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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:12 am


This is my current project. More chapters to follow. Criticisms are welcome. Warning, there's some foul language included.

Prologue


Kavendish County was not a big one. It did not have to be. Most of the residents commuted to the larger surrounding cities to work. The people who could afford the large homes and lush properties were the one’s who didn’t want to settle in the urban areas. What started as a simple railroad town had, over decades, become the center of a great deal of wealth.

Still, not all of the community was what would be considered “privileged”. Some families had remained since the railroad days and continued to make Kavendish their home. Many of them couldn’t afford the huge houses that sprang up when the developers started building, but there where more rural areas.

There was still some farmland and a few cattle farms. Across the N&S No. 74 railway were a hard working people, red-blooded, blue-collared and proud of it. They lived a little more modestly than their commuter neighbors, but their land was theirs and there was enough of it.

All the townsfolk made it a great community, whether they lived in the developments or the rural side. Still there was a slight tension between the two groups. The divide was clear, and it was easy to tell what part of town someone lived in. Kavendish was not a large county, and as such there was only one high school. And young people often do not have as much tolerance as their elders.

The more well to do children had a name for those who did not share their lifestyle: “Tracks Trash”.

* * *

The Grady brothers were busily filling in a hole next to a large pine tree on Henry Dermitt’s two acre stretch of land. Their golden retriever, Goldie, lay in the sun watching them. Despite the cold February weather, the pair had managed to break a slight sweat. There were not many students at the high school from their side of town, and they did not stray into town when they did not have too.

James was the older of the two. He was one of the star players of the Kavendish High School basketball team. Tall and trim, he possessed a wiry strength born of hard work. His athletic achievements had afforded him some popularity, even among the snobbery of some of his classmates. His easy smile and gentle manner made him a favorite with the girls. It was his senior year and he already had a scholarship to Duke University. Life was good for him.

His younger brother, Zeke, was another story. His main resemblance to his brother was his head of dark brown hair. Although he was powerfully built, he did not care for sports, much to the dismay of the school’s coaching staff. Zeke was a merry troublemaker, not malicious, but too intelligent for his own good. It was his first year at the high school, and James had tried to make things easier for him. However, Zeke’s pranks and carefree attitude thwarted James efforts to get Zeke in with the popular crowd.

“You got this wired up right? I don’t want to dig this out again.” James shoveled the last of the dirt into the hole as Zeke adjusted the PVC pipe emerging from the ground.

“Relax. This is gonna be great.” Zeke could barely contain his glee as he checked the wired that passed through the pipe. Neither of them heard the young lady approach.

“I thought my father was paying you two to get rid of that tree.” The boys looked over their shoulders to see Katie Dermitt standing with her hands on her hips. There was an indignant look on her pretty face as she examined the scene. It was also her first year at the high school. She was not a fan of the brothers. She had known Zeke since kindergarten, and was furious when her parents moved her into the neighborhood.

“Don’t worry, Zeke has a plan.” James leaned on his shovel. “Don’t ya, Zeke.”

“Oh yeah.” Zeke smiled as he finished checking the pipe.

“I’m sure.” Katie sneered as she watched Zeke unroll a spool of wire. “What the hell are you doing?”

“Relax.” Zeke gave her a wink. “I’m great with wood.”

“I’m sure.” Katie rolled her eyes as James shot Zeke a c**k-eyed look.

“What?” Zeke shrugged, seemingly unaware of the double-entondra of his remark. Katie turned and headed back towards her house. She did not have much patience for Zeke’s smart mouth.

“Whatever.” She looked back at the brothers. “At least you didn’t haul that loser bookworm, Sullivan, along with you.” The boys watched as Katie disappeared into the house. Her parent’s property was large and they couldn’t tell how much she could see of what they were doing. She obviously had not noticed their accomplice.

“Hey, loser bookworm!” James shouted up at the tree. “You done up there?”

