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Asmi-chan

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 10:08 am


I started a short story, and I want to ask everybody else to help finish it. Here's the first part:

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The Jones held a luau one sunny afternoon in August, and invited everybody they could think of. Everybody seemed to have a good time, and there was hardly any food or drink left over after the party was done.

Except for the Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke. Somebody had brought a 12 pack with them, and at the end, only one can had been taken.

Now, none of the Jones drank Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke, so they asked if anybody else wanted it. Mr. Smith, a good friend of Mr. Jones, said his currently absent wife liked it, so he would be happy to take it with him.

When Mr. Smith came home, Mrs. Smith was less pleased than he thought she would be.

"You know my doctor told me I can't have caffeine now. How insensitive of you to bring this stuff home."

Oops. Mr. Smith apologized profusely for his blunder, and promised to take it to work with him the next morning.

"If I just leave it in the company fridge, it'll be gone by the end of the day, no sweat."

That was not exactly the case. By the end of the week, only one can was missing. The company policy stated that edibles couldn't be left in the fridge over the weekend, so Mr. Smith had to retrieve it. Instead of taking it home, he left it on someone's doorstep.


Whose doorstep did he leave it on? You get to decide the soda's next course. The rules are:

exclaim The story will end once all the cans of Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke are gone. 10 of the 12 cans are left.
exclaim Every time the soda switches ownership, one, and only one, can should be taken from the box.
exclaim You can't have more than two cans taken in one part of the story.
exclaim You can't write one part right after the other. Wait until somebody else contributes before writing something else.
exclaim There's no limit on how long a part can be, but try not to be either too brief or too wordy, all the same.

Any other questions? If not, let's write!

Glad to have you people join in! Here's the rundown of the soda status so far:

Can #12- Taken by an unknown person at the Jones party. Asmi-chan
Can #11- Taken by another unknown person at Mr. Smith's job. Asmi-chan
Can #10- Cautiously drunk by Ms. Millard at her house. princess_Im_bored
Can #9- Shared by the Geeks and Nerds Anonymous (GNA) on the school playground. McFeegle
Can #8- Opened by the Good Society of Talking Rodents in the sewers. princess_Im_bored
Can #7- Taken by Timmy Johnson on his roof. Asmi-chan
Can #6- Mixed with alcohol at a frat party. princess_Im_bored
Can #5- Offered to the Queen of the underground city of mole people. Mcfeegle
Can #4- Opened by merpeople on vacation, who couldn't drink it cause they were in a lake. princess_Im_bored
Can #3- Sprayed on the winning coach at a baseball field. Asmi-chan
Can #2- Taken by baseball loving aliens. princess_Im_bored
Can #1- Given to a tastebud-less rat. McFeegle

And that's the 12 pack for ya.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 10:46 am


It was on the doorstep of Ms. Millard. She didn't really trust soda left there on the doorstep so she inspected a can to make sure it wasn't tampered with and drank it. Nothing was wrong with it but she didn't trust it enough to want to drink anymore just the same. She also didn't want to waste perfectly good soda though so she decided that she would bring it in to the school that she worked at and put it up for grabs in the teachers lounge.

princess_Im_bored
Captain


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:38 pm


But before any of the teachers could get a hold of the soft drinks, the Underground Rebelious Student Coalition (URSC) infiltrated the teacher's lounge in order to liberate all they're delicous snacks, including the cola. However, by the time they got back to the playground Awesome Kids United (AKU) had broken away from the URSC due to differences in opinion on how the Almighty and Sacred Game of Kickball (ASGK) should be played. ASGK claimed that they had rights to the soda due to the Code of Unhelpful Children (CUC), clause 15, which stated that all students involved in hiest must get a share of that heist. Howevere, the URSC claimed that the soda was thiers according to the Powerful Constitution of Bad Boys (PCBB), amendment 5, which states that clause 15 of the CUC is made void by any break-offs from the parent organization.

Due to these differences, the URSC threw the PCBB at the AKU, the AKU then threw the ASGK ball at the URSC, shouting the words of the CUC at the top of their loungues. Pandamoniom insued, during which the disputed carbonated drink was thrown over the fence and ended up on the side of the road, except for one can which was being shared in the corner of the school yeard by Geeks and Nerds Anonymous (GNA).
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:24 am


The pack of soda was found by the Good Sociaty of Talking Rodents where they dragged it into their lair. They managed to pry one of the cans open but it had been so shaken by the trip through the sewers that in created a soda fountin which had enough force to blast them all out of their home along with the box of soda which landed on a roof of a nearby house. The explosion was later put down to dangerous sewer gases.

princess_Im_bored
Captain


Asmi-chan

PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:52 am


Timmy Johnson had been hiding out on the roof to avoid taking a bath. He saw the box of Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke, and took a can out. Just then, his bratty little sister found him.

"MOM! DAD! TIMMY'S ON THE ROOF!" She screamed at the top of her high-pitched seven year-old lungs. Startled, Timmy sent the box flying off the roof. It landed in the bed of a pick-up truck.

Six cans left...
PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 8:06 am


The pickup truck was one that had been sent out by a bunch of college guys to pick up a keg for a huge party. Once it reached its destination they noticed the soda and took out one can with the idea of mixing it into various alcolhalic beverages. On the descovery that it didn't mix well with anything they dumped the remaining cans in the box over the fence into the neighbors yard.

princess_Im_bored
Captain


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:27 pm


Where it was discovered by a scout for the underground city of the mole people. Thinking it was interesting, he decided to take it back as an offering to the Queen. However, after the Queen drank one can and discovered it was diet she ordered the scout to be put to death. The offending soda was then taken back to the surface world and thrown in a lake.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 7:18 am


The merpeople in the botom of the lake were a nice family from off the coast of canada who were on vacation. They were hardly amused when a box of soda landed on their tent one morning. They were even less amused when they tried drinking a can because they tried drinking it underwater and all the soda escaped out of the can and into the lake before they could even taste it. The youngest, a cute little five year-old was so disapointed that she threw the box as hard as she could. It is well known that merpeople are extrodinarily strong and this little one was able to throw the box into the dugout of the local baseball daimond.

princess_Im_bored
Captain


Asmi-chan

PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:19 am


The Bluejays had just defeated the Braves for the championship. The pitcher grabbed one of the cans, shook it up, and sprayed it on the coach. In all the excitement, nobody wondered why it was there in the first place, or even why it was gone ten seconds later.

Two cans left...
PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 7:16 am


It had been beamed up by a group of baseball loving aliens who wanted a suvinior of the victory, however, when they found that thier suvinior had an experation date that would prove inconviniant with the decade long trip back to their own planet they stole the uniform of the man who had hit the home run that had won the game and threw out the soda with their garbage.

princess_Im_bored
Captain


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:37 am


((That's really funny. I started writing one yesterday, but never posted it and yours is about the same thing. xd ))

Where a clan of cuisine-loving rats discovered it. They decided to use it to make a sauce for their garbage soufle. However, they soon discovered that the carbonation wreaked havoc with the delicate make of the soufle, and that the sauce tasted really bad anyway. So they gave the rest of the soda to the big rat with no taste buds.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:12 pm


The End


Thank you, McFeegle, princess_Im_bored, for participating. What'd you think of it?

And was it just me, or did this story involve a lot of rodents? Are they somehow drawn to the mysterious powers of Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke? That must be it.

Asmi-chan


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 5:59 pm


That was fun. I enjoyed creating all those acronyms for my first contribution. ^_^

Maybe we just like rodents?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 7:50 am


That was a lot of fun, we do love rodents though don't we? Though personally I like aliens as well because you can have them do anything.

princess_Im_bored
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