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Little_wolf12
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:27 pm


Welcome to the writes and literature sub-forum! Here is where you talk about any form of literature, from poems -novels, old- new or post your own writings. Please read the rules for the forum before posting any works or critiquing any ones stories.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:47 pm


Well this is a poem I wroght myslef...I'v wrighten many...this isn't my best but it has a meaning...this was about what days were like for me for a while so yea...hope u like it...srry it's depressing!And if anyone steals it without giving me crdit I'll kill em! razz

I wish I hadn't gone to school today!


I wake up to a loud BEEP!
Push the snooz roll over nd I’m back to sleep
I don’t want to go to school today!

Nd once more the beeping sounds
So the snooz I then pound
I don’t want to go to school today!

I get up nd rub the sleep from my eyes
Get dressed nd begin to cry
I don’t want to go to school today!

I brush my hair nd do my make-up
I pack my bag nd zip my coat up
I really don’t want to go to school today!

I walk the hill, up to my school
Look at the other kids nd think how cruel!
I did’t want to go to school today!

They all laugh nd have there fun
I’m the punch line of their pun
I wish I hadn’t gone to school today!

When I get home, I cry some more
They all call me the big fat wore!
I wish I stayed home today!

So I sit nd cut my wrist
This is a day I should have missed!
I shouldn’t have gone to school today!

So in my coffin I will lay
My family crowds around to say
She shouldn’t have gone to school that day

dark_female_assassin


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 4:31 pm


OK, this is a poem I just thought of, I hope you like it and Please dont go say that it yours that has happened to me and it was hard to finallly get people to see that it was I who wrote it so here it is.


Didn't you notice?(kinda like my poem Do people know)
To my friend Terra Hatake who is mad at me

Why?
Why didn't you notice that I was hurt when you stoped talking
You were my best friend...or so I thought
I dont know what I did wrong
I wish you would tell me
But you dont even look at me
I try to ask
You look away
When I said I was sorry you turned away saying " Thats not going to work"
So I wounder if we are still friends?
I dont want to try to keep a friend who dosent want me as a friend
I dont want to go threw that again
Why?
Didn't you notice the hurt look in my eyes when I frist found out that you were mad
Now I want to cry
Becuase I dont know if I still have a best friend
But I wont cry I wont cry for someone who dosent want tears
I wish I could talk to you
The secrets we shared
The luaghs we had
Is that all gone?
Didnt you notice
That I still want to be your friend
Untill the end
Now I will go cry
cuase I nwo want to die
So please
hear this last sorry
and think
cuase you are my best friend
I hope I am yours...so Im sorry

-Sakura
This is to Terra Hatake  
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