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 Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 9:07 pm
I've decided... I will post some of my poetry.
this first one I get called a fruit for ... alot.
But it's my fav poem i've ever written.
it's about what I think a mans real needs/wants are.
It's called, Wild at Heart.
Wild at Heart
I search all through the forest
I search across the sea.
I trek across the mountains,
Go as far as the eye can see.
My heart longs for the epic battle,
My heart longs for the beauty fair.
My heart longs for an adventure,
The wind whipping in my hair.
I want to go out and find myself,
I want to go around...be me.
I want to let go of the reins,
Let my heart go...be free.
I put on my armor, pull out my sword,
To save her from the dragon.
I pull out my gun, get on my horse,
Go west with my wife and wagon.
You cannot tame a wild heart,
It will go do whatever it wants.
All you have to do is let it go,
Not care about everyones taunts.
In conclusion to my poem
This is what I tell all of you who dare.
Go get your big adventure.
Your battle, and your beauty fair!
If you like that one, I can post more. ^_^
I lost most of my writing when my comp went down. But I have a few.
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 10:12 pm
One) I don't think you're a fruit. Guys that write/do/whatever things like that are probably the better half of the male gender.
Two) That was an awesome poem!! I hate critiquing poems because they're from the heart. No one can put a 0-10 rating on them... But it was incredible all the same!!
Three) Put more!! lol
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SoonLovesEnough Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 8:25 pm
Lol. I think you're the only other person who reads these forums. So you can just read my journal instead and it will work out. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 8:29 am
hahahahaha! Yeah. I need to do a lot of inviting... heh...
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SoonLovesEnough Vice Captain
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