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 Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:06 pm
Yes, a thread to express yourself in a different kind of art. Seemed like a good idea, so I went with it. Feel free to post about anything, whether it be happiness, sorrow, anger, heartbreak. Anything will do, after all, poetry is fed by emotion. Even if you can't think of something, you might inspire someone else! Criticizing is welcome, but don't try to only put someone down. We're all friends here, remember that! So, let's have fun, and happy writing!
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:33 pm
I suppose I'll start:
I DID NOT THINK WHILE TYPING THIS!!!!
WOOT!!!!!
Bleeding slowly as the day passes
I seek help, asking the masses
None seem to notice me, always cold glares
I'm forced to believe no one really cares
Cursed by my own lack of hope
I'm at the end of my life's rope
I need guidance, but none will give
Is this how I'll be forced to live?
Cold and forgotten, chilled to the bone
I pray for proof that I'm not alone
Broken are my dreams, shattered and destroyed
Someone, please, help to fill the void
I'd stab myself in the heart, if you told me to
Bleed myself out, all for you
Any command given, I will do
All because I Love You!
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:36 pm
Whoa that rhymed...0_0 Wow. Nice one rangashu. now i think its my turn which i will just randomly type.
Here lies what once used to be
A Throne to a kingdom beyond
Once sought and now lost
One finds what was stolen
For what is stolen is not thiers
We fight for the hearts
Of those we love
Which is that which was stolen
Forever more Thy Name shall be
Heart Break And Treachery
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:44 pm
Hyuu, you guys aren't bad. I have never been one who writes poetry...I enjoy writing stories much more. For some reason it helps to leak out more of my emotions. I'll have to think about this poetry thing...hm....We're gonna need some happy ones lol
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:47 pm
lol mine makes no sense to me XD
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:49 pm
The following are lyrics written by a band called Mudvayne. It is an excellent example of poetry so I'm posting it for all to see. It's actually really good, in my opinion.
(This thread allows posting of anyone's work, as long as you give credit to those who wrote it. Do not plagiarize. I am using this as an example, and am still giving credit to Mudvayne, because they wrote it."
"Death Blooms"
"I asked a god for poison cradle me
Sown to my dreams souls searching
Death blossoms where clouds lie over me
Held in god's hands death blooming
Dark for fear of failure
An inner gloom as wide as an eye and fermenting
Roiling hate death grip in my veins
Unveiling rancid petals flowering forth foul nectar
The space between a blink and a tear
...death blooms" - Mudvayne
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:50 pm
Like Rangashu said at the start, what means nothing to one person can mean a whole world to another. Anyway...I need to shut up. The last thing we need is another thread that was supposed to have a meaning turned into something completely random...coughmyaviartthreadcough
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:32 pm
Wow.. I can never rhyme like that in poems... and Soul, it's awesome, that something so good, can come out of just your head in that second. I'll post a poem I wrote a good year ago, it's funny into some ways, but not really... It's kinda weird.
The Erotic Fantasy
Your teasing eyes.
Your luscious lips
run across my skin.
You love to bite.
You love my form,
my skinny ribs.
Your wandering eyes.
Your black leather whip
begins to make me swell.
You love to control.
You love when I want more,
my lustful body.
Your threatening eyes.
Your rough hand
bruises my skin tender.
You love my tears.
You love whimpers,
my mascara runned eyes.
Your hateful eyes.
Your sharp shining knife
rubs against my neck.
You love to watch me heave.
You love when I scream no more,
my panicked mind.
Your dead gone eyes.
Your pale cheeks
push against mine.
You love to smile.
You loved my gun,
my dreadful fantasy.
Okay... It wasn't really funny, just alittle dark and scary. ahhaah I'll post more alittle later perhaps.
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:50 pm
lol thank you i guess XD Well i see a motion picture in my mind along with a story to go with it and its all thought up. But then again its from day dreams and all. ^^
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:09 am
Wow those are all so awesome.I wrote one about a year and a half ago.I'll post it when i can either find it or remember it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:06 pm
sk8tergal94 Wow those are all so awesome.I wrote one about a year and a half ago.I'll post it when i can either find it or remember it. We'll all wait anxiously to hear it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:43 pm
well i got another it seems i thought about it during my La class right before lunch so yea. Beyond, There Lies,
A Kingdom Old
A Love Once Lost
Began Anew That all i remember for it even though i wrote it down, and to tell the truth i feel its incomplete but i can't seem to get next part of it... I guess if you want someone can finish it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:02 pm
SoulPeche well i got another it seems i thought about it during my La class right before lunch so yea. Beyond, There Lies,
A Kingdom Old
A Love Once Lost
Began Anew That all i remember for it even though i wrote it down, and to tell the truth i feel its incomplete but i can't seem to get next part of it... I guess if you want someone can finish it.
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:48 am
sk8tergal94 SoulPeche well i got another it seems i thought about it during my La class right before lunch so yea. Beyond, There Lies,
A Kingdom Old
A Love Once Lost
Began Anew That all i remember for it even though i wrote it down, and to tell the truth i feel its incomplete but i can't seem to get next part of it... I guess if you want someone can finish it. this thread is actually turning out better than i thought it would
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