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Hmm...Well I would cut out a few things.

From Alamode 1:

Cut out the part where Berii got Ucha. Instead give her Masha. And cut out the part where Masha went with Ichigo. I just want to do that for some reason.

Cut out the fact that Berii's dad looks a little too much like a female. Change how Berii's dad looks. Just make him look a bit more like a male.

Cut out the part where Ucha talked to Berii. Make Masha in Ucha's place and float around without a word. Make Berii run away from Masha. Then have Masha give Berii a pendant.

Berii's weapon would appear out of no where like what the normal mews do. And call it the "Raspberry Rod". Say the same speach as Ichigo except say "Mya" instead of "Nya" at the end. Make her attack "RIBBON RASPBERRY CHECK!" or "REBORN RASPBERRY CHECK!"

Cut out the part where Tasuku finds out about her idenity. When one of the crudasers(Royal Higness) hypnotizes Berii's classmates, make them capture her and lock her in somewhere then have the four mews rescue Berii.

Cut out the part where Ryou makes her the leader of TMM. Have a few attacks from the crudasers at school. Ichigo doesn't return yet. When Ichigo returns to Tokyo, make her go to cafe mew mew and find Berii there. Make Ichigo's cat ears and tails pop up.

Cut out the part where Berii helps Ichigo work. Have only Ichigo clean and do everything. Cut out the battle in the end. Make the mews on TV when they don't even know that they have been recorded.

Thats true. Also I noticed that Berii did not get a pendant before transforming.