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2TPO

Dapper Dabbler

PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:11 pm


J Castor
Who needs a fighter for new teeth whitener
Bruce lee's the biter towards cruelty lighter
Than its victim, hitting'em back with-a something
Like a wall of hands like I just rhymed door hinge;
It makes less sense to test this against the target
Demographic when chance has it, they live at target. biggrin
Always for bargains lest, by advice, they're wanting
Something a little deadly with an oriental orange
Plays a part. Slayed a heart or two in the dark. True.
Okay well maybe one. But to never be a part two,
Embarking on journeys to learn me some schooling
So I can make it big blood clots, who's in?
None? No problem. A matter of contingency
Prepares me for the case of some dependency
Dilemma. Thought that I wasn't onto something?
Hell breaks lose when I press this red button ! ! !

FLOODING into the trash bin was intelligence then
On the brink of extinction, down right delinquent.
Whatever you were thinking, Bill Gates could not barter
Over father time's grasp since he was a mother...
May I interject into a stream of thought, crossing the
Stream with another, figure I should need a lozenger
After speaking blasphemy. FIGHT THE POWER! Done.
Now, having to return to topics in transit, buffered...
Birth of the keen without the blue screen knew things
Beyond a digital signal even if they missed a pixel.
Their reality is blurred and its hail harks an abysmal.
Yet when times give the signal, they RISE OUT OF REACH
Steadily reaching down to those whose sounds lost
An ear shot. Van Gogh's words are clear where not
A word was spoken. Merely his devotion to the arts
Resembling the jewels apart that I'm bound to teach!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:17 pm


J Castor
s0 long
J Castor
s0 long
what the hell is wrong with me? million dollar question
recollectin methods bout how to improve on perfection
second guesin be the number one down fall of all
bench ridin the wall ain't the path to how to ball
hault. either salute or give up that applause
put a stop to the faults like intermitten clause
pause. now press play on the just great on the tape
cultivatin the laws of the land and it's lay
to put it in lamens terms. i'm the greatest and in turn
paved the way on my terms. holdin court; y'all ajurned
put an end to that. lemme do my thing "rat-a-tat"
down like im wit the king wit no shoe strings and brimmed hats

On that note . . . the emperor . . . has no closings
Neither a defense nor an offense. The whole thing's
FALSE, a cage in a way in which a sage does wage
War upon the self but that is another turn of the page.
Overconfidence is prominent with the dominant-
Common sense REIGNS SUPREME: time is spent
Preaching that to comrades, peers and the likes. Alone
Let its mettle settle upon the microphone
Where you might condone its cone of ignorance,
I guess. But I'm not for spitting that ambivalence.

(no dis)

well riddle this: how do you halt ignorance?
the fault of those who impose censorship
well here's a membership to the enlightened inner circle
emcees put on a show. i'm waitin for commercials
Hershall- Walker of the game. embarkin on a train-
of thought that when attained can be often called strange
and thats where there's a strain. i ain't fittin in right
triangle through the square shape wit 3rd eye insight
and it blinks when i thinks or confronted by my shrink
it's in my blood like zinc to rid the game of its kinks
"wink" that's a heads up for those who made they beds up
now i lay em down to sleep and pray the Lord forgives, but
though they know not what they do don't give rights to play the fool
played the cool for too long you may end fallin prey to flu

However. Careful. Because of how prideful some then feel
Figuring this sort of sickness is legit to make them ill.
Pill after pillbox into old age with low wages prior.
If they wrote their life story then no page is whiter
And then some than their's; blank. Coming through, tanked.
Some of you may be alright but some of you STANK
Of it, the coveted witless trend to which many men fall
But to others it don't matter with their 360 newly installed,
No world view. So this is how we do within the crew.
YOU. SCHOOL. ME. WHILE. I. SCHOOL. YOU.
And etcetera. Not a veteran of a plethora of phases,
I'm mainly here to learn from the array of these ages.

well point him to the cages where we keep the old and grays
they got knowin's for days, so it's gotta be contained
hid it in a book to keep it aloof of the niggers
they full of vigor and claim they pull triggers. go figure
they ain't steppin through no school door without a hard knock
they got barred tops; mentally enslaved on the yard block
they ain't hip to this like i turned the tune to hard rock
no joke, fart knocks. gettin paper's harder than card stock
so they ain't apt to knoledge like they took a nap through college
acknowledge that the bottom feeders is out killin over top ramen
food for the table, but cookin wit the pot they pissin in
they'd rather catch you in they cross hairs that positive invisionin
listen, men! they fate of our would as we know could be at stake
but the jungles full of snakes who'd even steal the pearls off the gate
then high-tail it to hell. safe haven for the mentally frail
by the time i reach em food for thought they cough it up like "ughhh, stale.."

