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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:29 pm
I need your help, bag man.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:58 pm
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[.Mechanized_Syndrome.] Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:19 pm
You don't know how to Rp. emo
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:58 pm
 
So many hours awake, so many hours alive. Sleep, we all need it, for recharging are bodies, for leisure, even just for the hell of it, But not in this society. You see the people of Lulabic face a little problem. Most of them can’t sleep. Yes this little planet gives birth to people who can not lose there Consciousness for a couple of hours. No, most people in Lulabic are awake for there whole lives. Headache, hernia, hyperactivity, Hypertension, Impatience, Irritability, Dark circles under the eyes, Depression, Dizziness, All common traits and symptoms of most people in Lulabic.

It was said that a couple years ago, that problem started. New born babies of course came home. Delight and thrilled, all the new parents tried they best to keep there little bundles of life happy in the day. And then it turned to night. Of course, it was expected for not all babies to sleep thought the whole nigh, but it wasn’t just the one hour of the night they were up, it was the whole night. From twelve, to twelve the babies were awake. Was it a birth defect, was it a virus, maybe it was just there nature. Doctors had no clue. Scientist had no idea. Government could do nothing. As this generation grew the problem got worst. You see, this “trait” was paced by mother. Meaning with each new child the sleepless trait stayed. This virus was called Resurrectiojonis, our RTJ.

So many things were done. Sending a constant stream of steam in the air to help with the soothing of the people, this failed. Ordering people to take sedative to help them go to sleep, this just made them tired. So what do you get when you make sleepless people tired? Chaos. Most jobs where stopped because to the lost of focuses. So now only a few jobs and the government stand in the little planet of Lulabic. All hope was lost until one man made one invention. Nihts, Neural Intervention High jacking Thermal System, Made by Doctor Shearo. This machine did not make the person sleep, but simulated it instead. Many people wanted this machine, but at the price that it was selling at, it was close to impossible to obtain it. Nobody had a job, how were they to get it. Only the rich could, and in the state of plant, that was few. Lulabic was thrown into the hopeless planet.

However, a spark of hope was dimly shining in the planet of Lulabic. A scientist, that name was unknown, was a genius in genetics. Even though he had the lack of sleep this man stayed clam and smart. Countless days, he stayed in his lab. Taking eggs and sperm from the infected beings, the man finally made a breakthrough. Over time, born beings of Lulabic took most of their physical and mental treats of the mother. This was due to the RTJ. What if most of the traits were given from the father? This was the man’s true goal. Around ten children were born from this experiment.About the time in earth years April 5, 2056, this was the date that their were born. And to many eyes what the babies did after being born was amazing. Each of the babies slept. The experiment was a success. After news broke out people were extremely joyous. People could them the saviors of their country. Some people called them Clouds, because of the fact that they could relax and do something that for generations now could not do, Sleep.

Most were happy because of this. But there is always two sides of the story. Doctor Shearo, the inventor of The Nihts, was secretly irritated. His invention was not doing well to begin with, and with the clouds in the picture, he would never get anything out of it. What was he to do, he needed to do something. So he lied. Simple as that, he made a fake study saying that contact with these beings is toxic to anyone that has the RJT virus. Due to the fact that not that many scientist were out there, the study was thought to be true. You would think that the clouds would still be loved by some people in Lulabic. You would think. But clouds in the society now were shunned, envied, and hated. Put in a large superstructure, the clouds are imprisoned for the rest of their lives. All at the age of sixteen, the clouds are never to make contact with the outside world. Even though they never known freedom, instinct kicked in, the clouds want freedom. And this is their story.
Is the story to lose. It just doesn't fell right.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:22 pm
I had to read through about one paragraph; I'm worked. But it is a very clever concept. It seems that you should come up with a different reason why the clouds were shunned; the jealous doctor is a bit cliche. Clouds only open up to five players.
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 3:56 pm
On the oringal concept was that the lack of sleep just misguided their reasoning
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 5:09 pm
That's sensible... confused
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 5:11 pm
It just seems to, ... , You know.
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 6:10 pm
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