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Kagepirateninja

PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:48 pm


This is only part one of the first episode soo... yeah.
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~Ouran High, My New School~ [OhHc]

“Mom, I’m home!” I yelled coming in from the backyard skateboarding on the new ramp installed. Mom was sitting in the living room watching her usual show. She turned around and smiled holding up an envelope. Please don’t let it be what I think it is, I thought.

“What is that?” Please don’t let it be.

“It’s your acceptance letter from that new school I told you about.” Darn. She stood up and walked over to me. She handed me the envelope and gestured me to open it. I sighed and ripped the side open shaking it to make the content fall out. A light tan colored paper came out. Unfolding the fancy paper it read:

Dear Chousen, Juichi & Congrats,

After reading your magnificent academic scores, we we’re more than delighted to accept you into our school. Your permanent record could be fixed but we don’t mind about that. Seeing that the money will be a problem we will allow you to attend Ouran High for 70% off and the school supplies will be supplied for you.
Come to the school the day before it starts and we’ll enroll you into our list of students. On that day you will receive your supplies, books, schedule, ID card, and uniform.
Hope to see you progress and keep your grades at high standards.
Enjoy Ouran High!

Signed by.
Principal Suoh

Oh, sorry it seems I forgot to introduce myself. I’m Chousen, Juichi. A high school freshman at the age of 11, with a high academic score allowing me to skip grades. [Rest of info in the results. Mom’s too.]

“Oh boy, I can’t wait to go.” I said sarcastically. Walking over to the basket of fruit a grabbed an apple and took a bite. Mom put her hands on her hips holding the letter in her hand.

“At least try to act excited to go.” I cracked a smile that quickly went away. Mom sighed and put a hand on my shoulder.

“I’ll tell you what. If you are able to act happy enough to go I’ll ask if you can where the boy’s uniform and wear it anyway you want.” She smiled brightly and I grinned wildly.

“Okay!” She got me there. Well it won’t be that bad.

FF *Day Before First Day*

“Smile.” The cameraman said. I put on my best smile with the peace sign I made at the last second. The guy didn’t really care and gave me the finish product. My ID Card had my full name, age, and gender. I got my books and supplies which were put into my black messenger bag and I received my schedule. I got my uniform, while mom talked the principal into allowing me to wear the boy’s uniform with my own style. Turned out that, Mr. Suoh was a cool guy and said ‘yes’.

“Are you ready for your first day tomorrow?” Mom asked while driving back home. I shrugged and put a ‘Fall Out Boy’ CD into the player and played ‘Thanks For The Memories’.

“Yeah, I guess I’m ready for the first day. I just wonder if the students there will be able to understand why I’m there.” I tapped my foot to the beat of the song. I guess you can say I’m kind of bored of the idea of transferring me to a new school. It’s like the others; boring and easy. No one there will understand why I work so hard to have my grades at a very high level, just like the rest of the schools. Turns out I was way wrong about that.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:02 am


Mind if I beta? ^_^

Kagepirateninja
This is only part one of the first episode soo... yeah.
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~Ouran High, My New School~ [OhHc]

“Mom, I’m home!” I yelled coming in from the backyard skateboarding on the new ramp installed. Mom was sitting in the living room watching her usual show. She turned around and smiled, holding up an envelope. Please don’t let it be what I think it is, I thought.

“What is that?” Please don’t let it be.

“It’s your acceptance letter from that new school I told you about.” Darn. She stood up and walked over to me. She handed me the envelope and gestured me to open it. I sighed and ripped the side open shaking it to make the content fall out. A light tan colored paper came out. Unfolding the fancy paper it read:

Dear Chousen Juichi & Congrats,

After reading your magnificent academic scores, we we’re more than delighted to accept you into our school. Your permanent record could be fixed but we don’t mind about that. Seeing that the money will be a problem we will allow you to attend Ouran High for 70% off and the school supplies will be supplied for you.
Come to the school the day before it starts and we’ll enroll you into our list of students. On that day you will receive your supplies, books, schedule, ID card, and uniform.
Hope to see you progress and keep your grades at high standards.
Enjoy Ouran High!

Signed by.
Principal Suoh

Oh, sorry it seems I forgot to introduce myself. I’m Chousen Juichi. A high school freshman at the age of 11, with a high academic score allowing me to skip grades. [Rest of info in the results. Mom’s too.] [What does that mean?]

