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 Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:38 pm
Just to show you how much has really changed, I'm going to post little bits that I didn't feel like just deleting when I changed them. Give them a shot and let me know if you like any elements in them better than the current version.
Thank you!
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:41 pm
Hmmm...I guess you guys wouldn't realize this. This is about that little sphere that appears first in the Calculus class. It used to be a medium to give hints as to Erik's little secret (not that he's actually a girl! LE gasp how DARE you think such a thing??!?! What do you mean you never said that? Oh. That's right....) but it got a little too complicated, so I mostly cut it out.
"Is it still programmed like that?"
"It didn't work." He was starting to grin.
"But is the program still in there?"
"Yeah, why?" Wes was grinning wildly.
"Because I think it just needs a little telekinetic boost." Erik stared uncomprehendingly. "I think that ray did something. I just skipped to my favorite song just by thinking about it." He stared at his friend. A full minute passed with them just staring at each other.
"Oh." Another half minute passed, and people started to file in. Wes woke up first.
"You'd better put this thing away." It started to pull back into the box top and turn back into a sphere. Erik gave it a little help.
"I didn't do anything."
"It must have been me. Cool!" Erik took it and put everything away.
"This doesn't seem weird to you at all?"
"Of course not. We knew it might happen." Erik sighed and got out his notes for the starting class.
Six minutes later, as class was about to start, Wes leaned over and threw up on the floor. The professor, who was winding up for a two-hour lecture, didn't notice. The class, however, did. There were many "oh my god!" s and just as many "loser" s and probably most of the class was wishing that they could leave like Wes and Erik were doing at that moment.
"Where are you two going?"
"He threw up" Erik said in reference to the boy leaning on him and staring blankly ahead. "I'm driving him to the infirmary.
"Oh. Have fun."
"Of course." They left the room and went to the bench in the hall. Erik sat Wes down on it and sat next to him. "Are you okay?"
"It just…responded to my thoughts."
"So it did bother you."
"I guess so. I just didn't really register it before..."
"Are you okay to walk?"
"In a minute."
"We're going back to that doctor."
"Shouldn't we tell someone? Like the nurse?"
"No. He was right - we weren't even supposed to be there. And besides, you know she'd call the government and have you studied."
"True. Okay." He took a deep breath. "I think I can walk now." Erik got up and helped Wes to do the same. He stood for a second and then sat back down. "Or maybe in another minute." Erik nodded and waited.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:43 pm
This one is pretty self-explanatory. Yeah....here you go.
Tanya was originally a bigger character, Wes's love interest and the source of tension between the two because Wes realized that Tanya liked Erik significantly more than him, but I got rid of her because it just wasn't working.
"This is going to take some getting used to, but I think it might be cool. How am I going to tell my parents?"
"You're going to tell them?"
"Well…yeah."
"Why?"
"Because something awesome just happened to me!"
"Are you going to tell Tanya?"
"Of course!" Erik sighed and laughed once before shaking his head and sitting down at his desk.
"I'm going to do my physics essay."
"We should post our schedules somewhere so that we know where the other is. I have a hard enough time remembering mine."
"Maybe later." He was rummaging through the drawers. "Do you know where the Advil is?"
"Yeah, in your bag."
"I really need to get more bottles of that."
"Yeah. Headache?"
"Yeah." He dumped out five and took them all.
"You've been getting a lot of those lately."
"I know." Wes sighed and fell into his bed with a notebook, a textbook, and a pen.
"Maybe you should get to a doctor and have it checked out."
"Me and what money?"
"Ask your parents. I'm sure they'll pitch in." Erik shrugged and squeezed his eyes shut, massaging his temples. "Suit yourself." He opened his eyes and sighed.
"This paper has to get done." He started typing. Fifteen minutes later he stood up and sighed angrily. "I can't concentrate. I'm not getting anywhere." Wes looked up.
"Walk around the campus a little."
"It's almost dark."
"So?"
"You know how the administrators are about curfew."
"It is pretty violent around here at night." He agreed. "Then work on something you like to. Like that sphere."
"Good idea." Erik got it out and started pounding out commands and programs into the computer. A half hour later he got back onto the computer and pounded out his essay in twenty-five minutes.
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:28 pm
#1 part
Awwww!! Poor Wes throwing up! I've thrown up in class before... NOT fun!
#2 part
Damn!! Why are wemon always getting in the way!? Why FOR ONCE couldn't it be like... a toaster or somthing!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 5:33 pm
#1 part
Yeah, haven't we all? And the younger you are, the worse the reasction I think. Once people are older they're a little more sympathetic; they wait until you're feeling better before humiliating you.
#2 part
Because that would be very, very disturbing. More so than the ErikxWes pairing should be.
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:06 am
Part #1: Luckily, I've never thrown up in class before. Actually, I've never thrown up in school at all. Poor Wes heart
Part #2: Hmm...
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:26 am
part 1 pet-chan
yeah... it's ture... as you get older people help you to the office... and the next time your back at school their crackign jokes... still not fun!
part 1 maple-chan
you lucky ... LUCKY girl you!!
part 2 pet-chan
I know the toaster would be a weird paring... but I meant like they where fighing over who would keep it or somthing. and then the toster was the thing that drove them apart.
but if you did put a paring of someone and a toaster... people might not mind a male male pariing so much anymore. Anything's better then a human aplince pairing in my book!
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:57 pm
part 1 ruin and maple-chan
Yes. Very, very lucky Maple chan. *nods*
part 2 ruin
Oh, no....you know what this means, don't you??
I've been CORRUPTED! My first thought when seeing that.....NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! burning_eyes
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:18 pm
Petaurista Oh, no....you know what this means, don't you?? I've been CORRUPTED! My first thought when seeing that.....NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! burning_eyes MWAHAHAHAHA!! I'VE CORRUPTED YET ANOTHER!! MY TOTAL IS NOW TEN BLACKENED SOULS!! ^^ it's really true! i've corruted ten people!
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:08 pm
RuinedBloodshed MWAHAHAHAHA!! I'VE CORRUPTED YET ANOTHER!! MY TOTAL IS NOW TEN BLACKENED SOULS!! ^^ it's really true! i've corruted ten people! Um....heh...sorry to burst your bubble, but you aren't the one who has corrupted me. You'll have to go to Kari for that one...... sweatdrop Wait....and Heather. And Mike. And Hammer. And....you know what, a lot of people. Mostly Kari. Yes, I blame her. Ah, no, I thank her actually, I guess. sweatdrop AND MY SOUL IS FINE, THANKS! *twitches*
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:13 pm
Yeah, you didn't corrupt me, Ruin.
I have Melanie, Adam, Alyssa, and Rachel to thank for that sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:21 pm
Lol. Melanie I can DEFINITELY see. ^^
I want to meet this Adam of whom I've heard so much. cool
Oh, and I have a little more of the alternate version that I can post tomorrow. Not right now. I don't feel like digging my flash drive out of my purse. sweatdrop
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