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 Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 5:02 pm
this is one of my poems...
on the border of life and death
i never feel happiness, only suffering
and pain
crying out for love, only reciving hate
all i want is to be cared for
only wanting to belong...
but still i suffer here
my feeling teeter me to death
the final embrace...no on will notice
no on will care
as the warmth of life turns to
the cold of death
with the tide trying to pull me deeper
i think to myself...this is it
now im just giving up
no i cant... no... no giving up not now
as i stumble back to the border i say
i will remain here forever
on the border of life and death
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:03 pm
* claps * Wonderful! =D Good job Ren
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:41 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 4:47 pm
Your welcome. I know something you forgot though =O
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:55 am
what did i forget? sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 8:13 pm
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