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Do you like poetry
  Yes, long live poetry
  no, die stupied Poe die!
  eh some of its okay but I perfer other things
  uh Iv seen things iv seen them with my eyes...
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Veunus Rahl

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 6:08 pm


Welcome to the poets lounge.

A place for poets to come talk about poetry, show us some and whatever else they feel..

As for this poet if you want to see my poetry youll have to check my journal and Deviantart.com under the screenname MrsBlackBear. I also have some photos up and am not finished with submiting diviations so not all my work is up there yet. heart
PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:41 am


I've written some poetry under a pseudoname on a MUCH different website, one I cannot post here. But here's one...

Colds End

Underfoot, twigs bend and crack
The leaves come drifting down
Red and orange, purple black
Carpeting the hidden track
A chilly gust across the back
Guides me through Autumns brown.

The snowy road that lies ahead
Would take me past your home
I go the other way instead
Footprints mark the path I tread
Moonlit shadows, stalking dread
Through Winter woods I roam.

Warmer wind drifts through the air
Yellow petals will unfold
Loping wild without care
Meadows lush and full of hare
Scent of promise, all beware
Springs abundance tinged with gold.

Through all the seasons we endure
Now come we to our goal
Children frolick, eagles soar
Elders warmed to deepest core
Fish will dance in rivers roar
Insect choir sings their score
Wish it lasts forevermore
The Summer of the wolfen soul.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 12:23 pm


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Wow the images that got with that are wonder full ripper awesome job. I want to see more. Im afraid most of mine arnt so cherfull since Im an emotional poet. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:30 pm


I have some darker, more thought provoking ones as well, such as:

Imperfect Circle


Crawl from the soup, eager one.
Breathe deep the sweet air.
Different yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Run and hide, little one.
Down the dark holes.
Safety yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Look to the skies, furry one.
Watch the flash strike the tree.
Warm yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Destroy all others, hairless one.
Stab with sticks. Reign supreme.
Powerful yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Observe the sun, brilliant one.
Simplest element. Harness it.
Unlimited yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Back to the water, unworthy one.
Sink deep. Forget.
Soothing yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:54 pm


hmm that one didnt have the same effect on me ill take one of mine off of DA so you can see my style hehe
PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:56 pm


The Path


The pathway of hopes and dreams
Is covered in nightmares and other things
Yet I continue to walk down the isle
To see if I can reach the end of this mile
I find shutting my ears helps
When I happen upon a gap created by fear
I find keeping my eyes on my man
Is what keeps me going through the sand
Every time I fall he rushes to my side
Picking me up and carrying me through
The waves of time when I cry he tries to find
The hope inside my soul and brings it to the surface to me
Sometimes the path doeth fade and I feel lost until
A new way appears or the angel that watches over me
Plays the notes upon his lyre and it calms my soul
With a calm soul I can see the path that lies ahead of me
Between the angel and my soul mate, Jesus and God too
I will make through this windy and multi terrain path
To the castle I see inside, one where hopes and dreams are met
And all I love resides.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:58 pm


That was my newest and now I shall show you my oldest and my favorite
PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:59 pm


The Full Moons Effect

The moon is round and full of light but not a comforting night. As I sit here and type this poem it makes me sad that my house is not my home. For home is full of love, laughter and delight, on a night when the moon is so bright. Unfortunately for me I live in house full of anger and hate on such a wonderful night. Now you may say what about your friends yes I have friends but I do not get to see them on such a night. Usually when I do see them it is when I’m actually a delight not when I need them so. I wish that this terror would end so I could start anew again, with high school behind me and college ahead I’m lost in space where the moon shines ahead. I wish I could be where you are so I could earn more friends hopefully some true ones unlike those I forbid. A home not yet found but engraved in my head where lye many true friends who seek me out when I am down. Hope still last that maybe afar is this home that is so fondly engraved in my heart. Where the full moon shines, and yet I’m not sad but happy instead.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:20 pm


I liked both of them very much!
Both freestyle..
Have you thought of creating one with a rhyming structure?
I'd very much like to see what you come up with!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:00 pm


uh hang on I think I have one of those....*goes to look through her galary*

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:03 pm


I'm a fuzzy bug.
With pink and purple hair
Come pet me I am soft
Come pet me I am square
I use fruit to condition my
Soft long hair
I eat paste and waste lace
My eyes are red
My lips be blue
I wish you to be
Soft too
So I can nuzzle you

this is the closest I have I think
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 7:59 am


I enjoy writing poetry but I don't do it often. I like poetry a lot but I have a large difficulty reading a lot of it, and why I usually stick to the four line chunks. This one I wrote because I really liked the imagery, but also the concept often makes me giggle.

Death’s Tea Party


Out on the terrace the table is set,
The plates are all polished,
The china is chipped,
Death is having a tea party.

The gloom of the night is like a fog,
The moonlight shines on a dead bouquet,
Erie music comes from discordant violins,
And the rattling of old bones.

Soon the bell tolls as guests arrive,
Melancholy, Despair, Misery,
Agony, Terror, Malevolence,
All clothed in their mourning attire.

Greetings are exchanged among the solemn group,
Melancholy slumps into a chair,
As Agony converses with Terror,
Death listens to Misery’s most recent tale.

Malevolence casually steps on a passing spider,
When the tea time bell rings,
Despair is coerced from his view of the jagged rocks below,
The guests seat themselves around the table.

With cobwebs festooned on the chandelier,
And the tablecloth like gauze from a mummy’s tomb,
An empty chair there still remains,
They have left a place just for you.

Moonlit_Spellweaver


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 3:45 pm


scarry but awsome i love it! I want to see more of your works
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