“Oh boy, I can’t wait to go,” I said sarcastically. Walking over to the basket of fruit I grabbed an apple and took a bite. Mom put her hands on her hips, holding the letter in her hand.

"At least try to act excited to go.” I cracked a smile that quickly went away. Mom sighed and put a hand on my shoulder.

“I’ll tell you what. If you are able to act happy enough to go I’ll ask if you can where the boy’s uniform and wear it anyway you want.” [This is confusing. If she's trying to bribe Juichi by asking if s/he can wear the boys uniform, that would lead the readers to believe the MC is a girl, since why wouldn't a boy wear the boys uniform? If you're charaater is male you could simply write, ". . . I'll ask if you can wear your uniform any way you want."] She smiled brightly and I grinned wildly.

“Okay!” She got me there. Well, it won’t be that bad.

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“Smile,the cameraman said. I put on my best smile with the peace sign I made at the last second. The guy didn’t really care and gave me the finish product. My ID Card had my full name, age, and gender. I got my books and supplies which were put into my black messenger bag and I received my schedule. I got my uniform, while mom talked the principal into allowing me to wear the boy’s uniform with my own style. Turned out that Mr. Suoh was a cool guy and said ‘yes’.

“Are you ready for your first day tomorrow?” Mom asked while driving back home. I shrugged and put a ‘Fall Out Boy’ CD into the player and played ‘Thanks For The Memories’.

“Yeah, I guess I’m ready for the first day [That just seems a little repetitive.]. I just wonder if the students there will be able to understand why I’m there.” I tapped my foot to the beat of the song. I guess you can say I was kind of bored of the idea of transferring to a new school. It’s probably like the others; boring and easy. No one there will understand why I work so hard to have my grades at a very high level, just like the rest of the schools. Turns out I was way wrong about that.


Done!

I really like the storyline. Your OC kind of reminds me of Toshiro Hitsugaya ^.^

Your Ophelia


Kagepirateninja

PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 3:22 pm


um... the character in the story ..... well let me just post more of the story.

Part 2 --> There is alot of parts in episode one so yeah..
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~An Unexpected Meeting~

6:00AM. that’s what my clock read when I woke up that morning. First day of school, yippee. I went to the bathroom and took a cold shower to feel refresh for the day. I brushed my teeth and I changed into my uniform but with the cuffs rolled up. The tie wasn’t plain black but striped with purple and black, my pants were now plaited short that are purple and black and go a little past the knees, and the shoes were now my white skulled converse. I combed my black red dyed, chin length hair and put on my cross independent necklace. I looked at my reflection and took a deep breath. I grabbed my messenger bag filled it with the books and supplies including my notebook and painting/sketch kit. I ran downstairs while my mom was cooking eggs. She turned to look at me and smiled.

“Good morning Juichi.” She brought the now finished eggs and slid them onto a plate. I smiled back and sat down. Mom made herself some coffee as I stuffed my face with her delicious sunny-side-up eggs. You really need to try them, it’s almost like heaven! When I finished it was 7:17am. Man did time fly. I put my plate into the sink and headed for the door having my bag with me already.

“I’m leaving for school mom! See ya later!” I said to her after opening the door.

“Have a good first day of school!” She said smiling than starting to wash the dishes. I smiled back and I shut the door, locked it, and grabbed my skateboard. Of course I wore a helmet I’m not that crazy. When I got to school some students were already there chatting with their friends or walking down the halls. Limos were parked here and there and some were leaving the campus. Oh, so this is a rich school for rich kids. Crap. I took off my helmet and tucked my skateboard under my arm. While I walked down the halls some students eyed me. Girls were looking at me like I was a famous rock star and the guys looked at me as if I was a punk. Some thought it was strange to see a middle school kid in a high school uniform. Sigh, eh, who cares what they think. I walked into my class and no one was inside, besides the teacher. He saw me and smiled.

“So you are the new student correct?” he asked while adjusting his glasses into place. I nodded.

“I see. Well choose a seat I will introduce you to the class when they all get here.” He turned back to what he was doing and I went to a desk in the corner. I put my stuff down next to my new desk and I stared out the window towards the clouds. So free, I wish I were you. You get to just roll across the sky with no worries at all and just be free. I heard commotion towards the door and looked there with only my eyes and saw the class coming in. Humph, more, older kids to wonder why I’m here.

