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What You See isn't What you Get

Rating: T: Blood, violence
Summary: Robotnik finally did it. He has created the perfect plan, but he didn't plan on this plan taking on a mind of its own. Now his creations are free and they're destroying much more than the city. They're destroying lives.
Disclaimer: All characters present in this story that are present in the games are not mine; never will be mine and I do not take claim for them. They belong to Sega and Sonic Team
Genre: Drama, action/adventue
Status: Complete
Status bar 2: Story one of the SD trilogy
Status bar 3: 19 Chapters, one Epilouge
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3332022/1
Author's note: This is a co-authored story. My Co-author is given full Credit for the story and her charcters. Thank you
Also... All I ask is that if you do read this story, please take the two seconds to write a review

Review count: 81

Reviews for Chatper One:

HolyNightmare
ch 1
I wonder how i never bothered reading this story...this is even better then your adventure series.
Good job i'll be keeping an eye on this.

Fusionmix
ch 1
You might want to add more detail. I can't 'see' anything that's happening here. Plus, how all the clones suddenly allied was not only too abrupt, it seemed unrealistic and slightly cliche.

This is an interesting story, but it needs a lot more work. Just adding more details would make it better.

But remember, this is quite a new concept. Just try to stop calling Eggman the 'Doctor', it gets slightly annoying after awhile.

With a bit more work, this could be a very, very cool story. Try to make the clones a bit more menacing and we've got some creepy enemies on our hands.


D.C.111
ch 1
Oh, this looks cool so far! I'm not sure if this was the one you wanted me to review or not, but this is the one I'm reviewing for now! It looks great, seriously. In fact, a story I'm working on right now involves somewhat of a cloning process, too. It hasn't been put up yet, and won't be up for a few more months, but I've been working on it for several weeks now.


So far, so good, though. Hope you keep up the good work! I'm 'na go read chapter two now. *adds to favorites*

Megs
ch 1
Really good and flowing nice. It was all very good. Keep going your doing very well smile .

Ember Rock
ch 1
I did say that I would read, and I have, and I must say a BIG thankyou to all that wrote, co-wrote or otherwise contributed to this. I think that it's fantastic, and to both the authors it takes alot to co-write and make it work, and you have! Congrats! I really like the plot idea, it looks good! The evil clones...excellent...but I do hate to think of a stronger Shadow and Knuckles...not good at all. Ignore all the rest of my mindless drivel, overall great first chapter, you two rock, and I can't wait to see more!

Zeera13
ch 1
Wow... That totally pwns our original prologue! 8D We lurve Alex! biggrin The only issues I see are the misusage of "then," and you forgot quotation marks in there somewhere, around when Alex breaks out.

Oh, hi people! I'm the co-author lady. Bow down to my awesome co-author-ness. >:3