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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 12:21 pm


beachvolleygirl10
It took you a long time to update! I like Lehcar's new look, and please be quick with the resurecting, I like Lehcar's end of chapter notes better!


umm..taylor....lehcar isnt posting end notes.....its the "fabulous" Ynar
PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:07 pm


Yes! We are fabulous! We are Ynar! We are not a 'boy'. That signifies 'human'. And we will never be such a vile species. Now off with you, we have business to attend to! *tea*

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 7:36 pm


Imoto Lehcar
Yes! We are fabulous! We are Ynar! We are not a 'boy'. That signifies 'human'. And we will never be such a vile species. Now off with you, we have business to attend to! *tea*


*pulls 2 knives literally out of nowhere and starts making flashy knife rolls* off with me?...you must be mistaken...i am no baggage boy to be summoned and shooed away at your will.....*looks at the tea cup which immediately dissapears leaving the tea to fall splashing on the table in front of Ynar* oh dear looks like you dribbled tea all over you....you might want to clean that up *chuckles richly at his own joke* and i wouldnt get myself angry over such a trifle, young one....it is matter easily delt with....but my annoyance isnt....*throws the knives at Ynar, and more appear targeting each individual.....each stops right in front of the targets nose* but this is not the time for that *waves his hand and the knives vanish in thin air*
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 1:00 pm


I meant that I want Lehcar back because I like her end notes better than Ynar's...WHY DOESN'T ANYONE UNDERSTAND ME? emo lol, j/k, I can see what you mean. oh how I love the emo tear...

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rocko11091
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:48 am


*chuckles* heh..emo tear...chucklesness
PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 5:03 pm


Umm...I'm alive. (I want a parade) Updates are to come tonight. When I get off my lazy butt and write them. Because I really don't like this part. Part two is nothing but introducing main characters, killing off minor ones, and waiting for the awesomeness that is Part three.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 8:10 pm


ahh....good...Ynar was annoying me...i was almost going to do something irrational.....almost being the operative word....and Ynar wouldnt've been able to do much about it.... sweatdrop 3nodding xp
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 10:40 am


Chapter 47: Ships


Yelhsa woke up the next morning as the sun was beginning to rise over the rivers and streams. She walked to the window, the ground and trees looked wet, it must have rained the night before. She had promised to meet Eisor at nine o’clock and she was running late.

She shoved on her rain jacket and ran out of the inn. It was a little cold and it looked like rain, but Yelhsa kept running. To her relief, Eisor was still at the stream waiting for her.

“You’re late,” she said.

“I’m really sorry. I woke up late, I didn’t even have breakfast!” Yelhsa apologized.

“No breakfast?!” Eisor giggled. “But that’s the most important meal of the day! We can’t do anything unless we have some!”

“I guess you’re right…” Yelhsa shrugged.

“Well, come on!” Eisor started running out toward the village. Yelhsa ran to follow her. “Our neighbor, Ms. Nasus makes the best muffins!”

“I’m coming!” Yelhsa laughed. “Hold your horses!”

Eisor stopped in her tracks. “Wait! I have horses?” Yelhsa doubled over, laughing. Eisor seemed to think about it for a minute, and started laughing as well.

They ran by the port. Eisor stopped and stared at a huge ship coming into the harbor, “I wonder what’s going on. Nothing that important ever comes to our docks.”
“Hmm…” Yelhsa squinted. The ship seemed to emit a powerful aura. But when Yelhsa looked, she could only see a light mist.

“Come on!” Eisor didn’t seem to notice anything wrong. But Yelhsa did, and there was nothing she could do to stop it. So she ran off to get breakfast.

Okay...I really hate this part. I promise me posting the story will pick up in pace after they get out of the town.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 10:46 am


Chapter 48: Information Leaks


Esined woke up in a panic. “Where is she?!” Her sister left and Esined was worried sick about her. But she still went downstairs to breakfast.

“You shouldn’t worry so much.” Lehcar waved her fork at Esined. “She’s fourteen, she can handle herself.”

“How would you know?” she snapped.
“I just do.” Lehcar put her index finger to her head. “Call it animal
instinct, I don’t know.”

“I say we go look for her!” Alegna said as she swallowed her food. “Come on!” Alegna and Esined stood up.

“Hey!” Lehcar shouted. “I’m still eating!” The two girls started out the door. Esined turned around. Lehcar stuffed the rest of her food in her mouth and ran after them.

They walked into every store and house in the area. Esined was getting extremely upset. The three girls walked by the docks, Esined went up to a man moving boxes.

“Excuse me,” she asked him, clearing her throat softly, “Have you seen my sister? She’s sh…”

“Look missy,” the man told her. He was large and very gruff. “I’d like to help but I don’t have the time. See that ship?” He pointed to a ship coming in to port. Esined nodded.

“Well, we have to prepare for its arrival. Someone highly important is on board.”

“A very powerful person?” Esined asked, gaining new interest into what eh man was saying.

“Yeah. I wasn’t supposed to say anything," the man's voice lowered as he leaned in to get close to Esined, "But everyone is saying the Great Ruler Ynar is coming. Here! Of all places! Can you even believe?”

“No,” Esined murmerred softly as she ran off. Her heart was beating high in her throat. She couldn’t find the others. The streets were too crowded with people hoping for a glimpse of Ynar. Among these people was little Einahpets.

“Hello Esined! Isn't this exciting? I bet Ynar has been all over the world and…” Esined grabbed the girl and covered her mouth.

“Careful!” Esined whispered harshly. “I can’t explain at the moment, but my friends and I don’t like Ynar and we have to stay inconspicuous. In other words, don’t do anything that might bring attention to us. This means talking. Got it?”

Einahpets nodded. “I’m sorry,” she whispered.

“It’s fine.” She grabbed the girl’s arm. “Let’s go find the others!”

Heh...this is where I begin to like Lehcar as a character a bit more. I don't know why, but she gets random in this part.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 10:59 am


Chapter 49: A chapter in which Alegna and Lehcar make a new discovery and Alegna's reasoning once again conflicts with Lehcar's stomach. The chapter title is also a third of the size of the chapter itself. Which is sort of sad.


Alegna and Lehcar searched the crowded streets of the city. They couldn't pick a single face out in the crowd. THey had no clue how on Harte they would find somebody in that mess.

“Ah ha!” Lehcar shouted happily, her finger pointing to the side of the street.

“Do you see Yelhsa, or Esined?” Alegna asked hopefully.

“No! Even better! A Pastry Shoppe!” Lehcar shouted happily, pointing at the store. Alegna just rolled her eyes. “Please Alegna? We’ll look for Esined and Yelhsa later. I’m hungry!”

“But..." Alegna started in protest. But in the end, she knew the fight was futile, "Let's go inside," she sighed, defeated, "Maybe they'll find us there."

Ha! Another short chapter! And its mad random! (Yes, the titles are getting worse as I go along, I know.)

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 7:47 pm


yes...yes they are....you should have someone put some thought into them if you dont have the time to 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:42 pm


Worse is more like: "Lehcar is insane" kind of worse. They'd get better if I wanted them to.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:19 am


mhm......then make them better
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:21 pm


I agree with Rocko, but I liked the chapter title for 49...

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:55 pm


I have to agree with you on that one BVG.....that is quite an amusing title... sweatdrop 3nodding rofl
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