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screaming_hawk Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 7:55 pm
Here you can post your special caracter/ armies background stories (succesor chapters story, a speacial character's past, etc)
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:16 pm
just a starter this is pre-Gadskull. for my ork warboss Radaka
Radaka is an ork warboss who was found and raised by a blind farmer. the farmer was an exinquisitor lord (a powerful general) for the kingdom of Ordo. The farmer realized the boy was strong, but he did not realized the boy was an ork. He trained Radaka in advanced strategy and combat, he also taught him to read, write, math, and his favorite skill, which he wasn't very good at, Beast taming. the old man tried to teach him respect but the only person Radaka respected was the old man himself.
One day Radaka was moving cows in the barn when a trader came and sold the man a barrel with a cut in the head and one on each of the sides, he claimed it to be fine piece of oak armor. The farmer bought the barrel for 3000 gold. After seeing this Radaka burst out of the barn. The trader ran away upon seeing Radaka. The old man stopped Radaka from chasing the trader. About a week later Radaka went out to practice beast training. He had found a small dragon and was starting to teach it follow when he heard his father scream. He threw the Dragon in a small pouch and ran to his fathers scream.
Upon arriving he saw his father get killed by a small attack party lead by the merchant. the ork in a fit of rage killed the men with his bare hands. then he grabbed his fathers 6 foot ax and went to the nearby village and killed every man woman and child.
An ork scout from the Goff clan saw this and asked him to join the Goffs. Radaka decided he had nothing left to fight for here and it was time to find another life so he followed the ork. Upon arriving he realized that he was much taller than a normal ork. The scout went into a tent and a big warboss came out. Radaka was a full head taller than the warboss. the warboss said to him, " grubaa das sayz use bigga and strongas than me's. he's wrongz no ones strongga no one." the warboss had a big claw made of bone. He swung it at Radaka and Radaka rolled to the side and swung the heavy ax at the warboss's claw. It made contact and the claw fell to the ground the warboss fell to his knee's and Radaka cut off his head giving him control of the clan. From then on he is known as Radaka the biggest badest warboss in the world. like i said at the begining this is pre gadskull
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screaming_hawk Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:56 pm
Prologue
The snow was thickening into a blizzard and buffeted us as we tramped down the rubble strew roads of the destroyed Chaos tainted city. Its not like the city had a real name, if it did, it was cast in the wind, it was only known as The Damned, a city overflowing with a chaotic taint that even the most weak minded civilian could taste in the air. Sacrifices lay in smoldering heaps and stakes grilled in the ground. The scent of blood gave a red haze to the snow around us. I could hear the Crusader’s turret turn as the searchlight scouted ahead of the troop, not that it did much good, only reaching a couple yards ahead.
I glanced over at the man next to me, his frostbitten face and white uniform glowing in the snow. The Crusader stopped and zeroed on a corner of a blown building about 10 yards ahead and the commissar in front of ordered us to stop… we waited for the anticipated rustle of a stray cat or blasphemous heretic skittering around. A deep thrumming that I hadn’t noticed earlier got louder and louder and louder until it seemed that it was just beyond the line of sight of the searchlight. Lucky guess.
The large shape of a horned walker was thickening and thickening into a solid form as it thumped towards us. Oh hell no I thought as I recognized the wretched being that lay in front of us, staring into the heart of a Defiler.
The Crusader fired away with its bolters and the familiar red flashes of our laser rifles glowed in the growing storm. We all ducked for cover as the Defiler’s assault cannon and lascannon blasted away at us. The… what would I call it, a Thing? Ok, the Thing turned for the building that we were hidden behind after demolishing the Land Raider without so much as a scratch on it. My heart started pounding and I ducked just in time as the lifeblood of the men around me splashed over me and a thunderous roar of satisfaction echoed from the heart of the demon. I heard the muffled thud of boots as a horned helmet appeared over my head, staring down over our lifeless bodies.
“FOR THE EMPEROR!!!” I cried as I unpinned three grenades, two flash grenades and a frag from my vest and blindly threw them in the air and made a beeline for the crumbling wall at the back of the building. I heard gunfire a split second before the grenades went off, the satisfying “piff” of the flashes and the boom from the frag. As I throw myself through the opening a gunshot rang out and a pain like being stung by a bee as an infant pulsed through my rib and I crumpled on the ground.
I managed to lurch up and run the way we came, relaying my coordinates and the Chaos force back to the encampment a couple miles from The Damned.
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:03 am
ya i know it sux go ahead rub it in
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screaming_hawk Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 2:48 pm
dude thats not bad at all the only thing i would suggest would be change the I to the name of the character. other than that it was a realy good story. most geeks wouldn't even take time to write that much. (p.s. if u play warhammer for real you should be able to openly admit to geekdom. i am just a cool geek with friends and a girlfriend.)
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 2:57 am
I'm a cool geek.
Friends check ( even ones who don't play
Girlfriend check ( she calls me a game geek)
4 years worth of figs to paint..chec...wait thats just a sign of geek dom. lol
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screaming_hawk Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:18 am
Ya ima geek
Friends - lots
girlfriend - pretty **** close
g2g sry i will post l8r
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 3:14 pm
any one of u guyz other than me a geek and a nerd?
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screaming_hawk Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:27 pm
im more a geek than a nerd
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