“Is it just me or has Katie gotten snottier since she made varsity cheerleader?” The pine rustled a little as the end of a thick nylon rope fell to the ground. With another rustle, Will Sullivan smoothly followed it. Will had a slight build and wore glasses. His short dirty-blond hair sprouted wildly from his head. He did not look like much of a bookworm in his battered jeans and thick flannel shirt. He was just barely older than Zeke and had grown up with the Grady brothers. His father had even worked for the brothers’ father years ago. “Rope’s secure, James. We ready?”

“Yeah. Let’s do this.” James pulled the end of the rope out to where Zeke was set up. The three boys all grabbed the rope as if to engage in a tug-of-war with the large pine. Zeke had a hold of the rope in one hand and a switch in the other. They were set to pull the tree away from the Dermitt’s house. “All right. When I give the word, Zeke hits the button and we’ll pull this big b*****d over.”

“You sure about this?” Will studied the pine with a skeptical look on his face.

“s**t, Will, it’s simple.” James glared briefly at Will. Despite being the oldest of the group, it was Will who was usually the voice of reason. This however never stopped Will from going along with whatever scheme the Grady brothers had cooked up. “The explosion will pulverize the three roots and we’ll be able to pull it right over.”

“And why aren’t we doing this the old fashioned way?”

“Because to cut it down and burn out the stump takes three days. I had basketball practice Friday. It rained yesterday.” James was beginning to lose patience.

“Bringing us to the here and now.” Zeke chimed in as he readied the switch.

“So we’ve resorted to gunpowder.” Will shook his head. His gut told him this was a bad idea.

“Oh, stick a tampon in it!” James hissed.

“Yeah, if it bothers you so much, I’ll take your share of the cash.” Zeke grinned.

“Keep dreamin’.” Will smiled a bit. The brothers smiled to themselves. They knew that with a little teasing, Will would get the blood up for almost anything.

“Do it.” James tightened his grip on the rope. Zeke hit the switch, and for a half of a second nothing happened. They thought they would have to dig up all of their hard work. They quickly learned otherwise.

The rain saturated the ground the day before. It made for easy enough digging, but also made the earth much more susceptible to give. The ground shook slightly. Goldie jumped to her feet and scurried to the far side of the yard. With a deafening roar the forty-foot tall pine tree leaped out of the ground. It shot a remarkable three feet into the air before gravity caught it and brought it back down with a thud that again shook the ground.

The boys shielded their eyes from the rain of moist earth that cascaded the yard. James was the first to realize what had just happened. The others quickly soon saw as well. The tree stood for a moment, but was ready to fall in any direction at any moment.

“Oh hell.” James muttered to himself, as adrenaline surged through is body. He quickly brought the others out of their awe. “HEAVE!” He shouted as the three quickly dug in.

“YEAH, NUMB-NUTS, WE FIGURED!” Their young backs and legs strained against the inertia of the pine. They pulled in unison, hoping against hope that their combined strength would be enough to topple the tree in their direction. Slowly, the tree began to lean. The boys gained a little ground, but did not dare allow slack in the line.

The tree began its fall. For a brief moment, Zeke smiled at what his plan had accomplished. He had not planned anything so spectacular, but he liked nothing better than a good explosion. He liked nothing better than when his father’s construction company provided him with the necessary materials to achieve combustion on large scales. Zeke’s revelry quickly came to an end as the tree headed for himself and his partners.

The boys dropped the rope and scrambled. James and Will ran one direction while Zeke headed the other way. The pine came to ground hard and loud. Its branches barely missed Zeke. He brought his hands up to protect himself, although he did not need to. Goldie came to his side after the crash. She was loyal most of all to Zeke, and sniffed him to insure he was indeed unhurt. The young men approached the hole left by the tree and the blast.

“Jesus Crackers.” Will shook his head in amazement. Goldie sniffed the outer edge of the crater and then descended in. The hole was a little deeper than four feet and easily six feet across. Will looked at Zeke, who was marveling at his handiwork. “********, Zeke.”

“Damn, that was cool!” Zeke exclaimed. He was grinning from ear to ear.

“No, that was overkill.” James was quickly pondering the possible consequences, and how to avoid the unpleasant ones. Katie yelling shrilly from the house interrupted his thought processes.