L0rde
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:32 pm


r0dan
J Castor
s0 long
J Castor
s0 long
what the hell is wrong with me? million dollar question
recollectin methods bout how to improve on perfection
second guesin be the number one down fall of all
bench ridin the wall ain't the path to how to ball
hault. either salute or give up that applause
put a stop to the faults like intermitten clause
pause. now press play on the just great on the tape
cultivatin the laws of the land and it's lay
to put it in lamens terms. i'm the greatest and in turn
paved the way on my terms. holdin court; y'all ajurned
put an end to that. lemme do my thing "rat-a-tat"
down like im wit the king wit no shoe strings and brimmed hats

On that note . . . the emperor . . . has no closings
Neither a defense nor an offense. The whole thing's
FALSE, a cage in a way in which a sage does wage
War upon the self but that is another turn of the page.
Overconfidence is prominent with the dominant-
Common sense REIGNS SUPREME: time is spent
Preaching that to comrades, peers and the likes. Alone
Let its mettle settle upon the microphone
Where you might condone its cone of ignorance,
I guess. But I'm not for spitting that ambivalence.

(no dis)

well riddle this: how do you halt ignorance?
the fault of those who impose censorship
well here's a membership to the enlightened inner circle
emcees put on a show. i'm waitin for commercials
Hershall- Walker of the game. embarkin on a train-
of thought that when attained can be often called strange
and thats where there's a strain. i ain't fittin in right
triangle through the square shape wit 3rd eye insight
and it blinks when i thinks or confronted by my shrink
it's in my blood like zinc to rid the game of its kinks
"wink" that's a heads up for those who made they beds up
now i lay em down to sleep and pray the Lord forgives, but
though they know not what they do don't give rights to play the fool
played the cool for too long you may end fallin prey to flu

However. Careful. Because of how prideful some then feel
Figuring this sort of sickness is legit to make them ill.
Pill after pillbox into old age with low wages prior.
If they wrote their life story then no page is whiter
And then some than their's; blank. Coming through, tanked.
Some of you may be alright but some of you STANK
Of it, the coveted witless trend to which many men fall
But to others it don't matter with their 360 newly installed,
No world view. So this is how we do within the crew.
YOU. SCHOOL. ME. WHILE. I. SCHOOL. YOU.
And etcetera. Not a veteran of a plethora of phases,
I'm mainly here to learn from the array of these ages.

well point him to the cages where we keep the old and grays
they got knowin's for days, so it's gotta be contained
hid it in a book to keep it aloof of the niggers
they full of vigor and claim they pull triggers. go figure
they ain't steppin through no school door without a hard knock
they got barred tops; mentally enslaved on the yard block
they ain't hip to this like i turned the tune to hard rock
no joke, fart knocks. gettin paper's harder than card stock
so they ain't apt to knoledge like they took a nap through college
acknowledge that the bottom feeders is out killin over top ramen
food for the table, but cookin wit the pot they pissin in
they'd rather catch you in they cross hairs that positive invisionin
listen, men! they fate of our would as we know could be at stake
but the jungles full of snakes who'd even steal the pearls off the gate
then high-tail it to hell. safe haven for the mentally frail
by the time i reach em food for thought they cough it up like "ughhh, stale.."

