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Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 10:11 am
•|N!ght ©re@ture$|• Part six
"Well, well, well. Isn't this a surprise." The monster turned around to see Asake and Shinichi standing at the only ally way exit. He turned away from Megumi. "Oh my, well isn't it Shinichi." The man chuckled. Shin took off his gas mask. "What do you think your doing here, night creature?" Shinichi growled. The man started to chuckle. "What are we, in the 18th century? Did these humans really not teach you proper English yet?" he wiped a fake tear from his eye. "No that's what every monster is called now." Shinichi took his gun out and looking at it. The monster is laughing a little. "What's with the cold shoulder, my old friend?" He took a step forward. Shinichi shot him in the knee. The monster fell to one knee. "I'm not anything close to being your friend." The man stood up. "Well, you ruined my pants." The man inspects his knee. "Shinichi don't act like your one of them. Your still a vampire, no matter how many masks you put on." Shinichi gave him a ugly look. "I am nothing like you monsters."
Part seven some time. Sorry if its short.
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Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:50 pm
there goes half my characters on night creatures. stupid x boxes.
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Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 4:02 pm
I deleted all my characters to the new story that i haven't made yet. i erased them because it was too many too much. i'm making a new one. it's a anime story. no matter how many time you get killed in this one you come back to life kinda like angel beats. where the kid gets killed a lot by the team he's gonna be on and comes mack to life. this story is about a bunch of psychopathic immortals who off each other for fun. Eran- Julia- Sarah- Oka- key & loc- Sasuke- Carl- Milly- Detective Deigo-
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Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2013 9:01 pm
Immortals 1
Julia sat in in a red cushion chair. Across sat Key and Loc. "So, you two must be those two causing all the trouble lately." They looked at each other and then back at her then key spoke up. "Depends where you are talking." Key sat up straight, drinking tea. She is always the one to speak first. "Please, don't play dumb. I know it is you two. I have eyes." Loc sighed and sat up. "Alright Jeez. It was us we've been offing some other immortals. Jeez don't start trying to play that game, key. She's obliviously seen through the stuff we're doing." Key huffed at him and frowned. Julia cleared her throat as her servant filled her cup with tea. "Yes... and I suppose as soon as I walked into that part of town you would kill me?" The twins gave a glance at each other and then grinned. "As I thought. So I'll take care of you before me." She picked up a remote and pushed a button. They get locked into the chair. Julia's servant hands her a knife. She pokes the tip. "perfect." She jams the knife into Loc's thigh. Loc screams in agony and pain. She then takes it out and Stabs him multiple times in the stomach. She stops stabbing him and leaving him to bleed out every where. Julia goes over to Key and slices her neck open. Julia leaves the room to go change. Leaving Key and Loc to bleed out and for the servant to clean it up. A few minutes later Julia and the servant take two trash bags out to the dumpster. "We'll have to clean the rug and get ride of those old chairs." The servant nods in agreement. From a tree Carl watches. "My, my she got rid of the twins. I'll have to pay her my thanks."
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Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:43 pm
Immortals 2
"Detective Deigo we have another scene. Right this way." He came to a scene of two blood trash bags next to a deserted dumpster. The garbage bags were torn open. "Another case of missing bodies, sir." Deigo pokes around the bags coming up with only a button. "What do we know of the victims?" A officer looked at the clip board. "There are children's bloody foot prints and the button you just found. That's it. Deigo gives out a bored sigh disguised as a frustrated sigh. "Well, take it back to the lab. Ya know, do the thing." He walks out of the crime scene and lights a cigarette. "Officer?" Deigo looked up from the ground to see a woman standing in front of him. "yes miss? Is there something you need, ma'am?" Milly swallowed and struggled to speak for a second. "W-what happened there?" She pointed to the scene. He took a drag of his cigarette. "Well, do you really need to know just take a look from here." She looked at it for a moment with a concerned face, then back at Detective Deigo. "It looks like a murder." He blew smoke upward. "Yes. Did you see what happened here or did any one walk out of here?" She thought about it. Flashing back to twins walking out of the ally last night while no one was around. She hesitated to say something. "No. Sorry, like everybody else i was tending to my own business." She lied through her teeth. "Where do you work?" His curiosity started up again. She was a little surprised about the question. "At the shop right across the street." He looked seeing it was closed for now. A officer came up to him. "Excuse me ma'am. Sir, we think we found more information." Deigo dropped his cigarette and crushed it under is shoe. "Yes, okay. Good bye ma'am. Call me if you have anything to say." He hands Milly his card. She nods and smiles in thanks. Milly goes back to her shop. Deigo watches her go back and heads back to the scene of the crime. "what do we got?" The officer nods at another officer and that one drags out a bloody nosed Carl. He has a smirk on his face. Deigo takes a second to look at him up and down. "I'll take him from here. I'm gonna have a private conversation with him across the street at the shop." Before anyone can object he is off to the shop. The bell attached to the door rings. "Yes how may i-" She turns around to Deigo with a guy hand cuffed. "Um....Detective Deigo? Do you need something?" He gives a kind smile. "Yes, i didn't catch your name." He tried to make this seem normal. "Oh yes, um, it's Milly." "Miss Milly, do you have a back room. I would like to talk to my pal here alone." She wasn't sure she should let Deigo into the back room. "I have a back room, yes. Would you like a tissue sir?" Before Carl could say something Deigo spoke. "No, my friend should be fine. Just, please, please, please, let us in there." She grabbed the key and unlocked the back room door. Deigo flipped the sigh, on the shop door, from open to closed. Milly held the door open as they enter then room. "Thank you, Miss Milly. I will repay you for this later." He gave her a pleasant smile and she gave him a unsure smile in return. He threw Carl in and closed the door but he didn't go in. This struck Milly as weird. Deigo took the key from Milly and lock the door so Carl couldn't get out. "Milly, please, can my friend stay here until tomorrow. I'll come back to him and talk with him tomorrow. For now I have to keep the key and get back to the crime seen." She couldn't protest fast enough. He put the key in his pocket and left quickly and flipped the sign back to open on his way out. Milly was left there with a custom already at the counter. She then continued her normal shop business pretending that what happen, didn't, She still kept it in her mind though the person in the back room, could be a killer. Carl had got up and listened in on what he was saying. "So, her name is Milly." He sat with his legs crossed and hands cuffed behind him for the night, until he fell asleep.
