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 Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:45 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:18 am
Okay, so here's the updated jackets and one guy without the jacket and tie. Critique?
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:12 pm
Well, on the shirt, I can't really make out where the shirt ends and the white background begins in some parts. Most noticeably is on the bent arm. I'm not sure if it's suppoesd to be like that, or if you're going to have them on non-white backgrounds, but it's something to keep in mind. That's really all I can think of. 'Though the neck looks a little short compared to the bases. Are collars on suit shirts supposed to be that high? I honestly don't know. I don't have much experience with suits. n.n"
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:44 pm
Yeah I didn't notice that about the white until I posted it here on Gaia's blindingly white background. wink My site won't be white, at least, but it is annoying looking at it here.
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:37 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:13 pm
Well, being thoroughly dissatisfied with the suits, I decided to try a different style of pixelling to do some jeans. What do you think? I'm thinking I like it a lot better and should redo the suits in this style. I think it looks a lot less flat. Do you agree?
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:07 pm
Definitely looks a lot less flat. The ones on the far right look kinda strange, though. The other two look better. I'm not sure what it is about those ones.... Yeah, I like this style better than the other one.
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:16 pm
Here is the female version. I should have posted them all. (:
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 3:36 pm
<.< The bottom of the leg looks too crinkly. I wear jeans kinda like that (except mine are hip huggers), and they don't crinkle that badly. Other than that, they look good.
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 5:37 pm
Ok, I'll fix that. In the meantime, here are the redone suits. I never did the female version since I didn't like the male version, so I'll do that next. (: Better? Suggestions?
Old:
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:05 pm
Much better~ I don't have any suggestions.
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:57 am
the new suits look very posh,
like sharkskin!
surprised
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:20 pm
XD
Here's the female version. Clothes take more time than the hair, because the shape is totally different and therefore there is no cheating. I have to completely draw from scratch. wink
Is it me, or do they look like flight attendants?
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 5:24 pm
XD The blue one definitely looks like a flight attendant. I like it~
I have no criticism for these ones. n.n"
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:49 am
Wow! Those are just gorgeous! You are working so hard on these things. I am so excited to see what you do next. biggrin
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