Point made along the way where I would advocate them...
For those who lack education to attach a vocation
To a life goal. Yet not everyone's in it for whole levels
Of gold metals but go figure. Still, the slow pedal
Too fast for their hearts to handle the strain of the effort
Where the body says eff it. And then others just let it.
I can see where they fell off however all of the credit
Is just due to the two breast suit that will "justly" attest to
Actions one didn't commit. Thus, the profile we
Know, hate, love and associate the whole mile we've
Measured, as if we're light years behind.
Some don't realize that light years doesn't register time.
Being a measure of space, it occupies critical faculties
To which my like brethren know not its capacity.
Having to ask if we've lost, however, say never
Even when in the Same State of being in Different Weather!
We note, the issue isn't remote. It's communal
Observed on the curb and the spraying done at funerals
They reflect what they know.
A wise man knows nothing and yet, as does a fool. What they know?

(Listening to a 1 Mic spin-off almost messed me up in writing since I had another beat in mind from the beginning.)
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:03 pm


J Castor
r0dan
J Castor
s0 long
J Castor
s0 long
what the hell is wrong with me? million dollar question
recollectin methods bout how to improve on perfection
second guesin be the number one down fall of all
bench ridin the wall ain't the path to how to ball
hault. either salute or give up that applause
put a stop to the faults like intermitten clause
pause. now press play on the just great on the tape
cultivatin the laws of the land and it's lay
to put it in lamens terms. i'm the greatest and in turn
paved the way on my terms. holdin court; y'all ajurned
put an end to that. lemme do my thing "rat-a-tat"
down like im wit the king wit no shoe strings and brimmed hats

On that note . . . the emperor . . . has no closings
Neither a defense nor an offense. The whole thing's
FALSE, a cage in a way in which a sage does wage
War upon the self but that is another turn of the page.
Overconfidence is prominent with the dominant-
Common sense REIGNS SUPREME: time is spent
Preaching that to comrades, peers and the likes. Alone
Let its mettle settle upon the microphone
Where you might condone its cone of ignorance,
I guess. But I'm not for spitting that ambivalence.

(no dis)

well riddle this: how do you halt ignorance?
the fault of those who impose censorship
well here's a membership to the enlightened inner circle
emcees put on a show. i'm waitin for commercials
Hershall- Walker of the game. embarkin on a train-
of thought that when attained can be often called strange
and thats where there's a strain. i ain't fittin in right
triangle through the square shape wit 3rd eye insight
and it blinks when i thinks or confronted by my shrink
it's in my blood like zinc to rid the game of its kinks
"wink" that's a heads up for those who made they beds up
now i lay em down to sleep and pray the Lord forgives, but
though they know not what they do don't give rights to play the fool
played the cool for too long you may end fallin prey to flu

However. Careful. Because of how prideful some then feel
Figuring this sort of sickness is legit to make them ill.
Pill after pillbox into old age with low wages prior.
If they wrote their life story then no page is whiter
And then some than their's; blank. Coming through, tanked.
Some of you may be alright but some of you STANK
Of it, the coveted witless trend to which many men fall
But to others it don't matter with their 360 newly installed,
No world view. So this is how we do within the crew.
YOU. SCHOOL. ME. WHILE. I. SCHOOL. YOU.
And etcetera. Not a veteran of a plethora of phases,
I'm mainly here to learn from the array of these ages.

well point him to the cages where we keep the old and grays
they got knowin's for days, so it's gotta be contained
hid it in a book to keep it aloof of the niggers
they full of vigor and claim they pull triggers. go figure
they ain't steppin through no school door without a hard knock
they got barred tops; mentally enslaved on the yard block
they ain't hip to this like i turned the tune to hard rock
no joke, fart knocks. gettin paper's harder than card stock
so they ain't apt to knoledge like they took a nap through college
acknowledge that the bottom feeders is out killin over top ramen
food for the table, but cookin wit the pot they pissin in
they'd rather catch you in they cross hairs that positive invisionin
listen, men! they fate of our would as we know could be at stake
but the jungles full of snakes who'd even steal the pearls off the gate
then high-tail it to hell. safe haven for the mentally frail
by the time i reach em food for thought they cough it up like "ughhh, stale.."

