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Neppy Akiyama

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:21 pm


I wrote a part of a story:

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So if you could read it and give me some constructive criticism, that would be great. ^^

Thank you! ^^
PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 7:30 pm


Oooh~ I like it very much! I didn't really get to read the whole thing, but I love the imagery and action writing! ^^b

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