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 Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:52 pm
I just have one small comment to make on your post, brian:
You started it with Tarren reacting to something Ryoku did... I just thought that since the distance between the initial action and the reaction a PHASE later, it would be better if that was omitted to eliminate confusion.
... though since it's just us and we know what he's talking about, I suppose it doesn't matter. ^^;;
The post rocks regardless.
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 6:08 pm
hmm...you make a good point...guess i forgot about that.
how about i quote the previous scene we had? it would make more sense i guess?
but good idea Kal. sorry bout that one.
s'okay Cagalli and Gaara. and yep, that seems about right lito. nice additions to what we should say. maybe we can put them in.
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:02 pm
hmm... that isn't very typical in Gundam Seed, to retrace what happened immediately before a scene. but in this case, it sounds good too. we'll just let the majority of everyone decide. Kali's suggestion is a good one too. but as she said, regardless, i love that post Brian! =3
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:42 pm
Well, they do retrace what happens in the previous episodes before the op begins though....
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[ Kazekage.Gaara ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:07 pm
It helped me... redface
I posted my little scene. I couldn't think of anything, but when the scene progresses, it'll become more interesting. I'll work off you, Brian.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 5:24 pm
Mrs. Athrun Zala Well, they do retrace what happens in the previous episodes before the op begins though....
very true ^^"
oh don't be so modest Gaara, you made a great post! ^.^
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:16 pm
yeah keep up the good work.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:29 pm
thanks
nice post Gaara. i'll be on it in a sec smile
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[ Kazekage.Gaara ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 5:32 pm
Right on. Posted again. How short is this scene? How much are we revealing... ninja
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 7:26 pm
Not too much. We can't be giving away the whole plot in PHASE four... though I suppose the exact amounts can be debated. Nothing like 'suspicious relationships with so-and-so' yet, because Daniel can provide that information when he actually meets them.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:23 pm
yeah that makes sense. i believe we mentioned we'd make like two or three posts each and move on. want me to close up the scene? Gaara can after my post if he wants to.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 1:23 pm
Um, I'll close it with Ryoku and Tarren each having a copy of the blueprint and returning to their dorms or wherever it is they are staying. You can say something to end it Brian, if my ending isn't really an "end," if you know what I mean.
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[ Kazekage.Gaara ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 2:10 pm
aww the scene is awesome Gaara and Brian! =3
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 2:42 pm
thanks angel.
i'll check to see if i need to. probably not, i'll post something just cuz i feel like i want to sweatdrop but you're doing great Gaara.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:27 pm
brianchan90 thanks angel.
i'll check to see if i need to. probably not, i'll post something just cuz i feel like i want to sweatdrop but you're doing great Gaara.
good job on your scenes Gaara and Brian.
i doubt i can write that good when it comes to the final scene. do we need to alert Hikari when we've finished the ZAFT scene?
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