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 Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 4:48 pm
just make sure that you are typing from the perspective of your character. you're the one, after all, who will be deciding her personality and attitude.
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 6:38 pm
I posted, ish it okay? confused
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Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 8:29 pm
I like it! ^^ And I wish there was a thumbs-up emoticon, something I wish every so often.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:53 am
My turn! Now, how do you guys want me to end? Some foreshadowing or why she has been so negative against what has happened to Orb or why she is so distant with their problems or something. Idk... gimmie!
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[ Kazekage.Gaara ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:08 am
Hikari, I like it. The village description was nice... makes you feel like you are actually there. Nice introduction on the village.
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 1:12 pm
Uhm, I don't know...have her talk about Cagalli. Make a personal phone call or something...
Also...great job on Ciel!!
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 4:18 pm
Thankies everyone! Haha, but I was in a bit of a rush when I typed it. My mom was yelling at me to come downstairs... whee
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 6:29 pm
^.^ yay hikari! that's beautiful writing
i cannot wait till the next phase. =3
hmm....you can also be having memories of your past resurfacing Cagalli, that and Audrina musing about Orb. things that generally stimulate even more questions...as long as we remember to answer them!
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:47 pm
lol... I'll see what I can do. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:05 pm
we are going to have to arrange roles for the next phase..we have a lot of people without roles, and some people have double roles...hmm...
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:08 pm
well who do we have already?
daniel - me
ciel - hikari
shinn - kal
luna - lito
yzak - mishu
dearka - hikari
mir? - lito (i think we were thinking of dumping something in for her)
meyrin? - lacus (we said something about her too....dunt remember what though)
...then who else?
we're missing....hodge, angel, brian, cagalli, gaara...
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:14 pm
When are we going to reveal what Tarren and Ryoku discovered? And what is the summary for the next episode? What do we want to accomplish?
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:21 pm
Mishu Kalaeris PHASE 4: Daniel is sent out on his mission, meets Ciel. Shinn, Luna, Yzak and Dearka land on OR shore and infiltrate the country.
First we need to make sure that everyone has a role.
Daniel - Sword of Kira Yamato
Ciel - Hikari_Tsubasa
Lacus Clyne - [-Lacus--Clyne-]
Shinn Asuka - Kalaeris
Lunamaria Hawke - lito wanderer
Meyrin Hawke - [-Lacus--Clyne-]
Yzak Jule - Mrs. Athrun Zala
Dearka Elsman - Hikari_Tsubasa
Lacus will most likely be giving orders to Yzak, Shinn and the others. Or Kira relays the message to them for her. In fact, how much longer will Kira be in PLANTs?Kalaeris - PHASE 5: Orb issues its official accusation against the EA. The EA, receiving the news, sends out their head Richard to issue their declaration of innocence, which is true.brianchan90 good concerns to bring up.
i'd say dump kira in phase 4 too, maybe discussing stuff with lacus.
*note, does lacus know about the mission? isn't ZAFT itself sending thpse guys over? otherwise, why did lacus send kairynn?
and yeah, for phase 5, we'd best make it so that...iunno, we include some other members. maybe random people being member #1, etc. and maybe we should introduce the A-0 by then...iunno. we'll need to get some people for that then... brianchan90 i have an idea that will join everything together:
Ryoku and Tarren can discover a hidden military base. when they investigate further, they find their Gundams, and they overhear plans to use them to destroy ORB, so Kairynn helps them take it? iunno..."Project Eternity", which can be elaborated on. that is one of the most important parts to consider after all, the master-plan.
Athrun can be there to discover Audrina's past. all his investigations will probably lead to some violent conflicts, and that could lead to an OR breakdown way on maybe in phase 40 or something.
most likely, Ryoku, Tarren and Kairynn will join with Athrun, and Kira and Lacus ltr on.
as for Daniel's mission, make it something to do with A-0 and the EA. that way he and Ciel can take them down somehow. and maybe have the ZAFT team move from investigating the OR to finding out about A-0. afterall, that evens out the number of gundams fighting on either side.
and the whole target of it all: who gets to rule all of earth? very stereo-typed, but an idea. that way most battles will be on earth, and the PLANTs are only there to bring some more aide. that will also lead to different ideas that instead of conflicts between Naturals and Coordinators, it is conflicts between the different groups living on Earth (which has both Coordinators and Naturals).
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 4:55 pm
nice! sooo.... that still leaves hodge, angel and cagalli with nothing....
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