“WHAT THE ******** DID YOU MORONS DO?”

“Hey Will, I think she know you’re here.” Zeke grinned as Will extended his middle finger.

“How long do you think it’ll take for Moris to figure this out and find our sorry asses?” Will looked at James, hoping his friend had a plan. Officer Moris lived in the neighborhood and was not a big fan of the way Will and the Grady boys entertained themselves.

“Hopefully longer than it takes you two to fill in the crater.” Will ran for the shovels. Zeke retrieved the wheelbarrow filled with bags of soil Mister Dermitt had provided. James grabbed the chainsaw. “I’ll take care of the firewood.”

James brought the chainsaw to life and began cutting at the branches of the tree. Will and Zeke piled the branches in the hole and crushed them down as best they good manage. They didn’t have enough dirt to fill the hole, but there was enough to cover it. They knew they did not have much time before Mister Dermitt or Officer Moris paid them a visit. They did not doubt that Katie was on the phone to one or the other. Will vowed not to get sucked into anymore of the Grady’s plans. This was a familiar vow, one he had made and broken every other weekend it seemed.

They were the young men everyone knew would do great things one day. They were the boys everyone rolled their eyes at the mere reference of as they waited for news that one of them had blown themselves up or burnt their house down. This news never seemed to come. To their schoolmates living in the half million dollar homes, they were Tracks Trash. In their minds and spirits, they lived like kings.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 3:34 pm


Chapter 1


James sipped his cup of coffee as he drove his gray four-door car to school. He was trying to shake off the fatigue from a late night studying. He was also trying to ignore his brother who was gleefully hurling comments at James like machine gun fire. Normally the ride to school was a peaceful one spent listening to music as Zeke finished his homework. Zeke was still hyper from the events of the day before.

“Why no, Officer Moris, we didn’t hear any explosion.” Zeke mimicked his brother’s performance. It did not take long for Moris to figure out where the explosion had come from. “How could we hear anything while running this chainsaw?”

“Eat me.”

“My brother, the smooth-talker.”

“You can always ride the bus, dipshit.” Zeke laughed as James lost his patience. If James had it his way, his brother would be riding the bus everyday, but one of the conditions of their parents buying the car for him was that he gives his brother rides to school. Mister and Missus Grady both left for work every morning before the school bus would make the run through the neighborhood. After Zeke ran up a few unexplained absences James was handed the job of chauffeur.

“Back me up, Will. Tell James how lame he is.” Zeke turn and leaned over to the back seat where Will sat, reading.

“Considering our folks didn’t have to have another talk with the nice officer, I won’t be complaining.” Will’s nose was buried in his copy of John Barth’s “The End of the Road”. He didn’t look up as he answered. Will had the ability to hold an entire conversation while reading. Many people were put off by this habit, but Will rarely apologized for it. As opposed to the day before, Will was dressed much nicer, wearing a navy blue sweater over a button-up shirt. His jeans were loose fitting but his belt held them firmly in place. Will tended to dress up a bit for school. James thought that it made him look like the bookworm everyone said he was. He would often tell Will that he should try to dress more casual, to maybe try to get away from the stereotype. Will never did. “He didn’t buy it.”

“I know.” James looked at Will in the rearview mirror.

“He could have busted us if he wanted to.”

“I know.”

“Maybe oughta try going a week without blowing something up.” Will looked up over his glasses at the rearview. James knew that despite Will’s mellow tone that he was pretty serious. If Will even glanced out of a book during a conversation it was because he wanted to make sure he was being listened to. He raised his eyebrow and gave James a halfhearted smile. James nodded and set his eyes back on the road.

“s**t. Then what are we gonna do? Read books? Discuss poetry?” Zeke started to sulk and stared out the window.

“Worried about straining yourself?” James smiled. He had heard enough of Zeke’s smart comments that morning and was glad to shoot at least one ******** you.” James laughed and Will smirked. The car crossed the railroad tracks, taking the boys into the part of town they dreaded. They passed the suburbs filled with large houses and small yards. Zeke always wondered how anybody could live that way. Sure, the houses were fancy and spacious, but the neighbor’s house was only a few feet away. “I swear. You couldn’t swing a dead cat around here without hitting a half-million dollar house.” He shook his head, half pitying the suburbanites.

