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 Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 9:29 am
dang hina! you've gotten way better, and you were good before to! Oh well. and if you'd read all my stories like you said, you had, you would have seen that, baka! okay heres my next one:
I'm like out of poems, i was looking on my site, so give me a copiple days to go through my files, and find them, i have like 4 i got back. man thats going to bug me!...
As we stare around us
The anxiety fills us.
People of all nations
Surround me
As the clock begins,
My body spins.
One minute
Is all I have
It’s only them and me
I’ll never get this chance again
Opportunity arises
I pass it with ease
But what about her
She meant well I’m sure
I shouldn’t have done that
The clock just stopped.
Ill wait this out
I’ll be hokage no doubt
It’s over
Meet anko
okay this is a realy old one i did (for hina, and pancake, it's based off the first test in the chunin exam) so please noone severly injure me, i didn't post it for a reason...it stinks! oh well here it is now
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 9:34 am
here's some stupid ones that me and hina did over the summmer during an acting course she did most of it though, because i;m really into acting
Sasuke
There once was a boy with Cockatoo hair
He used so much gel to hold it up in the air
He never let his gel out of his sight
When Naruto tried to use it he was out like a light
Sasuke never learned to share
Naruto
There was a boy who loved Ramen
He hated any type of almond
One day he was out of his faveorite food
He ran around town in a angery mood
He found his Raman because it was that common
Sakura
Sakura dies her hair pink
ever night in the sink
one day she forgot
and Naruto called her Hott
Sakura now always uses the pink ink
Shino
Shino's bugs also like to eat leaves
Akamaru choped on all the leaves like a old sleeve
Shino was mad
But Akamaru seemed glad
Akamaru suddenl got fleas
Ten-Ten
Ten-ten liked things Shap
so she hated Rock Lee's dull art
so she took a knife and tore it apart
Rock Lee didn't even see her dart
So Rock Lee bought a carp
Neji
Neji never cut his hair
so it was long and fair
Because he was afraid of Scissors
Scissors scared him more then blizzards
Neji never cut his hair
Rock Lee
There was a boy wearing green spandex
he cleaned his windows with spandex
today he lost his sunset tarp
He looked and looked but all he found was a carp
But He finally found it under a blendex
Ino
Ino liked to Shout
when she couldn't Shout she would pout
One day she shouted so loud
The it made her dead Aunt proud
You could never give Ino any doubt
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:40 pm
oi!! i made those up such a long time ago! they are so stupid i just thought they were funnny! the rock lee one was horrible...
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:14 pm
hey i helped! oh well teh lee one is weird...who came up with blendex???? we're so stpid!
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:29 pm
About your anko one that was cool but a bit confusing! well i'll try to write better ones when i have the time!
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 6:59 pm
i never made an anko one, i just helped with words like almond in narutos, and blendex in lee's..what is (was) a(who) blendex?
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:09 am
when you posted my old poems above it was a anko poem that was cool! oh and i made this friendship poem thingy....
Standing by,
All the way.
Here to help you through your day.
Holding you up,
When you are weak,
Helping you find what it is you seek.
Catching your tears,
When you cry.
Pulling you through when the tide is high.
Just being there,
Through thick and thin,
All just to say, you are my friend.
It was easy to ryme the stuff!! biggrin
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:44 pm
wow! that was really good! i think i'm actually getting teary. dang, you've changed your style alot, it used to be more fin and junk, now it;s more 'formal' more you know what i'm trying to say...more heart then mind. yeah it pulls you in better then bloodOb in BitS 1, 2, aand 3 i just realised that spells bits. i don't know what was going through your head as you rote that, ut you can tell it's deep, either that or i'm going psyco...both are proabable (
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:53 pm
000hinata000 when you posted my old poems above it was a anko poem that was cool! oh and i made this friendship poem thingy.... Standing by,
All the way.
Here to help you through your day.
Holding you up,
When you are weak,
Helping you find what it is you seek.
Catching your tears,
When you cry.
Pulling you through when the tide is high.
Just being there,
Through thick and thin,
All just to say, you are my friend.It was easy to ryme the stuff!! biggrin Wow...that is one expressive piece you have here. You portray the essence of a wonderful friend. I've heard that poetry is the heart of the writer and, if this is true, then you must be a wonderful person to be around. You've got friendship all tied up in one short but catching and emitive poem.
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 11:47 am
blondes4naruto wow! that was really good! i think i'm actually getting teary. dang, you've changed your style alot, it used to be more fin and junk, now it;s more 'formal' more you know what i'm trying to say...more heart then mind. yeah it pulls you in better then bloodOb in BitS 1, 2, aand 3 i just realised that spells bits. i don't know what was going through your head as you rote that, ut you can tell it's deep, either that or i'm going psyco...both are proabable ( The only other poems i've tryed was the little limericks from poetry class... They were suppose to be funny! Plus you didn't see the rest of my poems from poetry class they were okay I guess but you didn't want to read them. So how do you know my style?
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 12:10 pm
Well now i do, post then up here...i wish i had half as much poetry talent as you. crying Man that still blows me away.
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 4:54 pm
My poems are dumb.... Plus it takes so long to make thenand A big easer! Becase I keep on messing up! It took me a long time to make those! and only cause I felt in the mood! I guess I found my poetry inspriation, now I need to find my fanfic inspriation!
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:01 pm
I Feel
When i feel all alone
and nothing to do
i just lie on my bed
and think about you
You make me feel like
i'm the only girl on earth
I never knew till i met
u of the million that i'm worth
You always tell me
i am beautiful there's no
other feeling in the world
you stroke my hair and tell
me that i'm you're one and only girl
Me and you are gonna
stay together till the
last days of our lives
You have no idea
how u make me feel inside
i dont think it's quite good but i got a poetry award 4 it lol 4laugh
oh and by the wat who ever posted last with the sig of sailor moon omg i luv her lol
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 6:51 pm
CAli...you're crazy! taht poem is awesome! Well here's the latest of blondes suckish poems, they're all short for me, except the first one:
We Pray
For those who do a service
For the better of man kind
For those who are innocent
For all Naïve and blind
For those who take arms
For the ones they love
For those give a son
For their work and shove
For those who weep among the stars
For a lost Family or a friend
For those who help others
For it’s backwards you Bend
For all of you who love
For those who give a bit
For it’s you we pray
For everyday
For any little miracle
For the children without parents
For the wife without a man
For the soldier who fights
For those in his land
WE PRAY
Blue as the Sea
So innocently evil
So honestly false
So horribly beautiful
So purely diluted
So blue as the see
Your eyes called to me
With princess hats
And baseball bats
Adorning all you walls
All the tears I cry I’ll hide
And for what...only pride
My child you're gone
But your mem'ry lives on
In OUR eyes as blue as the sea
The Time (My eyes) -Chorus, the versus are much worse!
If you take the time
To look through my eyes
If you took the time
To see whom for you cried
If you find the time
I’ll give you a surprise
It won’t take long
To look through my eyes
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:10 pm
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