“Excuse me.” I turned my head to see a…..girl? Well this dude looked like one. What kind of guy has big cute eyes, a petite figure and manners?

“You need something?” I said bluntly. “He” smiled at me and nodded.

“I’m Fujioka, Haruhi. Do you mind if I sat next to you?” I turned my head back to the window and nodded.

“Chousen, Juichi.” He nodded back at me. He sat down and read his textbook. A bookworm he somewhat seemed the type. Then, more noise came but the noise was from squealing girls. Once again I turned to look and was surprise to see two boys, more like twins, around Haruhi. The twins had one arms around Haruhi’s shoulders. What came next was weird. The twins let go of Haruhi and hugged each other tightly. One of them had a hand holding the others chin and tilting it upward. Do you follow? Yaoi, woah. I need to get this sketched. If you must know I’m somewhat a fan of yaoi but not a screaming fan. I took out my notebook and pencil and drew a rough sketch of the twin moment. When I was finished I proudly smiled at my work.

“Not bad I must say.” A voice said.
“I agree.” Said another. I felt a breath on my neck. I turned around to see the twins looking at me with a surprised look.

“He has a cute face, he should-” one started.
“-join our club.” The other finished.

“His name is-” Haruhi started but was interrupted by the teacher.
“Class, take your seats.” The students did but continued their conversation in whisper. “We have a new student who just transferred here. Please come up to the front of the class.” Here we go. I stood up and made my way to the front. While the teacher was writing my name on the board I listened to the students I passed by. Some said, “He looks young but cute.” Or “I wish I new his phone number.” Or “He should join the Host Club.” Host club?? I put that thought aside and stood at the front facing the class.

“Class, I’d like you to meet Chousen, Juichi. He will be joining us here at this school for the rest of the high school year. I hope you all will become good friends with him. You may take your seat Mr. Chousen.” Teacher said. I nodded and went back to my seat. I didn’t pay attention in class but got the answer right when the teacher called on me. The homework seemed way too easy. After the teacher excused the class all the girls crowded around my desk asking for my number, address, birthday, etc. I ignored as usual and got out the crowd with my skateboard, bag and helmet. I just want to be alone, I thought. Isn’t there a single place where I can be alone? Every library or classroom I went into there was chatter and other girls.

“Juichi!” I turned around to see Haruhi.

“Haruhi, What do you want?” He was about to say something but two arms grabbed my arms. What the?

“Capture accomplished!” Said two voices. It’s the twins, crap.

“Hikaru! Kaoru! Let go of Juichi!” Haruhi yelled at them.

“Sorry. But Milord told us-”
“-to bring him to the club.” The twins say after each other. Haruhi sighed and nodded. I looked at him with a ‘why-didn’t-you-save-me?’ look. Kaoru and Hikaru dragged me to this random room called something, I forget the name. Then I read the sign. ‘Third Music Room’ it read. Ok so it's a music room. What does this have to do with anything?

“What is this?” I say outloud.

“You’ll see.” The twins say. Haruhi smiled a reassuring smile. I opened the door and a bright light shined in my eyes while rose petals flew into my face and the fragrance of flowers filled my nostrils. When all that subsided I saw four figures in the room. A tall blonde with purple eyes, a dark haired boy with glasses and notebook, a short blonde with big brown eyes holding a bunny, and a tall dark haired boy with a dull yet soft gaze. The last two look oddly familiar.

“What took you so long?! Father was getting worried for his dear little Haruhi!!” The tall blonde lunged at Haruhi to hug him?... when he was stop by me staring with a puzzled look.

“Is this boy him? He looks strange. He even destroyed the school uniform!” He put a hand under his chin while walking around me. “He’s short too. How old are you?” The question was referred to me. I was about to answer but the guy with the glasses answered for me.

“He is 11-years-old. Apparently he was able to skip a grade or two.” He gave a scary smile while adjusting his glasses. “His name is Chousen, Juichi.” Soon I see the short blonde run up to me and hug me.

“Waiii~ It’s Ju-chan!! Takashi do you remember Ju-chan?” The blonde asked turning to his tall friend.

“Yeah.” He said. I was now officially confused and so were the others. I pushed the blonde gently away and backed up. Although hearing the name Ju-chan had rung a bell in my head.

“Wait a minute here. I don’t know what you’re talking about. I don’t know who all of you are or what this place is.” The blonde boy went back to the tall dark haired boy with a sad face on.