Hey Will, you gonna get your compatibility sheet?” James again looked at his studious friend in the back seat by way of the rearview mirror.

“Hadn’t planned on it.” Will answered without looking up from his book.

“You mean you’re not the least bit curious?” James smiled. Zeke had no idea what the two of them were talking about and was quickly looking back and forth between the two of them.

“I’m not even going to the dance. What do I care?” Will shrugged and continued reading.

“What the hell are you two talking about?” Zeke demanded more than asked.

“The compatibility sheets. They show what girls at school you’re compatible with.” Will answered him, again without looking at him.

“Who the hell put this horseshit together?” Zeke snapped. “What the ******** does anyone know about who I’m compatible with?”

“Remember that test you took last week?” James asked.

“Which test?”

“The stupid one.” Will interjected.

“I took lots of stupid tests last week.” Zeke was looking again back and forth between the two of them. He did not like where this was heading.

“They gave it to us in home room.” James knew that Zeke had been there that day. “Asked a bunch of questions about your personal life. All multiple choice.”

“Oh s**t.” Zeke’s eyes bulged out.

“What did you do now?” Will looked up from his book. It was obvious that Zeke had done something stupid.

“I thought it was a psych profile!” Zeke slapped his forehead. “The teachers are still watching me after the dumpster fire.”

“But that wasn’t you. Mom and Dad told the principal and the police that you were home that night.”

“Still…” Zeke’s voice trailed off. He realized what he had done.

“So you put down a bunch of dull, safe answers.” Will grinned.

“s**t.” Zeke’s head sunk into his hands. James and Will roared with laughter.

“Relax, now you don’t have to cough up a buck to see your list.” Will settled back down into his book.

“They make you pay for it too?!” Zeke turned quickly to Will. He could not believe it. James parked at the school. One of the privileges of him being a senior was that he was allowed to park closer to the building. This was handy, especially on the cold winter days. “They make you pay for the tickets to the dance and the list?”

“Yes, but if you go to the dance with a girl from your list you get a discount on your tickets.” James told him as the boys made their way down the crowded hallways. They ignored the occasional glare from some of the snottier kids and occasionally glared back. Kids from their side of tracks had always been looked down upon. Will and the Grady brothers made it clear that they could not care less. James’s place on the basketball team earned his classmates’ hesitant respect. He also used is status to watch out for Zeke. Will was just starting to feel the ire from the school. They kids had not been too rough on his the past few years since his father had passed away.

Kavendish High School was just completing two years worth of renovations. The results were a top-notch facility. There was plenty of room for all of the students. Each of the departments had everything they needed. Many of the wealthy families in the area had donated large sums of money for the renovations. Although the school was state run, it had the feel of some of the nicer private schools.

“We’re running a bit late.” Will checked his watch as the three of them hurried to bus lanes.

“I know. I’m pretty sure I got us here ahead of the bus.” The boys hurried outside to the buses and quickly found the one that ran through their neighborhood. Since there were so few children from that part of town the same bus was used for the junior high and high school. There was only one student that took the bus to the high school, and he was in deep trouble.

Caleb Abernathy had it roughest of the “Tracks Trash”. Besides being a freshman from that side of town, he was also the only biracial student at the high school. He was a small, skinny kid, not very athletic at all. He kept his hair cropped short and had an easy smile. Unfortunately, he was not afforded many opportunities to use it. He loved the outdoors, but his asthma limited him a great deal. That still did not stop him from bow hunting with his father. He was picked on for everything, but was determined not to let his schoolmates tear him down.

The verbal jabs that everyone seemed to take at him did not bother Caleb much. Unfortunately, some of the students were more hands on with their dislike for him. Carter MacTavish was the worst of them. MacTavish made up for his lack of height by being twice as mean as everyone else. He had made the wrestling team mainly due to the fact that there were not many students in that weight class. Nonetheless, he was tough and liked to show that off at Caleb’s expense. He was also a freshman and many thought that he gave Caleb a hard time to impress the more popular kids who did not care for the folks from the other side of town. Fact of the matter was that MacTavish was a thug, and the only thing he was good at was picking on people weaker than he was.

