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[~ Some say love is the meaning of life...]

LOVE

Love, Like a flower that grows every year.
Love, like an eye that breaks with a tear.
Love, the only thing to make one have smiles.
Love, for your love i'd walk more then 100 miles.
Love is the one thing anyone can take into there heart and pray for it not to part then sooner it died and that one person cries and breaks into peices while their heart fades into space.

DAYS

The days go by, I count them quickly.
The days that I live are so long and so frightening(Spelling).
The days in a week, a month, a year.
Only to come but to leave so fast.
The days that are left till that one day you know it will come.
The days of you life are dying as they fade away quickly into the night skys.
The days go by, Soon the day will come for it all to die and fade to an end.

[...I say life is the meaning of death and love is merely the cause.~]

Love is fair. The syllable pattern is off throughout the poem. And the rhyme scheme is different in the last line than what the other lines have. Another verse should/could be provided to show the pattern.

Days is just depressing. It's taking common speech and adding similes to it. Sounds like something Poe might have written if he was drunk and high out of his strange little mind.

Edit: After reading this again, I realize it's quite insulting. The point of my post is to provide blunt criticism. It's great that you want to write poems, and I support you 110% there, but if you want people to like them better, that's where criticism comes in.

rofl

'can i bang you?'

lmao!