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Regulous

PostPosted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:08 pm


Swirling fog covers the world
and my fears hide behind closed eyes.
The dream world was so much better
when we were allowed to dream.
No more, no more, will I see the beautiful sky
through dreaming irises.
The world is destroyed,
it lays broken with mass graves
and broken constitutions littering the ground.
It once was beautiful and perfect.
Then people go lost in the image
and forgot the truth and meaning.
Now as we die
and the earth turns black
politicians scream
but there is no turning back.
We should have seen the signs
but we sought only power
so say good bye cheese_whine
farewell to the flowers.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 9:06 pm


Regulous
Swirling fog covers the world
and my fears hide behind closed eyes.
The dream world was so much better
when we were allowed to dream.
No more, no more, will I see the beautiful sky
through dreaming irises.
The world is destroyed,
it lays broken with mass graves
and broken constitutions littering the ground.
It once was beautiful and perfect.
Then people go lost in the image
and forgot the truth and meaning.
Now as we die
and the earth turns black
politicians scream
but there is no turning back.
We should have seen the signs
but we sought only power
so say good bye cheese_whine
farewell to the flowers.


I love it, Thought the cheese/wine glass vered my eye so I had to start reading it over. XD

Anette_Amaranth


Dark Silver Firefly

PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 6:32 am


It's awsome! whee I Loved It!
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 9:13 am


Whoa how the hell did that get in there? I don't remember putting that in there.

Regulous

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Writer's Hearts - Regulous

 
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