“Well, this is the host club. Where handsome men care to beautiful ladies who have time on there hands to come visit when they are stressed.” Said the tall blonde. “And I am the King, Suoh Tamaki.” Suoh? The principal’s son? Dang it!!

“These are the other members, Ootori Kyouya,” Glasses guy ”Hitachiin Hikaru and Kaoru,” The twins “Fujioka Haruhi,” I knew him already “And Haninozuka Mitsukuni aka Hunny” blonde boy “with his cousin Morinozuka Takashi aka Mori.” the tall guy. Wait did he say Mitsukuni and Takashi?

“Mitsukuni? Takashi? Is that really you two?” I say with a surprise tone. Hunny smiled big and Takashi made a small smile.

“Yup!! You do remember Ju-chan!!” Hunny exclaimed. The rest of the club was confused and shocked as well.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:39 pm


~Surprise!! Or Not…~

“Wait!! How does Hunny-sempai and Mori-sempai know this commoner boy?” Tamaki asked totally confused. Commoner? I thought.

“Well actually,” I started then the rest of the club members gathered around me wanting to know. I sweat dropped and began.

“It was about 1 or 2 years ago. I entered an International Martial Arts Tournament. It was my first time and I was really excited. Every other kid was either older and or richer than me. I got to the semi-finals and that’s when I fought Hunny-san.” I was interrupted by Haruhi.

“You fought Hunny-sempai in a tournament?” I nodded and continued.

“I came so close to beating him but was caught off guard and lost. I watched both Mori-san and Hunny-san’s fight in the tournament. Mori-san won first place in Judo and Hunny-san won first in Martial Arts. I was really surprised. I met up with them after the tournament and asked if I could hang out with them. Yes was the answer so I did and became friends.” Hikaru and Kaoru clapped along with Tamaki after the story was finished.

“Wow, Juichi. You almost beat Hunny-sempai in a fight.” Haruhi said awed. Hunny jumped on my back and smiled big.

[a light bulb turned on and blinked]

“Ya~ Ju-chan was hard to beat! Ne, Takashi?” Mori nodded in agreement. “Ju-chan come and eat cake with me and my Usa-chan!” Hunny said. I nodded and thought, it’s hard to believe that this elementary school look a like junior was able to beat a big guy up. I was about to go to the table with Hunny but was held back by the twins.

“Wait! Why don’t you-” Hikaru started.
“-Join our club??” Kaoru ended. I looked puzzled but pushed them off.

“Look, I don’t want to join. There is no point of me being here. I could come visit once and while but not join!” I was angry I didn’t want to join this club of theirs. What’s the point? I’m just wasting my time. When I turned around to walk away I bumped into a beautiful aqua, red, yellow, green vase. My eyes went wide in shocked and I tried to make a grab for it and I caught it. I sighed in relief. I felt two arms on my shoulders.

“Nice save Juichi-kun!” Kaoru said.
“Yeah. If you didn’t catch it would be Haruhi paying off dept all over again.” Hikaru said. I looked at them quizzically. I was about to put the vase back when someone pushed me and the vase went flying through the air and crashed on to the ground. I was shocked then turned around anger in my eyes to see who pushed me. It was Tamaki, unfortunately he was pushed by Haruhi who wanted Tamaki to stop hugging him.

“It was an accident Juichi-kun. Please forgive me.” Tamaki held his hands up in defense afraid I was going to lunge at him. I stepped towards him and he quickly hid behind Kyouya with anime tears in his eyes. I huffed and dusted my shoulders off. I turned back towards the broken vase and bent down to pick it up.

“So how much is this thing?” I asked. Kyouya smiled.

“About, eight million Yen.” He said coolly seeming to enjoy the new payment. My eye twitched at hearing the number.

“E-Eight million y-yen?” I asked. He nodded and I turned cold.

“So I guess you have no other choice but to stay.” Kaoru and Hikaru say together. “Milord, what will be his punishment?” They asked ‘The King’. I stood up and turned to the now sitting Tamaki. He pointed a finger at me.

“Have you ever heard of the saying, ’When in Rome do as the Romans do?’ Chousen-kun?” I didn’t like the sound of this. “You will now work for the Host Club as our dog to pay off this huge dept!” He exclaimed. I raised an eyebrow and looked at everyone and sighed.

