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Okay, I know there are some mistakes, like how it's so light, but I had a friend scan this for me, I'll have to fix it later, but that's okay. This is the cover art for (this installment) of my series, Twilight Crossroads (formerly Shizen Chikara) You can see that in my journal.



Some mistakes that I see are the differenciating (not sure if correctly spelled) widths of the roads, and how they connect is kind of sloppy.
Tye (top left) is kind of odd to me. Rikai (center left) and Riusosu (center right) are supposed to be the same height, that's my bad.
Other dude (bottom right) looks bad to me.
Finally guy at top right seems odd also.

If you see anything you think is bad, let me know, and tell me what you think is good (I don't usually color and can barely ever be bothered to color something).