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 Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:48 pm
i can walk you through role playing just state name and main troulble area. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:50 pm
Um my chars name will be..... Zucanachi (came up with it off the top of my head) And my trouble area for forum RP is... everything -.- (I may be hopeless)
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:55 pm
You might want to shorten it i'll jus' call him Chi and my characters name is Abby alright lets start with the intro it should be a litttle longer than normal and describe the setting and whats going on try it i'll give an example
Abby was walking down a dark hallway with her ear sticking upwards listening for any noise around her. all she could here was the light sound of her footsteps. The young mouse slowly crept along with her bloodstained sword at hand and a shield in the other. All was silent when...
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:01 pm
(Hmmmm....)
Sitting on the roof listening to the night Chi waited for something interesting to happen when he heard a loud crack come from a room inside the building he was on. Jumping from the roof he thought.
~Whats going on now? Havent they had enough of this fighting?~
Darting through the door he saw his parents throwing pots and pans back and forth at eachother, ducking and dodging as he went he grabbed a couple of pots and pans from the floor trying to clean up the inevitable mess his parents would ask him to clean up anyway.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:08 pm
Jaywolf20000 (Hmmmm....) Sitting on the roof listening to the night Chi waited for something interesting to happen when he heard a loud crack come from a room inside the building he was on. Jumping from the roof he thought. ~Whats going on now? Havent they had enough of this fighting?~ Darting through the door he saw his parents throwing pots and pans back and forth at eachother, ducking and dodging as he went he grabbed a couple of pots and pans from the floor trying to clean up the inevitable mess his parents would ask him to clean up anyway. You were perfect until the second half. instead of going to your parents he could have heard my character walking and also italicise what your char thinks to himself or 'quote' with single quotes and when he talks use these " mrgreen "
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:10 pm
Oh ok, but I thought Id start off in seperate locations and have our characters meet somehow o.o
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:13 pm
its usually a good idea for actuall character interaction a few down the road but spotting my character builds up to that moment you see
its ok if you runs through the kitchen and out into a hallway but include everything up to the spotting in one post so just give it another go mrgreen that was really good for someone with no backround 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:15 pm
Ugh so I have to start all over again? crying
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:16 pm
no just copy what you did and coninue it mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:18 pm
But why would you, a mouse wielding a BLOODSTAINED sword be just in the hall way of my house... unless you killed someone in my house, DUUUH *hits self* Fool
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:22 pm
confused See thats where interaction comes in you may not really no why and aren't expected stare to but your character can ask whee and thats where attitude and personality come in mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:29 pm
Sitting on the roof listening to the night Chi waited for something interesting to happen when he heard a loud crack come from a room inside the building he was on. Jumping from the roof he thought.
~Whats going on now? Havent they had enough of this fighting?~
Darting through the door he saw his parents throwing pots and pans back and forth at eachother, ducking and dodging as he went he grabbed a couple of pots and pans from the floor trying to clean up the inevitable mess his parents would ask him to clean up anyway. Moments after the fight Chi cleaned up the rest of the thrown pots and pans. Once the task was completed he walked off into the hallway only to find a stranger standing there.
"Ummm... hi.... can I hel..."
After looking him over he cut off his sentence as he noticed the blood stained sword the stranger was holding. Eyeing him suspiciouslt he asked.
"What do you want?"
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:36 pm
Abby looked over at chi and noticed he was very serious "I, I need a place to rest." Her tan fur was covered in strange markings and splattered with blood. She was holding her bleeding side now and her shield had dropped onto the ground.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:42 pm
Standing there staring at Abby he asked.
"And what makes you think that I would allow you to rest in my home with blood stained fur, and a bloody sword iny our hand? You may have caused some trouble I dont want to get tied up in."
Still looking at her he sighed.
"I cannot just send you out as you are, I will mend your wound and I will allow you to rest, but oyu must be quiet, my parents arent to know that you are here, I must say I dont particularly like the look of you, you seem to be a cold blooded killer but I will help you."
After showing Abby the way to his room so she could sit on a chair he left locking the door formt he outside saying..
"This is just a precaution so you dont try anything funny"
He then walked away at a quick pace to the bathroom.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:50 pm
Abby was barely breathing (your character will be a raccoon okay) "foolish 'coon if i wanted to kill you i would have done it already." Abby stared at the wall for a moment and stood still bleeding " My name is Abby and no not of my past except for that it has been a perilous journey I shall tell you when you return."
this is good
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