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 Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:46 am
I mainly write small poems, and sometimes they're verry confusing razz I have also writen two songs, but I don't think they're ever really going to be anything.~~
Words are never quite enough, when action were to strong.
Nothing really is the same when broken hearts belong.
What is the reason behind to blinds when the damage is done?
At first it seems like there's every reason, but then it fades to none.
We let our anger swell inside, until it's destroying the light.
We lose our senses and go blind, and then hope of sight.
But then there's always a sense of hope, seeking to forgive
Then we can all go on, continuing to dream and live.
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 6:31 pm
First off I love that poem. Or was it two... either way its awesome. In the third line though is it suppose to be to two or too? Also in teh second line of the second stanza, for sight sounds better than of sight.
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