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KannaxKirai

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:55 am


Yay!I"m finally going to post my poems up here for once so I think I'll start with my favorite and most popular one "Facade" which alot of my friends seem to like but since they're friends of course they're going to say that about any of the poems I write so I need your guy's opinions too please so comment and let me know what you think >.<

Facade
This Grin You See
Across My Face
Is Thought By Me
Horribly Misplaced
To Fit In Though
I'll Do what I Can
So This Smile Never Shows
Who I Really Am
It's Locked Away
Chained And Bound
Cloaked In Black
And Never Found
These Are The Ways
Of How I hide
My True Nature
Deep Inside

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 3:04 am


Lightning
Lightning Cracks
As Her Tears Fall
Thunder Roars
Drowning Out Her Call
The Clouds Roll In
And She's Lost It All
So As A Sign
The Lights Dull
And Illuminated In A Flash
A Hint Of Silver,Against Bare Skin
She Falls To The Floor,As Lightning Cracks Again


I actually have a better version that I"ll probably put up as well,I ended up rewriting it later during class and liked it better.Except for now I can't find it so check back and I'll have it up.

KannaxKirai


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:52 am


Very nice i like them! blaugh
PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:22 pm


Wow, those are really really good.

White Dragon Empress


Anglophilic Changeling

PostPosted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:34 am


◄ with nowhere to run ►

your friends were being honest
facade is amazing!!


◄ she'll escape the only way she can ►
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