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 Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 11:10 pm
Maybe I shouldn't have put that all in one post. eek
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 6:43 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 8:28 pm
I'm glad you think so, Tenda, but you know how I am about that stuff...finicky, never satisfied. sweatdrop
Maybe I should stop using that emoticon for a while....>.<...*trying to resist temptation* sweatdrop Agh! Did it again.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 3:05 pm
*Jumps in* Hello!
Just wanted to let you know that starting tomorrow I'm going on a camping trip. I'll most likely be gone for a couple of days, but I'd truly appreciate suggestions about the play above. *looks up*
And, Sweetypop, if my absence is detrimental to the contest thing, take me off, it doesn't matter. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 3:33 pm
I'm back and I'm working on a contest entry for the tie-breaker! I'll hopefully get it done tonight.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 4:12 pm
FieryKnife Alright! I've finally got around to putting my own stuff in here! I'm going to start with poetry, then work up to some stories. I'd appreciate comments/constructive criticism on them, if you have the time. biggrin They’re Waiting For YouFailure and Death: the twins of misfortune. Death is the failure of life. The strength and desire to survive slowly ebbing away, leaving us helpless Failure is the death of success. Aspirations to win fade away leaving nothing but regretful feelings. They bring agony to all people. We shrink from their pain, trying to ignore their effect on us. With denial as our mask and truth on our heels, never letting us forget that despite the pursuit of perfection, Failure waits at the door beside Death glancing at its watch, tapping its foot. Yay! I feel so good now. ^___^ I like this! Very, very much! This is way better than some of the stuff I write.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 6:27 pm
Thank you! redface Don't discredit your poems either, though! *waves arms like a spaz* Some of the stuff I've written is embarrassing to me.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:19 pm
Why? I like it an I think everyone else does too. I don't know why you would be embarased to be told that you write good.
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:08 pm
Oh, no, I'm not embarrassed by compliments, not really. I'm embarrassed with some of the stuff I've written before(but who hasn't?). You know, those stories that make you wonder why you weren't kicked out of english class. razz
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:15 am
Yeah I have lots of those sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 8:18 pm
Hey, have you noticed that we practically are the only people talking around here lately? Everything else is eerily silent...
Where did everyone go?? gonk
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 12:50 pm
I'm not sure. She pokes the guild to see if it will move.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 8:23 pm
Oh man, I hope the guild doesn't die! We just got here!
Here's another poem.
Certainty, certainty,
why do you elude me?
I would've thought I was worthy
amongst all others,
but maybe that's why I ask for you.
Certainty, certainty,
I'm reeling in the cold!
Reality is beating you back.
Many times I thought I had glimpsed
the chasm at my feet.
Certainty, certainty,
was I given a chance,
or do you help anyone at all?
I doubt there's anyone
who doesn't sometimes cry themselves to sleep.
Once again, it's titleless. Feel free to critique it.
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 9:53 pm
I like it and I'm sure I would understand it if I wasn't lazy and didn't want to shut off my stero which is blaring Fall Out Boy at the moment. heart
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 7:10 pm
That's ok. lol You can understand it later.
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