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 Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:07 pm
Naw man, I was feeling really... I dunno... I hated everything and wanted to change it when I wrote this one.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:49 pm
Every Time
Every time she leaves me for him
it's like ten thousand cuts in my bleeding heart.
For every one of those thousand ******** feel one thousand cuts
and I just can't take this anymore.
Every time I do something for her
Every time I go out of my way for her
Every time I die for her
I get thrown away, every day
when he comes for her today.
Every time she leaves me for him
and tosses me aside like a paper bag,
I feel used and abused, so misused, so confused.
I'm tired of this feeling, tired of these scars all healing
just to be ripped open again, torn by her.
I've got to get out of this.
I've got to get out of here.
I've got to get out of her.
I've got to get out.
Get out.
GET OUT!
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:28 pm
Guys, being really, really, really, REALLY depressed apparently makes me want to write poetry really, really, really, REALLY bad...
The only problem is, I'm always ******** busy, so I never have time to write...
So that only makes me more depressed. I'm just sinking deeper and deeper and I'm eventually gonna find a crush-depth... a point of no return... and when I reach that point, there's no telling what I'm gonna do... but I've got to hold on...
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 1:08 pm
Surrounded by darkness
I can't see what lies behind these walls.
Hiding deep within my mind, a slave to the night.
Locked inside, I cannot hide my face from this deceit.
Cornered now, I turn to fight in the face of this defeat.
I cannot see beyond the veil that separates me from death.
I cannot tarry at this door, so I draw my final breath.
In the night I feel this steel, cut straight into the bone.
Now I will know what it means to be at peace, I'm finally going home.
I leave this realm of darkness, I travel through the night.
The land of light is my destination, purity and truth my right.
I've fought my fight, and I have lost. Fallen and forgotten.
But, I have found peace. A home in the earth. A place to rest.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 9:57 am
My my....
Well my old comrade, you were there for me, so I'm here for you. I've always got an ear open to listen. Believe me when I say that there is always a point of return, you just have to be willing to turn around. It can be hard, but still, there is always a choice.
Soooo, quit cha bitchin' and yank up on that so called nutsack of your's and listen up! Just because your busy, doesn't mean you can't write. I'm not exactly one to have a whole lot of time on my hands, but I still write and draw a bit, you just don't see any of it here.
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:23 pm
Lmao, thanks Chris. Always one to cheer me up. mrgreen I still think you're a b*****d for not calling me back about Ozzfest, btw. stare But, I guess I can forgive you. mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:36 pm
Untitled
This is a song... I know nobody's going to read this, since this guild is pretty much as dead as they come, but if anyone gets on, please, do look, and comment. I'm writing for a band, and I want to know if this looks good, or if I should just trash it.
Lonely and forgotten,
locked inside my cage.
My heart is all rotten,
corrupted with age.
I look back on memories,
they fill me with rage.
What I've got left of these,
is lost within the page.
In my mind I try to find
what went into that rage,
but in my mind, all I find...
is a blank page.
Pages in the Book of Life,
another one written down.
The stories tracing my strife,
enough to make them frown.
Time forgotten, known to few,
the struggle of my age.
You want to learn? All you need to do...
Is turn the page.
My mind is full of emptiness,
nothing inside of me.
My heart is full of loneliness,
nothing here beside me.
All I have is an empty book
and a longing to be free.
All the eyes, they turn and look,
they're all looking at me.
All they want is to take
the soul inside of me.
But they don't know that I'm fake,
a hollow shadow that wants to be.
Pages in the Book of Life,
another one written down.
The stories tracing my strife,
enough to make them frown.
Time forgotten, known to few,
the struggle of my age.
You want to learn? All you need to do...
Is turn the page.
Turn the page...
Turn the page...
Turn the damn page.
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 4:55 pm
*thinks* Well, I like it. I can't quite say how good it is for a song without some music in the background of my mind playing, I really like it. Flows well and rhyme is in key places, which back up the song idea. I like what it's about the most, though. The Book of Life...that's just great.
And ooooh, and band. What kinda band? Do you just write, or are do you do something else in the band? You got me interested...especially if YOU'RE the one writing the songs. It's gotta be great, at least the lyrics anyways...
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:18 pm
Thanks Isis. Well, the band is... uhh... I have no clue where it is. I just write for it and give the lyrics to the lead singer. If they were closer to me, then I'd probably play bass too. *Has a bass guitar* But yeah, they're like a punk band I guess... I've never actually heard any of the songs, so I can't tell ya how good the songs actually are. rofl
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:19 pm
That seems like it'll make a great song. The concept behind it makes all the more intriguing.
Good luck with writing those songs as well.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:43 pm
Yeah, I'm sorry about that man. We got real tight with time and apparently didn't catch the chance get up there. I know I should have called....sorry sweatdrop . Just don't try strapping my nuts to a car battery please.
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:45 pm
Thanks Ami, and yes, you should have Chris... and that's EXACTLY what I had in mind. twisted
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:38 pm
You can't even reach me now biotch...you ain't got no car! ((I just had to add the double negative for the kick of it, sorry.))
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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 6:52 pm
Bish, I will HUNT YOU DOWN AND GUT YOU LIKE A FISH!!!!!!!!!
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:20 pm
Bite me buddy. I'm sick, I'm tired, and my girlfriend might be dying....come on down and gut me like a fish, but by Odin's eye, I'll drag you screaming to Hell with me!
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