“Fine.” Was all I said. I got out a piece of transparent paper and laid it on the ground next to the broken pieces. I got out my super glue and rubber gloves. I pieced the glass together not to make a vase but something else.
“Oi, Juichi-kun. What are you doing?” Hikaru asked bending over to watch as did Kaoru. I finished my project and stood up going towards the window. Everyone watched as I place my project against a clear window. When I stepped back, the picture could be seen clearly. The light was coming through slits in the glass showing off a picture of a rose. Everyone, except Hunny and Mori, were stunned at the beauty of my work. I walk towards them all and put my hands into my pockets.

“So, what do you want me to do first?” I asked in a bored tone. Let me tell ya this was a weird first day and it gets weirder.

“Hm… we’re running low on coffee so, Chousen-kun! Go to the commoner store and buy us coffee.” Tamaki said. “Our customers will be here soon so hurry.” Kyouya handed me a credit card for me to use. So I ran to the store and bought the coffee and a box of cookies for myself and ran back to the school. When I entered I heard a girl say, “Tamaki-san, I heard you brought in a stray cat again.” Stray cat? Then Tamaki replied back saying, “He isn’t really a stray cat he is more like a--” When he saw me he smiled wide and motioned me over saying, ”Speak of the devil. Oi~ little pooch come over here. Did you buy what I asked for?” What is with them and calling me random names?

“Yeah I did.” I answered. He took the bag and took out the contents and stopped after picking up the box of cookies.

“What is this?” He asked shaking the box. I grabbed it from his hands and put it in my back pack.

“Those are my cookies that I bought with my own money.” I went over to Kyouya and gave back his card. I was going back to my little spot near the window until I heard Tamaki’s voice again.

“Juichi-kun, do you mind making us some commoner coffee?” I shrugged and boiled the water and poured it into five cups. Then, I poured the coffee powder and stirred it until it smelled nice and less lumpy. I went over to Tamaki’s table with the tray of coffee in my hands and set it down on the table.

“Tamaki-san, would you like sugar in your coffee?” He replied yes. “How many teaspoons?” He told me to put two teaspoons and I did. I asked the girls the same questions and held the tray under my arm. I went to each table and asked if they want coffee or not. When I returned to Tamaki’s table I looked at them sipping their coffee.

“Are you enjoying your coffee?” I asked sweetly. This is so not my thing.

“Yes. The coffee you brewed is delicious. You’re a good waiter too. Cute to boot!” A girl said. I smiled and said thank you which made sparkles around my face which was weird. Tamaki went wide-eyed and hugged me really tight spinning me around.

“That was so cute Juichi-kun! That was good! Good, Very Good!” he yelled excitedly and overjoyed. I saw Takashi-san walk by so I cried out to him.

“Takashi-san! Please, Help me!” Then Takashi-san went wide-eyed, which scared me, and picked me up from out of Tamaki’s arms and held me in one arm while smiling a little bit.

[a second light bulb turned on and blinked]

Tamaki was upset and tried to make Takashi-san put me down.

“Mori-sempai, you didn’t have to do that.” He said.

“Juichi needed help.” Takashi-san replied.

“Okay now come back into daddy’s arms.” Tamaki said and I just shook my head. I got out of Takashi-san’s grasp and went to go sit with Hunny-san.

“Ju-chan! Do you want to eat cake? I have lots for you to try.” He asked in a cute way. Takashi-san was now sitting at the table too. I shook my head and took out my box of cookies.

“It’s okay Hunny-san. I already have my cookies.” I took a bite out of a cookie and when I finished it, it left crumbs on my face.
“Juichi.” I heard Takashi-san call out. The next thing I knew he wiped the crumbs off my face with a napkin. “There’s crumbs.” He said. I smiled at him.

“I could have wiped them but thanks.” The girls around us were giggling and swooned over it. A girl said, “Juichi-kun should really join the Host Club as a Host.” Tamaki’s eyes widened and he snapped his fingers.

“Hikaru, Kaoru!” He said. Hikaru and Kaoru came and saluted him. Haruhi sighed and I stood there confused. All of a sudden I felt two hands grab my arms. I was brought by the twins to the back in a changing room. They held up a clean new uniform un-tampered with.

“Put this on!” they say. I shook my head and they jumped towards me saying, “Put it on!” After a lot of struggle I decided to put it on.

“All right, I will! Just get out and let me change!” I pushed them out and they skipped on one foot trying not to fall forward. When they came to a halt they looked at each other.

