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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:43 pm
THE ANGELIC LAMENT by me n_n I saw an angel. Dead. And all the world wondered, Why before his death, he let go his silver throat, And sang.
Of words forgotten; And yet renewed. The song called twilight still. And thou the whole world listened.
Some say he fell to lust, But how come his death note; screamed. And all the gods cried to his sonnet. No one dreamed him, for we were not blind.
Ironic, how ugly he seemed, His face twisted in pain; with tears, Oh sweet tears! That mocked our empty hearts; And in our time of remembrance, we realised.
He cried for us, and we were ashamed. It was our lose, our fault. We were the breaker of dreams; The causer of his lament.
But in all the sins, we watched; A young girl walked. Oh her parents wailed, Their regrets, on deaf ears. Like some sentence of some un-judged death.
She held a red rose, but what a gift! One petal hanged from it’s broken limbs; The sharp thorns ripping her flesh. She offered it to his lifeless form.
Landed upon his chest, the last forgotten rose. She lastly kissed his frozen brow; And cried back a song, and cried it aloud; Thou suddenly the world drew its breath for the foolish traveller.
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:47 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:48 pm
Thanks ^^ this is my favourite piece of poetry i have done so far 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:52 pm
eek wow ur good in poetry xp
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:54 pm
Carmenshadow Thanks ^^ this is my favourite piece of poetry i have done so far 3nodding i can see why its amazing
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:58 pm
^^ thanks again for the great comments mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:59 pm
Carmenshadow ^^ thanks again for the great comments mrgreen your welcome.
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