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Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 2:39 pm
•|Night ©re@ture$|• Part Seven
The vampire's smile disappeared. 'Us monsters, are where you came from. So under all that human act is a monster, just like us. They may be your family, but we are your origin!" Shinichi glared at him. "I don't give a damn anymore!" He loads a holy bullet and shoots it in to the vampire's head. The bends backwards on the impact of the bullet the stands up straight. The skin is covering the bullet "Ahahahaha, you think a bullet can hurt me?" Shinichi smirks. "Not just any bullet, a holy bullet." The vampire raised and eyebrow at him and then he started to scream blood murder. The monster clawed and clawed at his forehead trying to dig out the bullet. He clawed through skin, muscle, skull and brain. He had to do it over and over had his head kept healing. Hid hands were now covered in blood and it started to stream down his arm. "GET IT OUT! GET IT OUT!" He kept yelling as he was clawing out his brains. The vampire began to grow weak. Shinichi took out a stake. "Any last words?" the vampire was breathing heavily as his face was healing. "Go to hell you traitor." Shinichi grabbed him by the collar and stabbed him in the chest with the stake. Megumi was still sitting there, crying a little. Asake was about to go over to her but shinichi stopped him. Shinichi put his gas mask back on, went up to Megumi, and stood in front of her. "What were doing working with them?" Megumi wiped the tears from her eyes and looked up at him. Her face said it all, why and everything he needed to know. He put his hoodie on her shoulders, picked her up, and carried her out of the ally. Asake follow him out and out in the street stood Kana ready to clean the whole mess. Asake nodded to her and Kana went into the ally and started cleaning up the vampire. Shinichi opened a van door and sat Megumi in a seat and closed the door. Shinichi and Asake waited for the others. After everyone got back to the van, they got in it and left.
I say that was a Great part. Any way, part eight sometime.
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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2013 12:21 pm
Immortals 3
Early in the morning Detective Diego stood out in front of the shop, smoking a cigarette. The shop was still closed and wouldn't open for a few minutes. A distance was the figure of Milly walking to her little shop. "Detective Diego sure was strange yesterday. Why did he have to take my keys though. I ran out of a lot of stuff yesterday and had to close early. I couldn't even properly lock up shop." She mad it to the shop to find the detective standing there. "Oh hello Miss Milly! I was getting worried." She was surprised to see him standing there so early. “Hello, Detective. Did you come to get your friend?” She was hoping he was going to get the stranger out today. “Actually, I need to still ask him about some stuff. Will you be a sweet dear and help me get answers.” Diego asked trying to compliment her into doing it. “Well, um-” “Great! We’ll start right now so we can get it out of the way. Don’t want to put you out of business and lose precious customers, right?” Before Milly could answer he opened the door and walked inside with her. Diego closed the door and locked it behind them. “Milly, will you unlock the back room?” He handed her the key. “Yes, I guess.” Though yesterday Milly thought he was charming, he now made her uneasy. She unlocked it and opened the door. There Carl sat wide awake, after hearing their voices for sometime. “Well, Hello, Milly.” He greeted her, as if he knew her the whole time. Diego walked in and smacked him on the head with a piece of wood. His head started bleeding. “You don’t talk to a lady like that.” Diego said in a steady calm voice. Milly gasped as the piece of wood struck Carl’s head. “Milly grab the broom. Okay, Carl, so what were you doing in the alley near the crime scene?” Hours went by and Milly burst out of the back room crying. She ran out the front door. Deigo stepped out of the room covered in blood. "Milly? damn she must have ran to her home." He exited the store and closed the door. The sign still said closed. He made it to her house after looking a little, The door to her apartment was open a crack. Deigo walked in and sat down beside Milly on the couch. She cried on his shoulder until she fell asleep.
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Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:48 am
An Karanir Thanagor. Mor Ok Angalor. Mor Ok Gorum, Palahm Raval
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 7:46 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:24 pm
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2014 1:52 pm
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