Point made along the way where I would advocate them...
For those who lack education to attach a vocation
To a life goal. Yet not everyone's in it for whole levels
Of gold metals but go figure. Still, the slow pedal
Too fast for their hearts to handle the strain of the effort
Where the body says eff it. And then others just let it.
I can see where they fell off however all of the credit
Is just due to the two breast suit that will "justly" attest to
Actions one didn't commit. Thus, the profile we
Know, hate, love and associate the whole mile we've
Measured, as if we're light years behind.
Some don't realize that light years doesn't register time.
Being a measure of space, it occupies critical faculties
To which my like brethren know not its capacity.
Having to ask if we've lost, however, say never
Even when in the Same State of being in Different Weather!
We note, the issue isn't remote. It's communal
Observed on the curb and the spraying done at funerals
They reflect what they know.
A wise man knows nothing and yet, as does a fool. What they know?

(Listening to a 1 Mic spin-off almost messed me up in writing since I had another beat in mind from the beginning.)

i wouldnt ask them numb nuts s**t. shut a dunce up
most answers cast be nasty like 2 girls one cup
them buttoned up pencil pushers give solutions to intruders
of their diction. which is ruder? the fireman or the shooter?
"uhh, care to explain that? i doubt we can maintain that
we follow what you sayin" don't dog my slang, brainiac
"ummm, still don't follow" in your ignorance may you wallow
since most sayin be hollow, they leave us dumb:Biazarro
doesn't matter how you dress it. the truth is uglier naked
all i said is the truth's the truth no matter who said it
get it? don't let em gas you like they packed you wit unleaded
expose the credit of the heads of state weighs as Russian roulette-ish
watch they faces turn redish as i relish in what they embellish
as food for thought. what, no relish? may those heads be beheaded!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:05 pm


This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:24 pm


r0dan
J Castor
r0dan
J Castor
s0 long

well riddle this: how do you halt ignorance?
the fault of those who impose censorship
well here's a membership to the enlightened inner circle
emcees put on a show. i'm waitin for commercials
Hershall- Walker of the game. embarkin on a train-
of thought that when attained can be often called strange
and thats where there's a strain. i ain't fittin in right
triangle through the square shape wit 3rd eye insight
and it blinks when i thinks or confronted by my shrink
it's in my blood like zinc to rid the game of its kinks
"wink" that's a heads up for those who made they beds up
now i lay em down to sleep and pray the Lord forgives, but
though they know not what they do don't give rights to play the fool
played the cool for too long you may end fallin prey to flu

However. Careful. Because of how prideful some then feel
Figuring this sort of sickness is legit to make them ill.
Pill after pillbox into old age with low wages prior.
If they wrote their life story then no page is whiter
And then some than their's; blank. Coming through, tanked.
Some of you may be alright but some of you STANK
Of it, the coveted witless trend to which many men fall
But to others it don't matter with their 360 newly installed,
No world view. So this is how we do within the crew.
YOU. SCHOOL. ME. WHILE. I. SCHOOL. YOU.
And etcetera. Not a veteran of a plethora of phases,
I'm mainly here to learn from the array of these ages.

well point him to the cages where we keep the old and grays
they got knowin's for days, so it's gotta be contained
hid it in a book to keep it aloof of the niggers
they full of vigor and claim they pull triggers. go figure
they ain't steppin through no school door without a hard knock
they got barred tops; mentally enslaved on the yard block
they ain't hip to this like i turned the tune to hard rock
no joke, fart knocks. gettin paper's harder than card stock
so they ain't apt to knoledge like they took a nap through college
acknowledge that the bottom feeders is out killin over top ramen
food for the table, but cookin wit the pot they pissin in
they'd rather catch you in they cross hairs that positive invisionin
listen, men! they fate of our would as we know could be at stake
but the jungles full of snakes who'd even steal the pearls off the gate
then high-tail it to hell. safe haven for the mentally frail
by the time i reach em food for thought they cough it up like "ughhh, stale.."

Point made along the way where I would advocate them...
For those who lack education to attach a vocation
To a life goal. Yet not everyone's in it for whole levels
Of gold metals but go figure. Still, the slow pedal
Too fast for their hearts to handle the strain of the effort
Where the body says eff it. And then others just let it.
I can see where they fell off however all of the credit
Is just due to the two breast suit that will "justly" attest to
Actions one didn't commit. Thus, the profile we
Know, hate, love and associate the whole mile we've
Measured, as if we're light years behind.
Some don't realize that light years doesn't register time.
Being a measure of space, it occupies critical faculties
To which my like brethren know not its capacity.
Having to ask if we've lost, however, say never
Even when in the Same State of being in Different Weather!
We note, the issue isn't remote. It's communal
Observed on the curb and the spraying done at funerals
They reflect what they know.
A wise man knows nothing and yet, as does a fool. What they know?

