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Lich99King

PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 12:00 pm


Name:
Saruto Ikiyuya

Age:
He appears to be 18

Appearance:
He is about 6 feet tall. he has medium black. He has dark blue eyes. He usually has his hair in his face.

About:
He is a hyperactive cluts with a split personality. When he gets pissed he changes into an extremely skilled swords man. While in his hyper form he moves extremely fast. While he is in swordsman form he moves slower but his movements are alot more careful.


past:
At the apperence of 8 he lost his father to a hollow attack. Ever since he has been an outcast. The other children mocked him because he was always falling on his face. Because of the other children's scornful mocking over time he developed another personallity. Since he developed another personallity he ended up never being mocked agin because when he got pissed he would change and kick all there asses. When he appeared to be 11 his normal side got extremely hyper. He joined a dojo so he could defend himself without having to change into his skilled side. Over time his other side got more and more violent . Now he appeares to be 18 and he is the vice captain of the 5th division.

Gear:
Saruto carries around a messenger bag that is bottomless that he recieved when he started training to become a soul reaper. He also carries around an enormus suply of food such as cookies and green tea.

Karo (MythGodLoki2 xd )- Learn how to spell!!! xd
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 3:57 pm


Er... Wait... so you actually think this is a decent profile to put in the profile section?

I'd suggest you go back and make it a bit better. Take an example to the other profiles around here. Especially Pocky's and the likes.


This is your CHARACTER'S profile. Not a thingy where you say things like 'lolol my fav character is Ishida zomglolzorz!!!11!one!'

Bacon Lord Bear

Hilarious Prophet


Loki Ragnorak God

PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:39 pm


][Axel][
Er... Wait... so you actually think this is a decent profile to put in the profile section?

I'd suggest you go back and make it a bit better. Take an example to the other profiles around here. Especially Pocky's and the likes.


This is your CHARACTER'S profile. Not a thingy where you say things like 'lolol my fav character is Ishida zomglolzorz!!!11!one!'

thats messed up dude, this is the first time he rps so give him a chance, I already talked to Samu-san stare
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:43 pm


That's EXACTLY why I'm saying he should make a better profile.

If it's his first time, and he doesn't get any critisism on how he can improve a profile, how is he ever going to know how to do it properly? If that happens he'll just turn into one of those mindless n00bs that roam Gaia.

So yeah, just look at all the other profiles, and see how they did it, then try and figure out on how to type out your character and his story in such a way.

And remember to type in third person.

Bacon Lord Bear

Hilarious Prophet


Loki Ragnorak God

PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:01 pm


][Axel][
That's EXACTLY why I'm saying he should make a better profile.

If it's his first time, and he doesn't get any critisism on how he can improve a profile, how is he ever going to know how to do it properly? If that happens he'll just turn into one of those mindless n00bs that roam Gaia.

So yeah, just look at all the other profiles, and see how they did it, then try and figure out on how to type out your character and his story in such a way.

And remember to type in third person.

ehhh got a point lol
PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 3:12 pm


Come on, it is not all bad. At least he has more details on his than I.

chaotix166

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