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 Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:55 pm
here's my lil poetry corner thing...i'm not a very good poet!here's the first one! mrgreen
All around me
i can feel it all around me,
this fear inside me,
that grows inside me.
shrouded in darkness,
i cry out,
i cry out to the world above.
it's all around me,
and i can't wish it away.
slowly dying,
in a demons shadow,
i begin to wither,
and give in.
i cry in the silence.
my life is torn,
tattered,
tainted.
i close my eyes,
in my mind i see nothing.
cold words seeping into my head.
i feel a warmth.
i open my eyes,
to see the light.
i feel the light all around me.
a light wind sweeps me off my feet,
it carries me to the light.
my dark soul is purified,
swallowed in light.
i reached the light,
i'm no longer ingulfed in darkness.
thats it! stay tuned for more!
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:34 pm
it was nice best poem you have ever writen i think so far lol. heart
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 1:58 pm
then all my other peoms suck so bad when ppl read them thier eyes melt away like this burning_eyes
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 8:52 pm
here's my next poem/song or whatever
my legs were aching.
my heart was pounding.
i couldn't keep chasing you.
i've given up.
so if you wanted me
GIVE UP.
you said you didnt
LOVE ME.
so if you changed your mind
FORGET IT.
it's the same with all of you
you dump her
then you
CHASE HER AGAIN.
you missed your
CHANCE.
so live without me.
you emplied earlier that you
WANTED TO.
so dont cry to me.
you should have taken me when you
HAD THE CHANCE.
i never want to see your face
AGAIN.
i've moved on...
the end! that was even worse than the 1st 1
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 9:26 pm
I think you seriously underestimate yourself. You poems are verygood!
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:40 am
wow thank u! heart i'm seriously glad! i thought the only thing i was rlly good at was drawing... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:06 pm
wow ur good ooky!
compared to you i suck!
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:01 pm
omfg! first u liked the fanfic now this! ooooh! thxs u rock!
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