(Listening to a 1 Mic spin-off almost messed me up in writing since I had another beat in mind from the beginning.)

i wouldnt ask them numb nuts s**t. shut a dunce up
most answers cast be nasty like 2 girls one cup
them buttoned up pencil pushers give solutions to intruders
of their diction. which is ruder? the fireman or the shooter?
"uhh, care to explain that? i doubt we can maintain that
we follow what you sayin" don't dog my slang, brainiac
"ummm, still don't follow" in your ignorance may you wallow
since most sayin be hollow, they leave us dumb:Biazarro
doesn't matter how you dress it. the truth is uglier naked
all i said is the truth's the truth no matter who said it
get it? don't let em gas you like they packed you wit unleaded
expose the credit of the heads of state weighs as Russian roulette-ish
watch they faces turn redish as i relish in what they embellish
as food for thought. what, no relish? may those heads be beheaded!

Typically the epitome of virility in vocab
Is no laboratory animal dressed with a toe tag
But the billions of impassioned who ration for scavengers
A means to relish and catch up while being passengers.
Got it already. Had it last week. Likely my last read
Yet the projection of the "projects" products has me...
I wouldn't know having to work among them knowing its
Modern day colonialism losing and throwing fits...
Showing fists to the likeliest opposition
Deemed DANGEROUS when only seeking nachos missing.
Not the chip on my shoulder but of what has been drawn from
The lack of proper protection via the absent condom,
Hunger for understanding. Once upon a way back
Coming from an age that couldn't come to handing
The baton to the imprisoned. Mission accomplished. Missing
A piece of the puzzle for which there is no acquisition
We listen all the long while they try to speak over
The best actions. So when our turn to speak's over
Their passion has been silenced like the troop in twilight
Wielding unlit torches so it doesn't gather eyesight
Defy light's moment by stepping ahead of its setting;
Fire solves nothing sourced to bed wetting.

2TPO

Dapper Dabbler


Dillinger - LonAB

Dangerous Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:45 pm


II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


Proven facts that rap is now a joke, I create mocks to enhance this flow.
Satire humor, creating clever notes.
These fakes only toughen up to save face, because their 'flow' is only a hoax.
Their words were never 'dope' instead consider it low.
Just because they're part of the industry doesn't make them the new prodigy of flows.
Lyrics that are low, trying so hard to make it flow, this is the 'new era', but we all know it's a joke.

Lol true story.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:01 pm


II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


and such words can be taken as a misdirection to the methods of willie lynch,
cuz even these retro-minded artists' muscle is musty, they just be axe-ing up the stench,
so while u seemingly making sense, u just barely palming the pen,
of the proverbial book of common sense, since u just criticizing now to then,
but see while u examing biggie smalls, u makin hard for new niggas to stand tall,
looking over your shoulder to get over, while u have yet to size up the front running brick wall,
it aint all showing the movable jaw with references to gun draws and broken jaws,
the story-to-tell or giving niggas hell, i mean it has to be more to the clause,
that's why as a culture, hip hop is doomed to the beats that we flow,
and u can't like an artist without a cynic claiming you strokin they ego,
now that's beef, bro; reference black star's track telling where the meat is,
cuz not all white boys is brooklyn residents, jacking the government where the cheese is,
and i know, i know, you supposed to be a prodigy, no diss, but that spot where ya teeth is,
can say more than metaphors, so it's whatever-or, u can use them skills to bring others to where the streets is