[two more light bulbs came on and blinked]

“Kyouya call a hairstylist, Mori-sempai go to the nurse and ask for a roll of clothe bandage. Haruhi, go check on Juichi.” Hunny popped up infront of Tamaki.

“Tama-chan, what do you want me to do?” He asked cutely and Tamaki told him to just eat the cake. Then Hunny became sad.

“Ne, Usa-chan. I realized that Tama-chan gave everyone else a useful job.” Hunny-san said. Oh boy what do they want me to do?

“Juichi-kun, are you ready yet?” I heard Haruhi’s voice. I sighed.

“No.” I say bluntly. I put on the neat uniform on and shoes. I wondered what the bandages were for so I just wrapped them around my wrists. I unbuttoned the sleeves. Loosening the tie and opening the jacket was all that was left. My hair was now a lot spikier at the back and some of bangs were covering my face. There all done.
“Oi~ Juichi-kun! Are you done yet?” Tamaki asked me.

“Yeah, I am. Although is it really okay for me to take all this stuff?” I asked them back not wanting to pay a larger debt. I opened the curtains to see them looking at me in a happy expression.

“Wai~! Ju-chan looks cool!” I heard Hunny-san say.
“Yeah.” Takashi-san said.
“Who knew he was so handsome.” The twins say. Haruhi was blushing towards me, which was strange.

[a light bulb came on and blinked]

Kyouya pushed up his glasses and smiled that scary smile.
“We can make a profit off him.” He said. Money, it’s always money.
“Juichi-kun you look like a girl in that uniform, it’s so cute! <3” Tamaki said about to hug me. I stepped towards the side and let him fall.

“So why did you make me wear all this?” I asked really not catching on. Everyone smiled except for Takashi-san. Tamaki pointed towards me.

“You have graduated from your trivial chores and will now serve as a host to pay off you large debt.” He said. -_- oh jeez. I sighed once again and put on a proud grin.

“Okay then. This might be fun.” I snickered and went out of the room followed by the others. I sat at a table and saw three girls sit there with me.

“Juichi-kun, your hair color is so cool, how did you dye it?” one girl asked me.
“Your skin looks smooth, how do you take care of it like that?” asked another one.
“Are you starting off well in your new school?” asked the other one. Man, I’m trying my best but this is so hard. It was hard for me to produce a smile because of the questions and the looks on their faces.

“Why did you join the Host Club Juichi-kun?” they all asked together. My eyes widened and I looked down for a moment. Oh, right. Why did I join? I have to remember that I have to get these girls to designate me more often to pay off my debt. I smiled sadly at them when I looked up.

“Well, you see...” At the other tables where Tamaki was sitting at he was watching me to see if I did it right. Most of the hosts were there.

“He’s not--” Hikaru started.
“—half bad.” Koaru ended.

“Oh my.” Said a girl at my table.
“So your brother went missing after your father’s death?” The girl next to her asked. I nodded.

“My mother and I are all we have left. Mother is working two jobs so I try to keep my part too. I help her cook, clean, do the laundry. I even took over my Father’s place for fixing anything that was broken. I really miss them both. Doing everything that my father does and thinking of my brother just reminds me of when I was little and we played together. Remembering those times just makes me really glad.” I smiled softly while sparkles danced around my face and that got them. The three girls were blushing and hearts were over their heads.

“Um… Juichi-kun… Do you mind if we designate you tomorrow?” A girl asked me and smiled wide.

“Yes, please. That would really help me a lot. Thanks!” I grinned a casual grin which swooned the girls. After a few minutes talking I took a break. I looked over at the others and saw them do what they do best. My interest caught Kyouya. He was fiddling around with his notebook. Man I really want to see what’s inside that thing! I thought. A mischievous smile came across my face and slowly made my way towards Kyouya. When I was right by him I tried to take a peek but he closed the book shut which freaked me out.

“What are you doing?” he asked me. I crossed my arms. I answered back not really looking at him, “Nothing really.” My interest caught something else. Tamaki was complimenting a girl and saying cheesy lines and the girls fell for them! How do they fall for that? Jeez…

“As you can see, Tamaki is our most favorite host.” Kyouya said out of the blue. I looked back at him in curiosity. “We based our host with types.”

“Types?” he nodded. “What do you mean by types?” I asked. He smiled.

