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Reikage-Sanshi
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:53 pm

Alright I figure I create another form contest..

This one is going to required everyone to write a poem relating to Naruto/Naruto Shippuuden.

Requirements/Rules:
1) The poem must be Naruto/Naruto Shippuuden related such as...
2) The characters of the show, their emotions, what their going through, themselves, being in love, etc.. yah get where I'm going with this..
3) Try not to go overboard and don't make it too long and keep it PG-13!!! sweatdrop
4) It could be a haku, ryming, other type of poem formates, or what just comes to your mind.. heck it could even be something like a song if you want!!!
5) Must have a title for it.. so we have an idea what the poems about if we can't get it.. sweatdrop
6) When it comes to judging the poems please be respectful, especially when you put your comments in about those poems...
7) Poems must be posted in this form..
cool The winner will win either 700 gold or a monthly item... depending on what's avaliable at the time on who's declared the winner
9) The winner will be choosen the a poll when the time period is over on accepting the poems.. (time period will be posted in a separate post)

Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:56 pm

I'm going to allow two months for this first poem contest...
Starts: Sept. 20, 2007
Ends: Nov. 20, 2007

Please have your poem posted before the end of that day.. if its past the time period.. it will be judge in the next vote poll.

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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:22 pm

My Cursed Life..

What makes me soo different?
To the point that it drives me insane..?
This power is soo strong;
Too much that I can't take.
I didn't ask for this life,
So then why am I cursed
To live out this punishment?

They see me as nothing more,
Then a hiddious monster,
Their slave,
The destoryer of life...

I'm nothing more then an outsider,
Longing to belong with others..
Look at the person that I truly am,
What I can become..
Don't judge what's locked within me,
Or the life I've been place into against my will.

If I could reset my life,
And change it all..
Would I be able to do it?
Or would I keep my life as the way it is??

Since I now look around me and find,
That I'm not alone anymore...
There are others who suffer just like me,
There are those who want to be my friend...
To make me smile and forget about this pain,
A pain that has consumed my life for soo long
Where I was dipped completely in darkness,
And saw nothing else but that.

But now I see a light to lead me out of this darkness,
And its you...
My friend who has saved me from this darkness.
Openned my eyes to a life that has more meaning...

Because of you...
It's the reason why I've been come strong,
Determine to protect those who are precious to me,
To make something out of this life I've been give...

Now it seems that this cursed life isn't soo bad,
When I have people like you around...
To help me get through what life has given me.

Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 7:18 pm

The Emptiness in the Love

I was a leader
I was a brother
I was born without love
But to only love myself
I loved no one
But love found me and I found love too

I was trying to protect those I loved
But payed the ultimate price
They toke me away
They stoll what I had inside
And left me for dead

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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 7:20 pm

Chinchilla_blue

The Emptiness in the Love

I was a leader
I was a brother
I was born without love
But to only love myself
I loved no one
But love found me and I found love too

I was trying to protect those I loved
But payed the ultimate price
They toke me away
They stoll what I had inside
And left me for dead

this is what kinda happened to Gaara-Sama

Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 7:46 pm

Damnnn that was good!!!

And nicely incorporates what happen to Gaara.. but don't worry you'll get to find out what really happens to him next week ^_~!

Well mine is incorporating, Naruto, Gaara and Neji.. I think I'll let you guys figure out what it means...

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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 8:25 pm

Reikage-Sanshi

Damnnn that was good!!!

And nicely incorporates what happen to Gaara.. but don't worry you'll get to find out what really happens to him next week ^_~!

Well mine is incorporating, Naruto, Gaara and Neji.. I think I'll let you guys figure out what it means...

thanks!!! i give you my most thanks ^.^

oh...sounds good!!! <(^.^<) (>^.^)>

ok, i will check it out

Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 8:29 pm

Reikage-Sanshi

My Cursed Life..

What makes me soo different?
To the point that it drives me insane..?
This power is soo strong;
Too much that I can't take.
I didn't ask for this life,
So then why am I cursed
To live out this punishment?

They see me as nothing more,
Then a hiddious monster,
Their slave,
The destoryer of life...

I'm nothing more then an outsider,
Longing to belong with others..
Look at the person that I truly am,
What I can become..
Don't judge what's locked within me,
Or the life I've been place into against my will.

If I could reset my life,
And change it all..
Would I be able to do it?
Or would I keep my life as the way it is??

Since I now look around me and find,
That I'm not alone anymore...
There are others who suffer just like me,
There are those who want to be my friend...
To make me smile and forget about this pain,
A pain that has consumed my life for soo long
Where I was dipped completely in darkness,
And saw nothing else but that.

But now I see a light to lead me out of this darkness,
And its you...
My friend who has saved me from this darkness.
Openned my eyes to a life that has more meaning...

Because of you...
It's the reason why I've been come strong,
Determine to protect those who are precious to me,
To make something out of this life I've been give...

Now it seems that this cursed life isn't soo bad,
When I have people like you around...
To help me get through what life has given me.

wow....this is really awesome

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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:29 pm

LOL!! Thanks... I just think about it and the words just flow.. then again its a good outlit to get everything out at times.. which I do when things bother me at times..

So I just tried to put myself in their shoes when they first started out to how they ended and this is what I came up with...

-sighs- Hopefully there will be more in this guild to participate...

Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:52 pm

What I've Become

Visions of my past,
I can not escape..
Those words that you spoke,
Echo endlessly in my mind.

My innocence and life ended,
That day when you spilled..
Every last drop of blood except mine..

You haunted me with th visions of your deeds,
Making me apart of your defile act..
As I was immobilize to move or speak.
Scared to death of what would happen to me next

Why is it that I'm still alive?
Why did you have to do those things??
What happen to those picture perfect families???

They did not exist because of what you were,
Of what you became..
All that led you down to that night...
As the blood is forever soaked by your hands.

You tell me to hate,
To become stronger,
That I need to harden my heart against you..
All with the intent to kill you,
For what you did so long ago.

I am your killer,
The one who will bring the justice;
Justice to what you've done.

I am forever trapped in the past,
Yet somehow moving forward towards a dark future..
One where I must become a murder like you.

So ever day I'm obsess,
With becoming stronger...
Hating any moment or anyone who proves me to be weak..

I have to become stronger,
I need to become stronger,
And I will obtain this strength...
ANY WAY POSSIBLE

So I will cut all my ties of those who grew with me
I will become a monster just like you,
But not exactly the same...
All to lead up to the day...
The day I..
The day I am able to kill you.

Dear brother..
Do you realize,
That you have created..
Created a monster out of me??

I will be your undertaker..
So be ready for when I come,
Because I am not that weak little boy
Who always wanted to walk in his brother's steps..

So walk a little faster brother...
Walk faster..
Faster...
Faster...
So that I may enjoy the hunt in killing you..............................

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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:08 pm

Umm guys could you probably try and post a few poems?? It doesn't have to be of high quality.. just your emotions or thoughts in somewhat of a poem like form..

I would like to have at least a total of 5 peeps before I start the voting contests for this...

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:15 am

*Gapes* Oh noes! The time limit is almost up! I have to go write something right away!!!

...That looks, kind of weird, doesn't it?

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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 11:07 am

Its not.. just express your creative writer side ^_^!!!

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