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:23 pm


J Castor
r0dan
J Castor
r0dan
J Castor
s0 long

well riddle this: how do you halt ignorance?
the fault of those who impose censorship
well here's a membership to the enlightened inner circle
emcees put on a show. i'm waitin for commercials
Hershall- Walker of the game. embarkin on a train-
of thought that when attained can be often called strange
and thats where there's a strain. i ain't fittin in right
triangle through the square shape wit 3rd eye insight
and it blinks when i thinks or confronted by my shrink
it's in my blood like zinc to rid the game of its kinks
"wink" that's a heads up for those who made they beds up
now i lay em down to sleep and pray the Lord forgives, but
though they know not what they do don't give rights to play the fool
played the cool for too long you may end fallin prey to flu

However. Careful. Because of how prideful some then feel
Figuring this sort of sickness is legit to make them ill.
Pill after pillbox into old age with low wages prior.
If they wrote their life story then no page is whiter
And then some than their's; blank. Coming through, tanked.
Some of you may be alright but some of you STANK
Of it, the coveted witless trend to which many men fall
But to others it don't matter with their 360 newly installed,
No world view. So this is how we do within the crew.
YOU. SCHOOL. ME. WHILE. I. SCHOOL. YOU.
And etcetera. Not a veteran of a plethora of phases,
I'm mainly here to learn from the array of these ages.

well point him to the cages where we keep the old and grays
they got knowin's for days, so it's gotta be contained
hid it in a book to keep it aloof of the niggers
they full of vigor and claim they pull triggers. go figure
they ain't steppin through no school door without a hard knock
they got barred tops; mentally enslaved on the yard block
they ain't hip to this like i turned the tune to hard rock
no joke, fart knocks. gettin paper's harder than card stock
so they ain't apt to knoledge like they took a nap through college
acknowledge that the bottom feeders is out killin over top ramen
food for the table, but cookin wit the pot they pissin in
they'd rather catch you in they cross hairs that positive invisionin
listen, men! they fate of our would as we know could be at stake
but the jungles full of snakes who'd even steal the pearls off the gate
then high-tail it to hell. safe haven for the mentally frail
by the time i reach em food for thought they cough it up like "ughhh, stale.."

Point made along the way where I would advocate them...
For those who lack education to attach a vocation
To a life goal. Yet not everyone's in it for whole levels
Of gold metals but go figure. Still, the slow pedal
Too fast for their hearts to handle the strain of the effort
Where the body says eff it. And then others just let it.
I can see where they fell off however all of the credit
Is just due to the two breast suit that will "justly" attest to
Actions one didn't commit. Thus, the profile we
Know, hate, love and associate the whole mile we've
Measured, as if we're light years behind.
Some don't realize that light years doesn't register time.
Being a measure of space, it occupies critical faculties
To which my like brethren know not its capacity.
Having to ask if we've lost, however, say never
Even when in the Same State of being in Different Weather!
We note, the issue isn't remote. It's communal
Observed on the curb and the spraying done at funerals
They reflect what they know.
A wise man knows nothing and yet, as does a fool. What they know?

(Listening to a 1 Mic spin-off almost messed me up in writing since I had another beat in mind from the beginning.)

i wouldnt ask them numb nuts s**t. shut a dunce up
most answers cast be nasty like 2 girls one cup
them buttoned up pencil pushers give solutions to intruders
of their diction. which is ruder? the fireman or the shooter?
"uhh, care to explain that? i doubt we can maintain that
we follow what you sayin" don't dog my slang, brainiac
"ummm, still don't follow" in your ignorance may you wallow
since most sayin be hollow, they leave us dumb:Biazarro
doesn't matter how you dress it. the truth is uglier naked
all i said is the truth's the truth no matter who said it
get it? don't let em gas you like they packed you wit unleaded
expose the credit of the heads of state weighs as Russian roulette-ish
watch they faces turn redish as i relish in what they embellish
as food for thought. what, no relish? may those heads be beheaded!

