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Anette_Amaranth

PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 4:19 pm


I love to write. Mostly new roleplay storys, but I also write a few poems here and there. Here are some of my favorites. Hope you like.



Riverfall

Floating along down the river,
I reach for a tree, but get a sliver,
Stupid tree I shout,
knowing only it was my fault.

Then above a woodpecker sighs,
Be sure to treat it before you die,
I shew the woodpecker away not knowing my path,
As I sat a bleeding the river was getting fat,

Soon I was going to fast,
The river was so vast,
The pole broke on my utter,
and my body began to shudder,

Then in the leap of fate,
I lay above empty ground agape,
I started to fall,
Faster, and faster. Why were riverfalls so tall,?

Then in a flash,
All I heard was a splash,
I open my eyes to see,
I'm in my bed in pee.

[T.|| Sad I know. XD]

Here is another. This one is more deep.



Open doors. All you see is nothing. Noone to see. Why is the room empty? I sat on my knees crying. Had I really missed the show? Was I really alone on the stage? No, Calls a voice. I look up me make-up smeared. A man stood at the front entrence his smile lite the dark part of my soul. at once he lept down into my heart embrsing me In a deep hug. my heart unlocks alowing him in. Then all at once he falls into my lips. I don't fight, but give in. His warmth melted the ice on my shoulders.

Then we broke. He grabed my hand and pulled away. his soft lips grasfully sound his words. Though my mind is empty my feet start to move. Left, right. Circle. I'm dancing with my love. The only one that can open my hard shell. I couldn't love no other man, Nor would I. Sadly my dream is struck away. I open my eyes to meet a millon. people cheering people dancing, noone singing. Then I look down the mic is in my hand. I'm singing, but with no voice. Or is it I can't hear my voice.

Then in the darkness of the room two doors burst open! Its my love. No...Its only a man who looks like him. Tears form in my eyes and I fall to my knees. people scream and crowd around me. All at once I almost gave up, then two warm open arms imbraced me in a hug. Its him. My dear sweat love. I stand the crowd is silent. I turn to meet his eyes. Then to The crowd. In a burst the music hearable to only me sings out.

Then I sing myself loud and proud, For everyone to hear. After the song I turn to my love, only to find him gone. How sad it is he was only a ghost. An epity.

But still.....my only love.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:08 pm


Wow! Really really good Solar! whee

Dark Silver Firefly


Regulous

PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:13 pm


First of all I would like to say I loved these two and the riverfall one made me laugh, which is good cause my day has sucked today. The bold letters are just typos and stuff that I will correct.


SolarMoonLight~Wolf
I love to write. Mostly new roleplay storys, but I also write a few poems here and there. Here are some of my favorites. Hope you like.



Riverfall

Floating along down the river,
I reach for a tree, but get a sliver,
Stupid tree I shout,
knowing only it was my fault.

Then above a woodpecker sighs,
Be sure to treat it before you die,
I shoo the woodpecker away not knowing my path,
As I sat bleeding the river was getting fat,

Soon I was going to fast,
The river was so vast,
The pole broke on my utter,
and my body began to shudder,

Then in the leap of fate,
I lay above empty ground agape,
I started to fall,
Faster and faster. Why were riverfalls so tall?

Then in a flash,
All I heard was a splash,
I open my eyes to see,
I'm in my bed in pee.

[T.|| Sad I know. XD]

Here is another. This one is more deep.



Open doors. All you see is nothing. No one to see. Why is the room empty? I sat on my knees crying. Had I really missed the show? Was I really alone on the stage? "No", Calls a voice. I look up, I put a comman instead of "me" because it flows better make-up smeared. A man stood at the front entrance his smile lit the dark part of my soul. At once he lept down into my heart embracing me In a deep hug. my heart unlocks alowing him in. Then all at once he falls onto into sounded kinda like you were eating him O.o) my lips. I don't fight, but give in. His warmth melted the ice on my shoulders.

Then we broke. He grabbed my hand and pulled away. his soft lips grasfully gracefully sound his words. Though my mind is empty my feet start to move. Left, right. Circle. I'm dancing with my love. The only one that can open my hard shell. I couldn't love no other man (use either couldn't or no not both because that means you could love another man), Nor would I. Sadly my dream is struck away. I open my eyes to meet a millon people cheering people dancing, no one singing. Then I look down the mic is in my hand. I'm singing, but with no voice. Or is it I can't hear my voice?

Then in the darkness of the room two doors burst open! Its my love. No...Its only a man who looks like him. Tears form in my eyes and I fall to my knees. people scream and crowd around me. All at once I almost gave up, then two warm open arms embraced me in a hug. Its him. My dear sweat love. I stand the crowd is silent. I turn to meet his eyes. Then to The crowd. In a burst the music hearable to only me sings out.

Then I sing myself loud and proud, For everyone to hear. After the song I turn to my love, only to find him gone. How sad it is he was only a ghost. An epity.

But still.....my only love.



IT was a good poem. The second one was great... just a few typing errors smile don't worry I make plenty.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:18 pm


I think we have another good writer in this guild. Regulous...if you like...there are five chapters in my journal to a story I've been doing lately. If you want you can go to my journal and read them. ^.^

Dark Silver Firefly


Anette_Amaranth

PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:16 pm


Hehe... I'm having some troubles typing at this moment in time, because i'm actully really sick, well not REALLY sick just alittle woozie. Also I have Delepsy [Sp] So I generaly forget what I was typing, or forget how to spell a certain word. Other then that, thanks you two for the complements. I love to write as said above, but noone ever listens to me. They say it's a waist of my time. I should be studying Biology, or law enforcement. Stupid people. =.||


Anywho I have more!



She is alone. Her body is an empty essence in the fast moving world. Her mind stirs only for a second. It tells her to move, she does. Thought her movement is in vain, she should have stayed, not listen to her mind, and stood firm.

The ground is cold, only to her face. The rest of her body can't be felt. The snow melts under her cheek. Another day of this. She wonders getting up and moving again. Enter, but behold not that of warmth, but a colder cold. People stare as if she wore a giant sign on her forhead.

No. This coldness is from the deadly stares of her peers. They are like daggers striking threw the strongest part of her bones to her heart. A girl, Nayleen by name pushs her to the ground. Again she finds little will to push herself up. Maybe just maybe she could fall into a corner and be invisable. No, she was seeable even in invisability. Instead she continued on her way.

The day drew on long, and hard. She was poked and teased and called names that no normal human liked. Then the final bell rang, No detention, that day. Sadly bullys bigger then her torcher her untill she litteraly bleeds. Rape... What most call it. At home her life is no better.

Dragged in by anger, and alchol. Beaten by glass bottle. Finaly she escaped up to her room, her only solitude. Her true home. Sirens? Yes, to take her away. No, she wouldn't, she couldn't. True her life was that of hell. True she was sick and tired of bullys and pain. True she was sick of her father, and his drinking, and true she was sick of praying to God for a better life, but no she wasn't givin any.

her hand twitchs looking down she sees a gun. With no hesitation she cocks it. puts it to her head... Silents... BANG!, Sounds the gun. She falls... Maybe now she'd be loved.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:53 pm


Wow.... depressing... but I like depressing It was very very good. Still some typos but I read that first part so its ok.

Regulous


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:14 pm


Solar- you know that i listen and i do love your stories. whee
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