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 Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:28 am
I'm not sure if anyone else here writes. If you do, feel free to put up anything you might have.
This is kind of an older one, about an ex.
Steam
Let me know the memory's about to fade
Or the sky is crashing down on our heads today
With the promise of a revolution of the heart
It was ours
Breathe the ocean roaring in your lungs again
A career of making lies up at the past's expense
Operating in the secrets, you have eyes to spare
You were wrong
I won't fall
There's a stone inside of me
And as it burns
You can't help slowly turn to steam
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 4:56 pm
I'm not really good with poetry. . .
I'm not even sure this counts as poetry
I died once
a woman
brought me back to life
showed me what it means to live
the joys of being with another
...
but
...
in the end
with tears in her eyes
rolling down her face
with her own,fragile hands
she put me back to rest
...
...
love hurts
both to have, and to lost
it takes courage to keep love
keep loving, live a full happy life
never throw life or love away, never take it for granted
love can keep you living forever
in the hearts of many. . .
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I want to hold you
I'll hold you
in front of our parents
in the middle of a crowd
in the rain
on the beach
untill your embarassed
and try to push me away
but
i wont let go
not untill
you know how much i love you
till then
i'll hold you to my heart
forever
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this isn't a poem, i said this during a chat with a girl ,lol, i just thought it was good
I'm Bestforgotn
BestForgotN (11:30:41 PM): feel pretty?
Cupc4kee (11:31:33 PM): [:
BestForgotN (11:31:20 PM): or did i scare you
Cupc4kee (11:32:14 PM): no
Cupc4kee (11:32:15 PM): lol
Cupc4kee (11:32:18 PM): u never scare me
Cupc4kee (11:32:19 PM): !
Cupc4kee (11:32:21 PM): xD
BestForgotN (11:32:31 PM): well i can really make you feel special
BestForgotN (11:32:32 PM): XD
BestForgotN (11:33:34 PM): Cuz i hold feelings for you, feeling that i fear will never reach you. I am afraid it will cause me to rip myself apart from the inside out
Cupc4kee (11:35:00 PM): how do u do that?!
Cupc4kee (11:35:20 PM): your so good with words D=
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 2:15 pm
I've written poetry in my day
It helps me to throw my cares away
I write on the page, what does it say?
Poetry writing is kind of gay.
(The ending to that last poem is purely for shock value and humorous ending, I don't truly believe that.)
I've written many many many poems. A majority of them were based on love and friendship, life and loss, as it is with most poets in the world. But I like to sit down and just make up poems on the spot. I prefer to ask people "Give me a topic to write about!! Quick!" and when they give me one I write a poem right away.
Any challengers?
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:37 pm
Sir Ponderous the Sane I've written poetry in my day It helps me to throw my cares away I write on the page, what does it say? Poetry writing is kind of gay. (The ending to that last poem is purely for shock value and humorous ending, I don't truly believe that.) I've written many many many poems. A majority of them were based on love and friendship, life and loss, as it is with most poets in the world. But I like to sit down and just make up poems on the spot. I prefer to ask people "Give me a topic to write about!! Quick!" and when they give me one I write a poem right away. Any challengers? Yea, I do that same thing. . .but it's for self-pleasure. I usually think them up, but I never write them down.
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:19 am
I just did a poetry unit at school... it's really hard! I always get writer's block and find it hard to write stuff that isn't really lame. I prefer just writing I think.
Edit: I was gonna post some of the stuff I wrote for my portfolio but then I read everyone else's stuff and decided maybe not coz you're all too good! xd
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Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:11 pm
aecatgirl I just did a poetry unit at school... it's really hard! I always get writer's block and find it hard to write stuff that isn't really lame. I prefer just writing I think. Edit: I was gonna post some of the stuff I wrote for my portfolio but then I read everyone else's stuff and decided maybe not coz you're all too good! xd Now I'm curious. Maybe we can do a little workshop here eek That's one thing I miss about my creative writing class back in college... being surrounded by people who were doing the exact same thing as me, reading my work, and telling me what they thought.
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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 12:39 am
Yea it is pretty good to bounce ideas off people, especially if you're all writing about the same thing or in the same format.
My class had to put together a little portfolio on a certain topic; with an intro on why we choose the topic, a poem or series of poems about it, an analysis on another poem written on that topic, and a bunch of random other poems. Analysis is more my forte I think coz my free form doesn't flow very well and my structured work just seems too cutesy to me...
What sort of workshop??? eek
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:37 am
We Live
Happiness is good to me
A long way down and out to see
My broken dreams may never leave
But they are good enough for me to be
I have my heart, I have my sleeve
I have my hands, I have me knees
This oxygen so I can breathe
This world that crashes around me
My eye unseen
My mind's out of reach
Be still inside
This time will release
This eye of mine will never blink
These lights they shine and never think
The way to love's the way you bring
Your heart to bare and to receive
Hand of father hand of child
Skin that stretches out for miles
Under my eye for this while
The world assembles at your smile
Some days away
My shadow's gonna leave me
Sometimes I breathe
These clouds try to reach me
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:23 am
I wrote this over a year ago about a relationship I was in. Its been months since he left me, but I still love him.
Love Untouched
The shadowing pastels circle the earth in hopes of holding us close in this time of such overwhelming need.
It echoes in silence as onlookers stare in awe at its swift approach.
The cold air tearing at flesh, in pathetic attempts to deter us from such beauty that is fleeting.
Breath escapes us, in clouds of orange lit negativity, retreating to the void.
My own foggy departure is nothing more than a paling comparison to the show beheld by so many, yet interpreted by so very few.
Sharp diamonds form amongst this spectacle in attempts to join the ending recital of such a graceful performer.
Our hearts project such elegance upon broken clouds.
Forever directors in this film of undying devotion, such colors can only hope to do us justice.
We speak not a word because in such a time, silence says everything.
Two lovers watch a sunset...
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:04 pm
Sounds like a hardcore song.
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