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Shade Skypage Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:22 pm
I was surprised that at the length of this piece, how complete it seemed. At any rate, any thoughts or criticism are welcomed.
"A Love of No Escape"
Pain, I felt, when we could not be
A feeling I wished you just could see.
I tried to go, just run away
Yet in my mind you were content to stay.
Pain, 'tis said, makes us know what is real.
Is this the price that must be paid to feel?
In my mind, I see you, simply standing there
I try to let you begone; yet I know not to where
I raise the knife in the dark of that thought
Blade strikes down, to redeem the pain wrought
Even in dream, my hand doth freeze, I still choose not to hate
Is it wisdom I have found? Will the pain finally abate?
Pain sears me again, yet even in dream, I could never harm thee.
Have I found another cruel truth of life, or graven image of me?
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:22 pm
I give it 5 stars out of 5.You are pretty similar to me.I love your poems.I i is possible,if you write poems,can I be first to see them? <3
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