“Where do you think you’re going, Wheezy?” MacTavish smacked Caleb’s books from his hands. He stared Caleb right in the face, even though he had to look up to do it.

“C’mon, Carter. It’s too cold out here for this. Why don’t you back off, and let’s get in there before we both freeze.” Caleb went to pick up his books, but MacTavish shoved him back.

“You get to go in when I let you! Who the hell do you think you are telling me anything? You really think I’m gonna take s**t from some half-a-******?” MacTavish did not even see Zeke coming. With one hand, Zeke shoved MacTavish roughly against one of the buses. MacTavish slammed against the yellow metal with a dull thud. He stumbled a little from the impact. Zeke had not meant to shove him so hard, but he did not care whether he had hurt the little thug or not. He did not even look at the dazed youth, but instead went straight to Caleb.

“Geez Louise, Caleb. You’ve gotta be the clumsiest kid I’ve ever met. I can’t believe you dropped your freakin’ books again.” Zeke knelt down along with Caleb to help him gather his books.

“Well, you know me, Zeke. Ol’ butterfingers.” Caleb tucked his books under his arm and smiled at Zeke.

“You ******** a*****e.” MacTavish had regained his senses and stared menacingly at Zeke and Caleb. The two of them still knelt and smiled at him. MacTavish did not know why they were smiling.

“Carter.” James voice was warm and friendly as he towered behind MacTavish. MacTavish turned and looked up at James’s smiling face. “You better hurry or you’ll be late for class.”

MacTavish’s face twisted in rage. He tried to speak, but only a guttural sound came from him. He stormed off into the school. James watched him leave and the smile did not leave his face until MacTavish was out of sight. At that point he looked at Caleb who was taking a pull from his inhaler.

The four of them headed into the school together and made their way through the halls. Some of the students who had seen what had happened were staring. Will wondered why the faculty never seemed to be around when MacTavish was up to no good.

“Thanks guys. You really pulled my chestnuts off the fire.” Caleb smiled at the Gradys.

“No problem. Y’know, I don’t mind giving you a ride in.” James looked down at Caleb. James knew that he played the role of big brother to more than just Zeke. He took the role seriously, especially since the time MacTavish had caught Caleb by himself and got a few punches in before Zeke broke things up.

“Yeah, but my mom doesn’t want me hanging around Zeke.” Caleb elbowed Zeke lightly and smiled at him.

“If your momma knew how many times I’ve kept your skinny a** from getting kicked, she’d be cooking me dinner every night.”

“No doubt.” Caleb and Zeke had the same homeroom. Caleb gave James and Will a wave as they went in. “See ya, James. Later Will.” Zeke gave his friend and his brother a nod as they disappeared into the classroom.

“Hey James, why don’t you see if Betsy will give Caleb a ride in the mornings?” Betsy Ryder was the only other student at Kavendish from the neighborhood. She was a trim girl who ran track. She was in her junior year. Her place on the track team and her pretty face get her from drawing the same attentions as the boys. She and James had dated off and on, but never seemed to really get anywhere romantically.

“That’s not a bad idea. I’ll ask her later.” James waved to some of the cheerleaders who were gathered at one of the lockers. They smiled and waved back. “You sure about not going to the dance, Will?”

“Definitely.”

“C’mon. You’re getting your license this week. Get a date. Have fun for a change.”

“Not my idea of a good time, bro.” Will smiled at James. He was indeed excited about getting his driver’s license, but mainly because he could get a job after school to make some money. He was not by any means poor, but he hated asking his mother or stepfather for money. That was the main reason he did so many odd jobs with the Gradys.

“Seriously, dude. Your second year and haven’t joined any clubs or gone to any dances.”

“You’re starting to sound like Mister McHenry.”

“That was harsh.” James glared down at Will.

