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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 7:32 pm
Dude, that is so sad.
That is kind of unlike you...I'm not used to you making something like this.
On the last stanza, I got the image of a king building his castle and locking himself up and then throwing the key out of the castle....like he wanted to be shut away from the world.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:36 pm
Question Christophe... is that a good or a bad thing? I'm sorta confused. sweatdrop
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:55 pm
Oh, I liked it...just odd coming from you.
I suppose I'm just kind of surprised, sorry.
But yes, it is a good thing I guess.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:07 pm
My... GOD... comments... from Chris... this Appocalypse is HERE!!!!!!
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:36 pm
Eat me you b*****d....
You know, you stood me up you rat ********, lol.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:55 pm
"Yes Christophe... I know where you live." Remember that a*****e? Want me to do it again b***h???
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 7:42 pm
You can bud....but this time I'll either A) Stab ya in the face or B) Shoot you in the throat.... come on bud...try it...I dare ya.
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:57 pm
Kharne Bloodhowler You can bud....but this time I'll either A) Stab ya in the face or B) Shoot you in the throat.... come on bud...try it...I dare ya. Now that I have been warned, I shall come prepared... hope you like rockets with those fries.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:03 pm
Dante Deus Kharne Bloodhowler You can bud....but this time I'll either A) Stab ya in the face or B) Shoot you in the throat.... come on bud...try it...I dare ya. Now that I have been warned, I shall come prepared... hope you like rockets with those fries. I do....just know that I won't be home now.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 5:29 pm
I'm getting frustrated... >.< I can't seem to write anything...
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 5:23 am
Yeah, sucks doesn't it?
Listen to some Cradle of Filth and Eisbrecher. That will give ya a little kick in the head sometimes..... I'll give ya the links to a couple of songs if you like.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:46 pm
Here's something I've come up with... I just hope people care enough to read it. I appreciate you Christophe, and your genuine interest in my writing... at least I know that you aren't putting up a facade... This Revolution
An army bodies marches in the streets.
The voices of the voiceless shout and screech.
The faces in the faceless crowd all melt away,
This Revolution is here to stay!
This Revolution
A Revolution of the Age.
A Revolution of rage.
A Revolution for power,
This Revolution, Revolution for the hour.
A fight we fight for what is right.
This Revolution ends the plight.
The heart of the people, together as one.
This isn’t the end, we’ve just begun.
Rise up, rise up, show us your might.
For This Revolution, we will fight!
This Revolution
A Revolution of the Age.
A Revolution of rage.
A Revolution for power,
This Revolution, Revolution for the hour.
Tonight we fight, ‘till the break of day,
Our Revolution is here to stay!
Take up the cry, tear the sky.
Howl in rage ‘till we crush our cage.
Let everyone see your scar.
Let everyone know who you are.
This Revolution
A Revolution of the Age.
A Revolution of rage.
A Revolution for power,
This Revolution, Revolution for the hour.
A Revolution of blood and gore,
this, my comrades, is war!
Our blood fills the veins of Our Revolution.
We, the people, it, The Solution.
We sway in tune with the song of Death.
Defend our cause with dying breath.
This Revolution
A Revolution of the Age.
A Revolution of rage.
A Revolution for power,
This Revolution, Revolution for the hour.
A fight we fight for what is right.
This Revolution ends the plight.
The Revolution
This Revolution.
Our Revolution.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:12 pm
You're amazing. I really love your work. [Thanks for the comment, by the way..] You're descriptive through certain ways, unique ways that is. I'm brain dead. I'll attempt to add to this comment sometime in the near future.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:23 pm
Lol, everyone's entitled to an opinion I guess, but I must say I'm not amazing. xp Anyways, thanks for the comment, and it's understandable that you're brain dead, it's late. Anyhow, I think I'm gonna write some more...
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:26 pm
Wow, I must say that it is really well written. Everything works well together and it has a kind of emotional power to it, but that probably just sounds weird to you . Anyways I think it's really good.
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