“Types are what we based on the host’s characteristics and personality.” He explained. “Tamaki is the Prince Type. Hikaru and Koaru are the Little Devil Types. Hunny-sempai is the Loli-shota Type. Mori-sempai is the Wild Type. I am the Cool Type. And Haruhi is the Natural Type.” I waited a moment for it all to sink into my memory bank. I nodded.

“I see.” He nodded and turned to look back at the host. I looked at him and smiled. “Well, I don’t have a type. So how about I be the…… Talented Type!” He looked at me with interest then sighed and smiled.

[A light bulb turned on and blinked]

He jotted something down on his handy-dandy notebook and shut it closed again.

“Alright. You are the Talented Type. But why call yourself the Talented Type?” I smiled.

“’Cause, I’m really good at art as you can see and I have many other talents.” I looked towards the ‘Rose of Light’ as I named my art work sitting on the window sill.

“I see.” He looked at his watch. “It’s almost time to close up and go to class.” I sighed in relief.

“Finally! So do we come back or anything?” He just nodded and walked away. I frowned but came to my composure. I said goodbye to everyone and went to class. Class was boring and I slept through it but the teacher didn’t catch me. The bell woke me up and I went on my lunch break. I didn’t really have a lunch besides my cookies so I sat in the backyard near a fountain. Boy, what a day, I thought. First meeting my old friends, then paying off a dept, now I’m in the Host Club jeez talk about a hard rock day.

[That really didn’t make sense]

All of a sudden, a shadow casts over me. I turn around to see three punks, like wannabe punks.

“You’re the new kid aren’t ya?” One said. “You think you’re better than us just ‘cause your younger and smarter?” I cocked and eyebrow at them. What are they talking about?

“Look kid,” The ‘Leader’ said. “we ain’t gonna hurt ya alright, unless you confess that we are superior than you in brains, bronze, and looks.” He made a stupid smirk and I countered it with my own smirk.

“Like I’ll ever bow down to idiots like you.” One of them got pissed off and lifted me off the ground by the shirt.

“You want to get hurt kid? Huh, do ya?” He threatened me. I frowned and punched him in the face. He fell back holding a bloody nose. I snickered when he stood with another pissed off look of his. “Why you little--” he was about to charge at me but the leader dude put his hand in front of him. He smirked at me.

“You got spunk kid. But to bad for you, we’re going to use plan B.” The other two smirked as well. Plan B? What the crap? I thought to myself. All of a sudden the other two grabbed my arms tightly so I wouldn’t get away.

“What are you doing?!” I asked shocked at their move. The leader punched me in the stomach which had a big effect on me. I coughed really hard and looked at the leader. He smirked and leaned over to my level.

“I’m going to give you hell.” He said. He started to punch my face like about 20 times. It didn’t stop until I coughed up blood. Once that happened they let me go and laughed at me. They kicked me into the fountain and left laughing. I dragged myself back to land and coughed real hard. My throat burned and blood came out. I wiped all the blood off and went to look what my face looked like in the water. The reflection showed a cut on the left eyebrow, a bruised right cheek, the left side of the jaw was bruised and the side of the right eye was bruised too. I frowned at my reflection and took out the hat in my backpack to cover my face from anyone. I sighed and stood up painfully since my stomach still hurt. I grabbed my bag and walked towards the Host Club.

Kagepirateninja


Kagepirateninja

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:40 pm


~Hello Doctor, Goodbye Pain~

When I entered I was late by 5 minutes. Everyone turned toward my direction and was shocked at my damp clothing. Hunny-san came up to me with a worried look as did the others.

“Ju-chan! Are you okay? What happened?” Hunny-san said. I was given a towel by Takashi-san. I wrapped it around my neck and took off my bag. I walked away from them saying, “I-I’m fine, really.” Crap, it’s even hard to talk. Then I felt dizzy and wobbly. The next thing I knew, I was falling. I braced for the impact of the floor but it never came, then I blacked out.

{Narrator’s POV}

Mori caught Juichi when ‘he’ fell unconscious. Everyone was shocked and ran towards Juichi who was placed on the couch. The girls in the club were worried but were kindly asked to leave the club. Haruhi was near Juichi and took off his hat and gasped. His face was bloodied and bruised. When the rest saw his face, anger and sadness filled their eyes.

“Who would dare hurt a student?!” Tamaki exclaimed. Haruhi kneeled down next to Juichi and wiped his face with the towel. Kyoya was on his phone calling one of his doctors to get to the school and take care of the problem.