“You could be a great guidance councilor.” Will laughed. Mister McHenry had a habit of trying to make students get involved. Not that the students were apathetic, but McHenry did not have much of an idea about the interests of his charges. Usually, he just tried to convince the students that his point of view was a great one.

“Fine, I’ll drop it.” James threw up a hand in defeat. James looked up to see Steve Baxter blocking his way. Steve was the quarterback of the football team. Kyle Marshall and some of the other members of the team flanked him. Steve had no love whatsoever for anyone from the other side of the tracks. He saw James as a nemesis of sorts. He was handsome enough, with a strong jaw and a head of black hair, when his face was not twisted by his distain for anyone he thought was beneath him. He was staring James straight in eye.

“Well, well…” Steve sneered as he attempted to stare down James. James and Will did not even break stride. They walked right around them and did not look at them.

“Deep subject.” Will grinned as he briefly locked eyes with Kyle. Kyle looked down at Will. Kyle was the team’s running back. He was powerfully built and rugged, characteristics he received from his father. He got his blond hair and blue eyes from his mother. He watched as James and Will passed wondering how long the animosity built up in the school would simmer until everything broke loose.

“Those guys just ooze intimidation.” James chuckled as they turned the corner away from Baxter and the others.

“Thought I smelled something.” Will nudged James as they parted company. “Lunch?”

“Yeah. Late.” James gave Will a nod as he went to his locker. Will continued down the hall and made his way to his own locker. He was greeted by note taped to his locker door reading “Tracks Trash.”

“Cute.” Will muttered as he pulled the note off and crumpled it. He tried to be nonchalant as he tossed it aside, mainly because he knew that the students in the hall were watching him. Many were hoping for a reaction. They got none.

Will retrieved the books he needed from his locker and headed for his first class. He entered the classroom, hoping the day’s geometry lesson would not be too tough. Will did well enough in his classes, but he had to work at mathematics. He slid his books in the rack under the seat, and planted himself. He was a bit tired and his mood was not the best. He did not mind the idea of going to school, but he often daydreamed about going to school somewhere else. Somewhere where he would not have to hurry to school so that he and his friends could make sure that their neighbors were not being assaulted.

He sighed and thought of his father.

“So.” Kristen Langley snapped Will from his thoughts. She was a cute girl with glasses and long, curly blond hair. She sat next to Will and had known him since they were in kindergarten together. She smiled sweetly at him. “Have you picked up your compatibility sheet yet?”

Will sighed again. He knew this had the makings of being a long week.

Jaeger_Ayers


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Unbeatable Lunatic

PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 4:37 pm


Jaeger_Ayers
Still, not all of the entire community was what would be considered “privileged”.


Just go with 'Still, the entire community wasn't what would be considered privileged' or something along those lines.

Although I only read the first chapter, it's looking good so far. It defiantly caught my attention. I like Zeke and the bookworm kid. You've got something here, I'd run with it.

((I'll read the second chapter next time I get a chance to sit down))
PostPosted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 7:49 pm


Thanks, and thanks for that edit, it flows much better your way.

Jaeger_Ayers


Jaeger_Ayers

PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:53 am


Chapter 2


Will sat at the lunch table trying to read. This usually was not a problem except today he was distracted. There were a lot of looks and a lot of whispering, more than usual. He glanced around the lunchroom. At any moment he would see someone looking at him. They would look away when Will met their gazes.

Will’s patience was running short. The looks were becoming more frequent as the day wore on. Will half-heartily munched on the turkey sandwich he had brought with him. He never ate the school lunches. He overheard some more whispering and knew they were talking about him.

“Can you believe it?”

Gotta be a mistake.”

“Is there a problem?” Will turned sharply at the two students who were talking. He caught them looking at him, and their eyes widened as Will caught them staring. They were sitting only a few feet from Will and apparently had no clue that their voices carried. Will sneered at them a bit. He did not know either of them.

“No.” They both muttered weakly. Will gave them one last dirty look before turning back to his book and sandwich. He did not even finish the page he was on before he caught sight of the Grady brothers approaching him. Both of them were grinning from ear to ear.

