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 Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 12:11 pm
^^ Ok! frist order of buisness... who's your favoirte pirate so far?
Cory, Lysander or Sam? and why?
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:52 pm
I like Lysander...but that might just be because I loved the pictures you did of him! whee
I finally got around to reading the first chapter, and I love it!! heart You write awesome pirate stories =^_^=
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:43 pm
Ly is deffently a fan favoirte! ^^ everyone loves him! Well you get to learn about him in the next chapter so look forward to that!
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 6:08 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:32 am
Where's the next chapter?! crying I WANT MORE PIRATES, DARN IT!!! pirate
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:23 pm
*crings* Sorry sorry sorry! I have been working on Chaos Thoery and Deathshot (which is almost done* But I do have a page and a half so far!! but I promise I'll make it up to you with a really good story!
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:23 pm
Alright not bad after starting school and getting two story chapters down!! (this and one on my guild)
This one's more background and setting up the dominos as it where... they all start to fall in the next chapter... so have fun! Who knows when their will BE a next chapter!
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:58 pm
Valentine and Patrick are adorable! whee I like everyone in that family; they're a fun family 3nodding One thing I noticed...you seem to have something for the name Vincent xd
Oh wow, I love the "sheperding the kids off so husband and wife get alone time" thing you randomly inserted xd Nice
I really liked how you ended that chapter, especially with Cory's story heart
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 9:09 pm
AHAHA!!! Yeah... hmmm... I DOOOOOO seem to have a thing for that name don't I <-- sooo much sarcaum! I love Pat and Val! It too bad we can't see them too often! But ... well you'll be seeing more of vincent ... but I'm not telling you how!! *giggles*
*giggle snort* yeah... I like that too! they needed some "alone time" cory's a dirty minded little girl! Like MEEEEEEE!!! 4laugh
aww!! thankies! it's important later (all the little storyies in the sotry) so stay sharp!!
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 9:10 pm
Aye aye, captain! *salutes* pirate
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 9:16 pm
AHAHA!! Pirate humor!! I loves it! pirate
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:11 am
Oh what tangled webs I have mearly begun to... well... whatever you do with webs once you tangle them.
So we have the introdution of Mirra, one dark and stormy night... I wonder what her role in the story is? (as if I have to guess!)
Not only that but some of Lysander's mystery has been reviled!! Not that it clears anything up about him, if any thing it only adds confusion and not understanding what the hell is worng with me to the mix... but hey... that's what makes it interesting right?
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RIGHT!?!???? gonk
And Cory and crew are back out on the open sea ready for adventure... with one one person then they bargened for... oh what shall we do now? 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:59 pm
My thoughts are that Mirra is really Cory when she was a child, and that was a flashback...but that's just a guess... ninja
That was a really fun chapter!
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 6:21 pm
No, the story of Mirra is in real time so while she's drowning Cory's listening to the rain. I like your guess though... gives me an idea for something else...
but yes! Now the ADVENTURE BEGINS!! ^^ with the swashing of buckels and all that!
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:39 pm
Darn! And I thought I was all clever and what not! >.<
Yay!! Pirate-y goodness pirate
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