Typically the epitome of virility in vocab
Is no laboratory animal dressed with a toe tag
But the billions of impassioned who ration for scavengers
A means to relish and catch up while being passengers.
Got it already. Had it last week. Likely my last read
Yet the projection of the "projects" products has me...
I wouldn't know having to work among them knowing its
Modern day colonialism losing and throwing fits...
Showing fists to the likeliest opposition
Deemed DANGEROUS when only seeking nachos missing.
Not the chip on my shoulder but of what has been drawn from
The lack of proper protection via the absent condom,
Hunger for understanding. Once upon a way back
Coming from an age that couldn't come to handing
The baton to the imprisoned. Mission accomplished. Missing
A piece of the puzzle for which there is no acquisition
We listen all the long while they try to speak over
The best actions. So when our turn to speak's over
Their passion has been silenced like the troop in twilight
Wielding unlit torches so it doesn't gather eyesight
Defy light's moment by stepping ahead of its setting;
Fire solves nothing sourced to bed wetting.

so hold on to ya pull-ups, kid. school em on this foolishness
they give this ***** an inch, now time to show em who the ruler is
not sittin down for nuthin, but i'm thrown. gone high off life
they'd rather you come back for they hash on some karma type
but they forgot the go around. hints why i hold the crown
show the town how to say no to clowns trynna hold em down
keep ya medication. all i needs my deep meditation
they want you higher than a patient. i want natural elevation
station switchin. cringe and twitchin at all these rappers bitchin
bout what key go in they ignition, but i can be just as ignant
listen. i can roll up in a cutless chrome clutchin donuts
hold up... they use to use whips to control us
so nuts. plant this in my seeds; stay away from weeds
or take it easy. leave you wit less brain vacancies
take a knee for rule two: don't let these frauds rule you
give em knowledge like they hood dont, but back em like the hood do
good news for bad guys. come get lyrically baptized
in a flow so deep could cause ship fleets to capsize
my allies and i appose those who play the game lacostranos
hold the quotes of the glory days and face today toe to toe
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:32 pm


LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


Proven facts that rap is now a joke, I create mocks to enhance this flow.
Satire humor, creating clever notes.
These fakes only toughen up to save face, because their 'flow' is only a hoax.
Their words were never 'dope' instead consider it low.
Just because they're part of the industry doesn't make them the new prodigy of flows.
Lyrics that are low, trying so hard to make it flow, this is the 'new era', but we all know it's a joke.

Lol true story.


we can all just laugh, since the new s**t are humorous comedians
can't take 'em seriously, since recent flows are impersonating chameleons
and since most emcee's have Casper to write bars for them
money is one the way, so to them, being unoriginal is no problem

btw i never knew that ghostwriters make alot of money

GhostlyMark
Vice Captain

Invisible Humorist


Dillinger - LonAB

Dangerous Seeker

PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:48 am


GhostlyMark
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


Proven facts that rap is now a joke, I create mocks to enhance this flow.
Satire humor, creating clever notes.
These fakes only toughen up to save face, because their 'flow' is only a hoax.
Their words were never 'dope' instead consider it low.
Just because they're part of the industry doesn't make them the new prodigy of flows.
Lyrics that are low, trying so hard to make it flow, this is the 'new era', but we all know it's a joke.

Lol true story.


we can all just laugh, since the new s**t are humorous comedians
can't take 'em seriously, since recent flows are impersonating chameleons
and since most emcee's have Casper to write bars for them
money is one the way, so to them, being unoriginal is no problem

btw i never knew that ghostwriters make alot of money


Yea dude Ghost-writers make a good amount. They literally write music for people and get no credit for it, but in return of getting no credit they earn a shitload of money. You should become one you got the name for it, GhostlyMark XD JK Im kiddin.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:52 am


Qs-are-not-Gs
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


and such words can be taken as a misdirection to the methods of willie lynch,
cuz even these retro-minded artists' muscle is musty, they just be axe-ing up the stench,
so while u seemingly making sense, u just barely palming the pen,
of the proverbial book of common sense, since u just criticizing now to then,
but see while u examing biggie smalls, u makin hard for new niggas to stand tall,
looking over your shoulder to get over, while u have yet to size up the front running brick wall,
it aint all showing the movable jaw with references to gun draws and broken jaws,
the story-to-tell or giving niggas hell, i mean it has to be more to the clause,
that's why as a culture, hip hop is doomed to the beats that we flow,
and u can't like an artist without a cynic claiming you strokin they ego,
now that's beef, bro; reference black star's track telling where the meat is,
cuz not all white boys is brooklyn residents, jacking the government where the cheese is,
and i know, i know, you supposed to be a prodigy, no diss, but that spot where ya teeth is,
can say more than metaphors, so it's whatever-or, u can use them skills to bring others to where the streets is


This verse was pretty good, although you wrote some things I wouldn't necessarily agree with, but still you got skill.