“Will, ol’ buddy!” Zeke smiled as he and James took the seats at the table opposite Will.

“Have you picked up your compatibility list yet?” James looked like he was trying not to laugh.

“Why does everyone keep asking me that?” Will closed his book and slapped it down on the table. He glared at the brothers. He was tired of being the only one not in on the joke. James and Zeke looked at though they would burst out laughing at any moment. They looked at Will, then at each other, and then back at Will. Without a word they both climbed over the table and hauled Will from his seat.

“HEY!” Will yelped at his friends began to drag him across the lunchroom.

“Come on, tough guy.” James ordered.

“What are you goons doing?” Will demanded as he noticed that they were heading for the line to buy the compatibility charts.

“Getting your chart.” Zeke was actually snickering.

“I’m not paying…”

“If you’re not, I am.” James cut him off as the three of them got in line. Will was fed up with the situation and shook the brothers off of him. He looked at the two of them. He had never been tempted to actually hit either of them until that moment. The fact that Will’s anger was obvious on his face made no difference to James or Zeke.

“What’s the deal?” Will demanded.

“Want to know why everyone is looking at you funny?” James asked.

“Not really.” Will was lying, but he was not about to let them know that. He kept his armor up at school. He knew that if he gave some of the students a chance to know their opinions mattered to him, that the more hostile of them would use it against him. He trusted the Gradys, but there were many students in the lunchroom.

“You ain’t gonna believe this.” Zeke slapped Will on the back as they moved up in line.

“This is hilarious.” James seemed barely able to contain himself. This was not the norm for the levelheaded, elder Grady.

“What are you two whack-jobs rambling about?” Will was ready to just get out of line and had for the sanctuary of the school’s library. He doubted that James and Zeke would let him leave. The brothers shoved Will up to the counter. “Watch it!” He snapped.

“James Grady, Howard Grady and William Sullivan” James placed the order with the guy behind the counter. He was a skinny fellow making the attempt at growing hair on his chin.

“Just a sec.” The guy went to retrieve the sheets as James pulled three dollars from his wallet. The guy returned with the papers and handed them to James. “Three dollars.”

“Here you go. Thanks.” James gave him the money and then handed Zeke and Will their respective lists.

“Read ‘em and weep.” Zeke was not too keen on seeing his list, but the prospect of seeing the look on Will’s face was worth it.

“God, if only to get back to my book.” Will looked at the list. There was his name at the top and then the list of the top ten girls. Next to the names was the percentage of how well their scores matched up. The top name was the best score and when Will read it his jaw dropped. James and Zeke read it with him. Zeke roared with laughter. “This has got to be some sort of mistake.”

* * *


“This has got to be some kind of mistake!” Steve Baxter snarled as is fists clenched in rage. The paper in his hand crumpled. His face was twisted with anger to the point that even some of his friends were worried. They were sitting at the far side of the cafeteria from the line for the compatibility sheets. Among the group were members of the football team and cheerleader squad.

Katie Dermitt looked noticeably shaken. She had seen her own sheet and was not at all pleased by what was on it. No one was paying any attention to her with Steve’s outburst, for which she was grateful.

Kyle Marshall stoically ate his lunch. He had known Steve for many years and knew that he could be very emotional. Unfortunately the emotion he usually chose to display was anger. In the past, Kyle had attempted to calm Steve in these displays, and on occasion he even had some success. He knew it was a lost cause this time.

“Jealous? There’s a shock.” Michelle Lowery deadpanned. Michelle was captain of the cheerleaders and Steve’s girlfriend. Her delicate features painted a picture of boredom framed by her wavy blond hair. She, like Kyle, was also no stranger to Steve’s temper, although she was rarely the focus of it. Her soft green eyes rested on the paper in his hand. She wanted it back.

“No one ever scores one hundred percent compatibility on these sheets!” Steve growled through clenched teeth.

“Maybe there’s more to Will Sullivan than you think.” Michelle was growing tired of the situation and Steve’s mood. She knew that it would be a matter of time before he went too far with this and said something about her.

“Bullshit.” Steve retorted. “He’s a loser bookworm.”