“Poor Ju-chan…” Hunny sobbed while holding Juichi’s damp, cold hand. Hikaru and Kaoru had anger on their faces but their eyes showed worry. Mori, as usual, had know expression on his face but his eyes also showed worry. After awhile the doctor came and shooed everyone out of the room for her to inspect the problem. Everyone sat outside the room in silence.

{Juichi’s POV}

I opened my eyes from hearing a door shut. I wondered where I was until I realized I was at school in the Host Club. I tried to sit up but my stomach ached and I winced at the pain.

“You shouldn’t try to get up.” Someone said. I turned my head to see a woman in a white coat walking up to me. She sat in the chair that was placed next to the couch I was on.

“Who are you?” I asked, my voice sounding rough. She smiled at me.

“I’m the doctor that is going to take care of you. So please don’t talk and remove your jacket so I can listen to your heart beat.” I nodded and removed my jacket. The under shirt was sticking to my skin, so it showed my body’s figure. She placed the stethoscope over the place my heart should be and listened. She took it off and looked at my face. I felt uncomfortable so I shifted my weight on the couch. She grinned at me and took out some bandages. She bandaged all my wounds and bruises.

“Will you please lift up your shirt so I can see if the people bruised your stomach?” I did as told and lifted my shirt. She touched what seemed to be a bruise and I winced. She sighed and wrapped a clothe around my stomach area after putting medicine on it. She stood up and grinned.

“There all better. You should go change so you won’t catch a cold.” She handed me a bag with clothes in it. I already had clothes but I didn’t want to turn it away so I took it and smiled in thanks. She smiled back.

“Y’know, you’re way to cute to be a guy.” I went wide eyed and put a finger to my lips.

“Please, don’t tell the others. They haven’t found out yet.” She nodded and made a gesture as if she was zipping her lips.

“My lips are sealed.” She said and walked towards the door. I went to the changing room in the back and stripped my clothing off. My undergarments weren’t soaked so bad so I kept them on and wiped myself dry.

{Narrator’s POV}

As the doctor came out of the Third Music Room the host club stood and went towards her. They attacked her with waves of questions about Juichi. She grinned and raised her hand.
“He’ll be fine. He’s changing right now. His injuries aren’t that bad except for the one on his stomach, so be careful around him. He’ll be fully healed in a few days. See you later!” The doctor left and Host Club became relaxed and ran into the changing room.

{Juichi’s POV}

I was in my shorts when I heard running. The curtains opened and I turned to see who it was.

“Juichi! Are you al-” it was Tamaki. He stopped talking when he saw me in a bra and shorts on. He let go of the curtain and it fell closing the curtain.

[The last light bulb turned on and blinked][All seven light bulbs blink and created ‘girl?’ in Kanji]

“Juichi, you’re a girl?” Tamaki asked looking at your ID card.

“Biologically speaking, yes I am.” I said back. I opened the curtains to reveal me wearing the Middle School girl uniform. I was wearing a blue hair pin on the right side of my hair. Tamaki screamed sort of and rubbed his head making a weird face.

“I didn’t really mind all of you thinking I was a guy, even though I’ve been mistaken as one many times. It seem like my awareness for genders is lower than that of a normal person.” I said while fixing my bow and dusting off my skirt. After doing all that I held my hands together on my front side.

“This is quite a very interesting turn of events.” Kyouya said.
“Yeah.” The twin say at the same time looking at each other. Tamaki was still in a state of shock. Haruhi smiled wearing a sweatdrop.
“This is just like what happened to me.” She said. I finally found out her actual gender. Yes!!

“But you know Tamaki, you acted pretty cool!” I said making a really cute smile. Tamaki was surprised then his face flushed and he put his hand to his mouth as he backed away still looking at me. Kyouya looked like he turned to an audience and said, “Maybe this is kind of a start towards a crush.”

“But it’s really not that boring sitting around with a bunch of girls and listen to their chit-chat.” I said watching all the Host and Haruhi crowd around me and then I turn around when I hear Tamaki feeling shocked of what I said.

“I’ve got it!” I said slapping a fist into my other hand. “Maybe I should be more impolite from now on.” I suggested then giggled which turned into a laugh. I think I’m going to like school after all. Dad, you should be here to see all of this. I thought to myself. And from then on, they were like my new family. Although I wouldn’t realize all of the strange events I’d get myself into for joining this strange Host club. Only time will tell. Or so they say.
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