Dillinger - LonAB

Dangerous Seeker


GhostlyMark
Vice Captain

Invisible Humorist

PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:29 am


LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
GhostlyMark
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


Proven facts that rap is now a joke, I create mocks to enhance this flow.
Satire humor, creating clever notes.
These fakes only toughen up to save face, because their 'flow' is only a hoax.
Their words were never 'dope' instead consider it low.
Just because they're part of the industry doesn't make them the new prodigy of flows.
Lyrics that are low, trying so hard to make it flow, this is the 'new era', but we all know it's a joke.

Lol true story.


we can all just laugh, since the new s**t are humorous comedians
can't take 'em seriously, since recent flows are impersonating chameleons
and since most emcee's have Casper to write bars for them
money is one the way, so to them, being unoriginal is no problem

btw i never knew that ghostwriters make alot of money


Yea dude Ghost-writers make a good amount. They literally write music for people and get no credit for it, but in return of getting no credit they earn a shitload of money. You should become one you got the name for it, GhostlyMark XD JK Im kiddin.


lol possibilities
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 11:09 am


LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
Qs-are-not-Gs
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


and such words can be taken as a misdirection to the methods of willie lynch,
cuz even these retro-minded artists' muscle is musty, they just be axe-ing up the stench,
so while u seemingly making sense, u just barely palming the pen,
of the proverbial book of common sense, since u just criticizing now to then,
but see while u examing biggie smalls, u makin hard for new niggas to stand tall,
looking over your shoulder to get over, while u have yet to size up the front running brick wall,
it aint all showing the movable jaw with references to gun draws and broken jaws,
the story-to-tell or giving niggas hell, i mean it has to be more to the clause,
that's why as a culture, hip hop is doomed to the beats that we flow,
and u can't like an artist without a cynic claiming you strokin they ego,
now that's beef, bro; reference black star's track telling where the meat is,
cuz not all white boys is brooklyn residents, jacking the government where the cheese is,
and i know, i know, you supposed to be a prodigy, no diss, but that spot where ya teeth is,
can say more than metaphors, so it's whatever-or, u can use them skills to bring others to where the streets is


This verse was pretty good, although you wrote some things I wouldn't necessarily agree with, but still you got skill.


hey bulldog wanna do a written colab on this beat
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKTSpkGM0ZI

GhostlyMark
Vice Captain

Invisible Humorist


Dillinger - LonAB

Dangerous Seeker

PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 11:11 am


GhostlyMark
LonelyAznBulldog_TAB
Qs-are-not-Gs
II Exadus II
This new school is dumb rap
Lets take em back to real whips and dunce caps


and such words can be taken as a misdirection to the methods of willie lynch,
cuz even these retro-minded artists' muscle is musty, they just be axe-ing up the stench,
so while u seemingly making sense, u just barely palming the pen,
of the proverbial book of common sense, since u just criticizing now to then,
but see while u examing biggie smalls, u makin hard for new niggas to stand tall,
looking over your shoulder to get over, while u have yet to size up the front running brick wall,
it aint all showing the movable jaw with references to gun draws and broken jaws,
the story-to-tell or giving niggas hell, i mean it has to be more to the clause,
that's why as a culture, hip hop is doomed to the beats that we flow,
and u can't like an artist without a cynic claiming you strokin they ego,
now that's beef, bro; reference black star's track telling where the meat is,
cuz not all white boys is brooklyn residents, jacking the government where the cheese is,
and i know, i know, you supposed to be a prodigy, no diss, but that spot where ya teeth is,
can say more than metaphors, so it's whatever-or, u can use them skills to bring others to where the streets is


This verse was pretty good, although you wrote some things I wouldn't necessarily agree with, but still you got skill.


hey bulldog wanna do a written colab on this beat
]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKTSpkGM0ZI


Wow you're the first person who asked me to collab. Anyway...I guess so yea. Im having a little writer's block but I'll still write a verse I guess.
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