“The only thing he’s got going for him is James Grady watching his back.” Kyle said calmly.

“Damn right. Born and raised Tracks Punks, the pair of them.” Steve seemed very focused on Will and did not seem at all bothered by the fact that he was not on Michelle’s list at all. Michelle shook her head.

“God, I’m sick of your tough guy drama.” She stood up and picked up her book bag. “I’m out.” The rest of the people at the table were quite surprised, with the possible exception of Kyle. He looked as though he expected this to happen sooner or later.

“Hey! Get back here!” Steve was less than tactful.

“Blow me.” Michelle replied not looking back. Kyle and some of the other guys kept Steve in his seat. In his present mood, it was obvious that Steve would do something stupid. Michelle walked through the cafeteria, drawing many looks as she did. Steve had caused a bit of a scene. The faculty had noticed as well but did nothing. Michelle then noticed three familiar faces in the corner.

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“This has to be those computer club dorks screwing with me.” Will recognized only two names on his list. Michelle was at number one and Kristen Langley was at number four. This would explain Kristen’s interest that morning. He was floored when he saw Michelle’s name. The fact that they had scored one hundred percent seemed impossible.

“How do you figure?” James asked. He knew almost every name on his list, but knew whom he wanted to ask to the dance already. Betsy Ryder scored fourth on his list.

“There’s no way Michelle Lowery answered the “favorite Friday night activity” question with “evening at home with a good book”.

“I don’t know.” Zeke grinned. He was thrilled that James had made him get his list. His nice safe answers had put Katie Dermitt in second place on his list. He knew Katie must be mortified, and he was formulating plans make her week a virtual hell of flowers, candy and perhaps a moonlight serenade. “I can see how “Green Eggs and Ham” could take up her entire evening.”

“Is that a fact?” Michelle interjected before Zeke could laugh at his own joke.

“Whoops.”

“Nice, dumb a**.” James slapped the back of his young brother’s head. James had no problem with Michelle aside from her choice in boyfriend. “Sorry Michelle.” She smiled and nodded in acceptance to James as she approached Will. Will was shocked at this but tried to remain cool.

“So.” Her green eyes met Will’s hazel ones. He self-consciously adjusted his glasses. “One hundred percent.”

“I hear it’s a first.”

“Yeah.” She smiled at him. “Are you planning on going to the dance?”

“Hadn’t planned on it.”

“Can I get you to change your mind?” The Grady brothers looked at each other, then Michelle, then Will and then each other again. Will seemed calm, and then James saw what Will saw. Steve was trying to make his way over to them. Kyle and some of the other football team were standing in front of him, not letting him past. Steve was obviously enraged, but was trying to hide it. Will looked past Michelle. She seemed oblivious to it. He fixed his gaze back on her pretty face.

“I think you could twist my arm.” Will smiled warmly.

“Good choice.” Michelle produced a pen from her book bag and then took Will’s hand. She wrote her name and phone number on his palm. Will felt goose bumps rise along his flesh. Her touch and the light pressure of the pen felt incredibly sensual. “Call me.” She gave him a wink and with a slight nod to the older Grady she padded off.

“Moving in on the quarterback’s girl. Ballsy.” Zeke rested a hand on Will’s shoulder.

“It’s worth it just to see the look on the ******** face.” Will, James and Zeke all looked at the football team holding back a livid Steve Baxter. Steve’s icy stare fixed Will and he slowly ran his finger across his throat. The silent threat was clear. Steve began to retreat at his friends’ urgings.

“This is fun and all, but Will, watch your back.” James Grady knew in his heart that this development would bring all the animosity brewing in the school to a head. He feared for his friend.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 12:28 pm


It seems like I shall always be one post behind sweatdrop

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James sipped his cup of coffee as he drove his gray four-door car to school.


This just seems incomplete to me. Maybe you can give a tad bit more information about the vehicle (make, model, type?) it will help paint a picture of the characters as well as the setting for this scene.

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“I thought it was a psych profile!”


hahahahahahahaha!

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They kids had not been too rough on his the past few years since his father had passed away.


Typos? pirate

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