alone with no way out...to suffer... She felt like she had done nothing wrong to deserve this.That she did not think this possible.She began to whimper like a frightened dog that had just been beaten by tis master.She was beginning to lose all sanity and all hope.The wall and she were soaked in blood.She was curled up into a small ball in that tiny little corner. Then...she began to rip and claw at herself...hair...and clothes.The blood was driving her crazy.The blood made her freak.The blood...and the fire taunting her with every flicker.Finally she couldn't take it anymore.The excitement had pushed her heart to its limits...Her heart just couldn't handle the stress.It than began to slow till it would stop.When she finally realized this was happening she reached out for her mothers hand... But she was out of time and reach.Her heart had stopped completely.The look of fear was permanently left on her face.The thing that she had wanted was never attianed...her perfect life would never exist...and when the fire had finally died out...the room was left in darkness for all eternity...
THE END
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:20 pm
Okay...(again)This is a story from my soon to be finished book "Hell's Wrath"!! biggrin Hope you enjoyed it!
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:25 pm
OMG pyro this is great round of applause You should definetly finish that book. Maybe we'll work together your choice Heaven's Gift coming Soon This story made me feel bad for the girl all alone having to watch the murder of her mother it would kill anyone to have to watch that knowing they were helpless to save them It is indeed Hell's Wrath keep it up
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 4:59 pm
Wow. that was awesome! *applauds* biggrin
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itsyourboynick Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 5:50 pm
thankz...i will try redface
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