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 Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:05 am
oOo-Az-oOo xxkathrynxx @ Az - You weren't kidding when you said it was long : p But wow, it shows you spent time on it and its beautiful all of it mainly the first half really made me think of whats going on in the world today and the towards the end, what we all are fighting for, our own version of perfection. My opinion anyway smile I finished it in half an hour. >_< It was on my mind for a long time before that though, the little things that are just so WRONG in the world where really bothering me, and out came this. ^^' I'm glad you like it, and if anyone who reads it has a DeviantArt account, I'd love for them to comment here: http://xxxazxxx.deviantart.com/art/Premontion-of-Hope-139911780 @Fluffiness: Your poetry is good too!! D: Im on DevientArt, I commented smile
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:09 am
I found a poem type thing ( xp ) I done ages ago, Its not nearly as good as anything posted here, but oh well here goes whee
They say that everyone has a soul mate,
Well I'd be happy with just one date,
I sometimes think I have no mate and that I shall never have a date.
Will I forever be lonely,
or will I find my one and only.
Is my love around the corner,
Shall we meet, I always wonder.
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:44 am
Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Aww, that's so sweet. >_<
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity...
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:48 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:03 pm
Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Your welcome, and thanks for the DeviantArt comment. >_<
Do you draw? :'3
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity...
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:39 pm
I set and wonder with a fear
Wondering, hoping, dreaming tonight
Does god get my every tear?
Does he hear my every plight?
Should I make one wish tonight
On this star above my head
To bring my loved one back in sight
From the grave no more dead
And if I cry just one more time
If I try to dream tonight
Will god hear my forlorn rhyme
Will he turn my black to white
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Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:31 pm
Ryminiscent I set and wonder with a fear
Wondering, hoping, dreaming tonight
Does god get my every tear?
Does he hear my every plight?
Should I make one wish tonight
On this star above my head
To bring my loved one back in sight
From the grave no more dead
And if I cry just one more time
If I try to dream tonight
Will god hear my forlorn rhyme
Will he turn my black to white Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Amazing. <3
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity...
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:03 am
oOo-Az-oOo Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Your welcome, and thanks for the DeviantArt comment. >_<
Do you draw? :'3
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity... Your welcome to >.< Yeah I do
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:05 am
Ryminiscent I set and wonder with a fear
Wondering, hoping, dreaming tonight
Does god get my every tear?
Does he hear my every plight?
Should I make one wish tonight
On this star above my head
To bring my loved one back in sight
From the grave no more dead
And if I cry just one more time
If I try to dream tonight
Will god hear my forlorn rhyme
Will he turn my black to white aw sweet
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Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:13 pm
xxkathrynxx oOo-Az-oOo Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Your welcome, and thanks for the DeviantArt comment. >_<
Do you draw? :'3
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity... Your welcome to >.< Yeah I do Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Re-ally? ^o^
How about you make a Art Much? thread then - where we post any arts we did? >_<
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity...
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Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:16 am
oOo-Az-oOo xxkathrynxx oOo-Az-oOo Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Your welcome, and thanks for the DeviantArt comment. >_<
Do you draw? :'3
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity... Your welcome to >.< Yeah I do Whatever happened to the values of humanity,
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality...
Re-ally? ^o^
How about you make a Art Much? thread then - where we post any arts we did? >_<
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity,
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity... Yep got an art shop here on gaia. Yeah I'll be makin a sub for art aswell smile
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:43 pm
The witches brew
A vision of great darkened things
I had turned my little blind eye
Of spells, songs, and candle strings
A lie I cry out to the night sky
Of rotten souls so dark with hope
A calling of great strive on deaths wings
The dream on an enlightened slope
Of which I brew so many thingsi wrote this and made this avatar for it AVATAR
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