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 Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 2:07 am
I constantly write poems describing my emotions and most of the time these poems become songs I play on the guitar. Since I posted the thread I'll post something first.
The Messenger
To be aware of knowledge,
Some phobia, for thought,
Death is the teacher,
And there is pain to be taught,
A letter is carried,
Words burned into skin,
A list that holds,
All of the world’s sin,
Suffering can be taught,
Sickness can spread,
Insanity can be fought,
Or welcomed instead,
To start the plague,
And hear them cry,
Stand from above,
And let them die,
He carries the letter,
Moves to stand,
Blood of words,
Can't stain his hand,
Far down below,
See the bodies rot,
The messenger is here,
And the letter is brought twisted
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:07 am
Ok so this one's by me I originally was really mad when I wrote this I wrote this out to be a diss to somebody else. But That was a long time ago but it's poerty none the less so check it out tell me what you Think
YOU REAP WHAT YOU SEW
There once was a bum, lets call him D
He tryed to take everything,
away from me
He took my Sandwich
He took my girl
So i said ******** It
I'mma ******** up his world
I walked one day far and wide
Until I saw the same bum
he needed a ride
I'm like "what the hell can't you see I'm walking?"
But he kept on babbling
He wouldn't stop talking
I'm like don't you realize what you do?
And you sit here and wonder
Why no one likes you
Your a racist your a drunk but yet Nobody knows
You Finally take a shower
But you can't change clothes
You want what I have But you don't got what I need
You want to take her away
Sorry but you won't succeed
But the again it's all up to her
But in 10 years from now
this'll all be a blur
She won't remember that bum down the road
The boy who's supposedly loved
But that love was never showed
Even now not even a trace of him on her page
This sent the boy bum
Into a terrible terrible Rage
He started to scream He started to yell
So the neigbors called the Cops
and the bum went to jail
He got to court and the the Judge said How do you Plea?
He said I'm really sorry Judge
But I'm afraid I'm guilty
So they locked him up Now for 6 years
He constantly drops the soap
and then waits for the queers
Then one day he's on the can crappin
He's reading the paper then yells
How could this HAPPEN?!!!
What he sees is clearly all a mess
He see's his ex-girlfriend
Now in a wedding dress
But it's not him she's kissing now
It's the same boy
that had always been around
He yells NOOOOOO!!!! and then starts to cry
He has no reason to go on living
He just wants to die
But that's the reality of life You reap what you sew
What happens next you ask?....
Well I guess we'll never know
HA HA Peace:Kid Cloud out
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 3:35 pm
Vascious Shade I constantly write poems describing my emotions and most of the time these poems become songs I play on the guitar. Since I posted the thread I'll post something first. The Messenger To be aware of knowledge, Some phobia, for thought, Death is the teacher, And there is pain to be taught, A letter is carried, Words burned into skin, A list that holds, All of the world’s sin, Suffering can be taught, Sickness can spread, Insanity can be fought, Or welcomed instead, To start the plague, And hear them cry, Stand from above, And let them die, He carries the letter, Moves to stand, Blood of words, Can't stain his hand, Far down below, See the bodies rot, The messenger is here, And the letter is brought twisted thats reall godd i like it
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:06 pm
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:48 pm
I know right I try my best LOL
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:55 am
no new poems, i say these guild members r beginning to get dull, evryone was so hyped now theres no one in sight.
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:48 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:26 am
Blue_Link524 no new poems, i say these guild members r beginning to get dull, evryone was so hyped now theres no one in sight. true true I'm seeing that more and more and it's like I'm letting it get away from me but son't sweat it we got this Link
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:27 pm
Well, I wrote some poetry long time ago. It's kind of dark, so I wanted to know what the standards here are. Nothing too bad, for gaia, for it's posted on my profile, but there are some things, that, well, you know. Plus, well, I don't know. Thanks for your time.
K:razy and fun
I:s our pal, who controls this
D:efinitely, awesome, amazing, spectacular guild, where he
C:ares for us, and
L:ives with us in
O:ur hearts if
U:nimaginable compasion for he is our leader, friend, family, and
D:eath cannot even stop him.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:11 pm
Dot_Hacker429 Well, I wrote some poetry long time ago. It's kind of dark, so I wanted to know what the standards here are. Nothing too bad, for gaia, for it's posted on my profile, but there are some things, that, well, you know. Plus, well, I don't know. Thanks for your time. K:razy and fun I:s our pal, who controls this D:efinitely, awesome, amazing, spectacular guild, where he C:ares for us, and L:ives with us in O:ur hearts if U:nimaginable compasion for he is our leader, friend, family, and D:eath cannot even stop him. thats scary
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:14 pm
Great talent keep it up Hope to see more from all of you
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:22 pm
wait a second wasn't shade the one that made this thread up yet he hasn't posted back on any thread ever since? Weird
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:16 pm
all these poems are good. so now i need to try my best and write down the poems in my head, if only it was easier done than said.
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:24 pm
dragonwolf86 all these poems are good. so now i need to try my best and write down the poems in my head, if only it was easier done than said. It's really not that hard man I can write a poem of the top of y head on just about anything not everything but a lot of things. Just gotta type it as you think of it don't let it formulate in your head as you think of one then you;ll forget a line it's kind of like a response you just type what you feel onm the spur of the moment
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Infamous Captain Shunsui Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:47 pm
KidCloud2 dragonwolf86 all these poems are good. so now i need to try my best and write down the poems in my head, if only it was easier done than said. It's really not that hard man I can write a poem of the top of y head on just about anything not everything but a lot of things. Just gotta type it as you think of it don't let it formulate in your head as you think of one then you;ll forget a line it's kind of like a response you just type what you feel onm the spur of the moment
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