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 Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 4:45 pm
Post all of your complaints on someone's profile here.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 9:51 pm
To be honest I find Samusens Ban kai very much godmoding... I mean come on. Wherever you strike can also affect the heart? Thats like saying "haha you only pricked my toe. but oh s**t! My heart stops, I'm dead"
I think you could change that
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 3:19 pm
Little Kitty Yoruichi To be honest I find Samusens Ban kai very much godmoding... I mean come on. Wherever you strike can also affect the heart? Thats like saying "haha you only pricked my toe. but oh s**t! My heart stops, I'm dead"
I think you could change that Urg....I was claimed to godmod too and I had to change my completely crying
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 3:27 pm
Sorry, I must have not made it clear enough [like Ivyn told me.]
Well I can't actuly even stop someone's heat, I can change the rate at which it beats, and it says that I can transfer some, only some, of my power to anoter part of your body, and depending on where I hit you I can only transfer it so far and maintain that ability. Do you still think that it's god mod? If so then I'll change it again.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 3:48 pm
Please explain the extent, if only for future referance. If you hit someone's toe, for instance, what is the absolute maximum distance the power can go?
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 4:12 pm
To the brain, but the most it could do by travling that far would be to make you feel slightly depresed or a little happy...
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 4:29 pm
Alright, thanks, just wanted to know an example of how powerful the ability could be when going the maximum distance. Thanks smile
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 4:50 pm
It's power decreases A LOT when it has to travle more then a few inches.
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:45 pm
I'd have to say to Markenus a good job to editing his profile, however I would like to see a improvement of writing... it looks like it's a single sentince.
Maybe the use of paragraphs would be better, to signify as to where a new part starts instead of writing one long sentince?
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:46 am
I wanted to get all the writing in first before I started looking for other problems, such as if it is in paragraph form or if I put all my commas in the right place. Mostly I did that to prioritize, figuring that it was better to get all the writing in first, then go back to edit any other errors it may have later. But...If everyone is having trouble reading it I'll put in paragraphs earlier than intended to make it easier for everyone. wink
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 12:15 pm
][Axel][ I'd have to say to Markenus a good job to editing his profile, however I would like to see a improvement of writing... it looks like it's a single sentince.
Maybe the use of paragraphs would be better, to signify as to where a new part starts instead of writing one long sentince? For one its a rather idoitic thing even to suggest this right now as he is not even finished with his profile to begin with. I mean worrying about paragraphing when the imaginative idea's are not all done would be the biggest folly anyone could do. After ALL of the idea's are down prehaps your little 'editations' are good but right now I think it is rather irrelevant as for one he's not even done, secondely its really none of anyone's buisness how they set up there profile as long as it has all the information and it is grammically okay. Things such as paragraphing should not be anyone's priority including you Axel.
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 3:51 pm
I never stated such a thing was my Priority, IKilled.
After all, How am I supposed to know his profile wasn't finished yet? Am I supposed to smell it? Or read his mind?
He posted up his profile. NO-WHERE in the profile stated it was a work in progress, so I thought it was the finished version, hence I commented on seperating it in Paragraphs so it would be easier to read.
Plus, I don't really see a reason for you to comment on this at all, when Markenus himself already commented on my comment before you did, explaining the situation.
And... a little side-note; Paragraphing is a part of being 'okay in grammar'.
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:01 pm
Hehe... 'Am I supposed to Smell it?'
And I thought he was done too so... I could have easily made the same mistake.
Do you guys think my Bankai is still god mod, boring, ect.?
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 6:51 pm
][Axel][ I never stated such a thing was my Priority, IKilled.
After all, How am I supposed to know his profile wasn't finished yet? Am I supposed to smell it? Or read his mind?
He posted up his profile. NO-WHERE in the profile stated it was a work in progress, so I thought it was the finished version, hence I commented on seperating it in Paragraphs so it would be easier to read.
Plus, I don't really see a reason for you to comment on this at all, when Markenus himself already commented on my comment before you did, explaining the situation.
And... a little side-note; Paragraphing is a part of being 'okay in grammar'. OK yeah having complete blanks is not obvious at all.....You know maybe you should check your eyes once in a while..? At any rate feel free to insult my profile really I have no problem with it but at least wait Untill im done...im done=when there are no BLANKS.
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 7:23 pm
You two will definetly want to fight each other in the RP, wont you?
Stop it both of you. The parts that were filled out could be assumed to be done no? I only see some of the Zanpakto and the Appearence blank.
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