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 Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:47 pm
WARNING: I suck at love poems... don't read if your eyeballs have a tendancy to bleed after looking at terribly horrible poetry... I hereby remove all fault from posting this poem.
Love is
A raging beast caged within my breast.
He roars, screams,
He must flee his prison.
His fury rivals the glory of the phoenix.
His fire burns inside me,
Never to know conclusion.
The tale of a dead author,
A book half read,
A page unturned.
Love is inside me,
Inside you,
Inside us.
After all these years his prison cracks.
Love is free
He roams the sky.
He looks down on us and pronounces,
Vous pouvez me trouver au-dessus des nuages.
Love is you.
Love is me.
I love you Stephanie.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:35 pm
well done...I can't write love poetry for s**t anyway sooooo kudos to you!
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:36 pm
I've got some more on the previous page... like two I think... mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:38 pm
they're...interesting to say the least...
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:40 pm
haha, not in a very critiquing mood today, eh?
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:04 pm
no...I'm more in a *collapse on the floor from emotional stress* mood right now...I've been so strained lately and I"ve no idea why...kinda sucks ya know?
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:10 pm
Yeah, I know... maybe you should just go collapse.... but try a bed... they work better than the floor... mrgreen I know from experience.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:11 pm
*rolls eyes* and miss the argument I've got going with Isis? *ponders for a moment* that actually doesn't sound too bad lol
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:14 pm
What are 'yall arguing about? Maybe you should just tell her you don't feel good and that you're lying down for a bit. It technically wouldn't be lying... and then you'll give each other some cool-down time... ya know?
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:20 pm
absolutly not!!!!! She treats me like a little kid here AND at school or wherever we are together...I can be childish but it's my escape from my thought-asgweh---DAMNIT PATCH!!!! sorry my cat decided to lie on the keyboard...anyway she treats me like I'm inferior to her no matter where we are here or there and I'm so ******** tired of it!
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 9:28 am
Not that any of you actually care, but I'm really scared right now. All I want to do is curl into a ball and cry myself to sleep. I'm terrified right now, and there's really nothing that can be done for it... I know none of you care to hear, but I'm posting anyway... I've gotta say somethin'... it's drivin me crazy... I can't tell her, 'cause it might ruin everything... but I can't stand keeping it from her. I just don't know. Damn it all to hell, I'm supposed to be the strong one... but Jesus... I can't do it anymore. I just want to break down and crash. I want to burn. I want to know that everything's gonna be ok... but I can't. No one can assure me of that but her... and she can't even assure herself. Damn it... why am I falling apart like this? This has never happened to me before... like I said, none of you care... and I don't expect you to care... I don't expect you to even read this post... but I've gotta put it out there or I'll go crazy. Damn it, how can one person do this to me when I've put up with the hardships of so many? I don't understand, and I don't like it... I just want to be able to sit down and figure this all out.
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:22 pm
I may be able to help so I sent a pm to you...
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:35 pm
Everything's alright now guys... sorry if I scared anyone...
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:13 pm
stare you scared me way to go...and I had been having a good day I got to see blood so early in the morning...such a beautiful thing blood...I love the crimson hues...anyway that was the highlight of my day...blood the result of pointless fighting how bout you?
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 9:03 am
Hey guys... believe it or not, I've got a band that wants me to write lyrics for them!!! I'm writing the first song and I've no idea what I'm doing... I've never written a song before, and all I've done is the first verse. Here it is... PLEASE tell me exactly what you think... it's really important. THANKS!!! mrgreen
Oh yes, almost forgot... I haven't a title yet either...
From the pit of darkness
I hold no witness
To the things that maim
These eyes will never see the same
Blood drips from the sky
And my tears go dry.
Desire’s fate rests in fire,
Ice awaits the restless liar.
So what happens when the earth bleeds?
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