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LunaWillowind

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:48 pm


All I do

Resting here
a quiet wind touching me
hear the gentle, yet crushing sea
sweep over the smooth stones

A salty smell on the breeze
a rustle of grass
why is it that I'm crying
on this beutiful place?

Simple melody
song by a small bird
the tune fading
in the distance

I feel my heart pounding
something that feels like
sadness and loneliness
lingers here

The wind makes a sudden blow
my hair dances and floats along
I see a field of flowers
before me

Tears drop silently
The white flowers
get red drops on them
red as the crimson blood in my veins

Pain in my heart
blood dripping from my fingers
too many pages turned
too sharply

A mirror in the distance
lonely in the open field
a glance on my torn self
and all I do is simply shrug
PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 5:56 am


Very good Luna-chan! I love your stuff! Always have! ^.^

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LunaWillowind

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:35 am


Thanks Firefly whee
PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 8:17 pm


Wow... I must say that was quite amazing. Just change "to sharply" to too sharply. It really was amazing though.

Regulous


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 5:24 am


Regulous
Wow... I must say that was quite amazing. Just change "to sharply" to too sharply. It really was amazing though.


Thanks heart the mistake has been edited now. It's not the first time it's been found small mistakes like that in my poems, mostly it is because I write too fast on my computer to notice them before someone tells me.
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