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 Posted: Sat Sep 21, 2013 6:10 pm
((Smokepaw
Reply is in the elders den topic.))
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Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2013 5:01 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... His pelt was a mess and he reeked of the elders den. But as Smokepaw walked out of the elders den, saying his farewells adn thanking them for their stories. He made promises that he would return to them and bring them some nice juicy prey, before padding forward. He had been right to visit the elders. He was much calmer now. He sat down and gave his pelt a quick cleaning as his ears sweveled toward a sound of voices coming from the nursery. He knew that his mentor was in there with the queen who care for kits brought into this clan by a rouge he had never known. But the leader was there with his sister, the queen, talking to her. He rasped his tongue over his pelt as he listened to them talking. He felt his heart go cold as he listened to them speak. These kits would probably suffer just like he and his siblings had. Yet his mentor treated them with kindness. He could feel the jealousy consume him from the tip of his tail to his now trembling whiskers. He would prove to her one day that he was going to be a great warrior, much better then even she was. To distract himself he continued to clean his pelt rather roughly. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2013 5:28 pm
<Spottedpath> The she-cat nodded and lead them out into the camp clearing. Her whiskers twitched as she mewed "I'm a big, nasty, blind, ugly badger that's wandered into our camp. What are you going to do?" Spottedpath started swinging her head, trying to impersonate a badger. Her green eyes bright and happy. She tried very hard not to keep herself from laughing at herself, and almost did, but held a straight face as she heavily moved towards the kits, rather awkwardly and slowly. She didn't notice her apprentice there. Later, she would be upset with herself that she wasn't aware of the cats around her.
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Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 12:22 am
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... His ear's twitched as he looked to the nursery, an evil glint in his smokey blue eyes. His lips twisted into an evil smirk. Unknown to his mentor he was going to be using this on her for a very long time. He lifted his head and twisted his head so that she could see that Smokepaw was indeed watching her. Though as he watched her interact with the two kits he silently wondered how his sisters were doing...or what they were doing for that matter. They were probably out with their mentors enjoying the day while he was stuck here in camp while his mentor played badger with kits that weren't even her's. He felt bitter jealously in his chest as he watched her. She was so carefree, as if clan life wasn't important to her. The clan leader was no better in his opinion. While he was thinking his gaze had drifted upward toward a robin that was flying. He watched as it landed just outside of the camp. His whiskers twitched with excitement. Trying not to draw too much attention to himself the tom casually looked over to the nursery. Neither of the older cats were watching him, in fact none of them seemed to know he exsisted. He rose to his paws, stretching one back leg then the other before trotting off. Without worrying about being caught he walked out the entrance and began to stalk the robin that was only a few pawsteps outside of camp. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 4:56 pm
>Spottedpath< The deputy wanted to turn around and snarl at her apprentice, she didn't do so because: 1.They were in a public place, where she couldn't speak with him properly 2. There were kits around. 3. There were her kits watching her every move. All the same, his presence put her on edge. She would never strike her own clanmate, and especially her own apprentice. He did make her want to, at times. She wondered why they were such opposites. As she was thinking into that thought Spiritkit had bitten her tail and Frostkit was staring wide-eyed at her. His gaze was serious. She didn't like it when he got in this 'mode'. He wouldn't look away until she did what he wanted. Thankfully, he didn't do it very often. She knew what he wanted her to do. She sighed. She had a feeling her apprentice wouldn't listen to her anymore, but she could be wrong. [Frostkit] He could easily tell by Spottedpath's and her apprentice's body language that they weren't to friendly with each other. He doesn't know his name of the apprentice because if he asks his adopted mother, she wouldn't answer and would tell him it was none of his business. It seemed that whatever was going on between them, there were some issues. He kept this to himself. His blue eyes burned into the deputy's. She had messed up with her apprentice, and they both obviously needed to apologize, and soon. ]Spiritkit[ She pranced around the she-cat. Her fur fluffed up and she scampered one way to the another. She got disappointed when the appearance of Smokepaw bothered her mother. She wanted to claw his face off! He was making Spottedpath upset. Her eyes were little pools of rage. She took out her anger on the deputy's tail. Which, made sense at the time... For some reason...
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Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:00 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... The robin that was oblivious to his approach pecked at a worm that was halfway in the ground. Smokepaw Wound his way around till he was behidn the bird before pouncing on it and killing it with a quick n** to the neck. When the bird went limp he gently picked it up and carried it back into the camp. He turned his head in the direction of the nursery den to see his mentor still playing. His nose scrunched in disgust as he turned his head away while rolling his eyes before walking toward the elder den. He gave them his freshly caught prey and they thanked him for it before he walked away and decided to see if any other cats needed his help. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Sat Oct 19, 2013 9:16 pm
> Spottedpath< The deputy called over her apprentice. He had nothing better to do anyways. She told the kits to play nearby, and she would deal with her apprentice. She only added the last part because Spiritkit wanted to 'teach him not to make Spottedpath upset'. She did dearly love the kits. If anycat lay a claw on them, they would have to face her wrath. She was also very known for keeping her head in a tough situation. Well, unless that was judged by her apprentice, then he would say everything she did wrong and make her look bad. She closed her eyes when the apprentice finally padded over, "my kit wont stop glaring at me unless we resolve our issue. It's rather sad a kit could pick up on our dislike towards each other." She opened her eyes and her eyes grew bright with competiveness, "how about we resolve this with a tree battle. Of course, we have to keep our claws sheathed, and if one cat voids this rule, or goes back to camp before this is resolved, the other wins. If you win, I will immediately make you a warrior, but if you lose. You will have to listen to me, and respect me as your deputy, and mentor at that." her sly green eyes wanted him to take the bait. She was, in fact, taught how to fight in trees. The main thing is speed. Another was endurance. It wasn't a race, but, you have to move fast, or, the branch will snap and both cats will go down, and quite possibly die. She was willing to show him why, she was, his mentor. Their leader must've known about her secret training.
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Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:49 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... When his mentor called him over Smokepaw took his sweet time coming over to her. When he was finally in front of her he stood there barely listening. She was talking about the kits having a problem about their fighting. Well it's none of their business. he bitterly thought to himself as he leveled a glare of annoyance on them before turning it to his mentor. His eye brow arched at her suggestion and he was almost quick to jump at it. But as soon as he opened his mouth to agree he quickly snapped it shut. He eyed her curiously, taking into account her experience and long legs. Knowing he didn't have a chance he countered "And just why would I foolishly agree to that." he smoothly purred out as he sat back on his hunches and raised a paw to his mouth. He gave it a lick twice before continuing. "Last I check i've been asking you to teach me just that for over a moon. And like today we end up arguing without ever getting to it. I'm all up for challenges but i'd like one that I actually have a chance at." he pinned her with a stare that told her that he wasn't in the mood to play her games just to appease her kits. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 6:10 pm
>Spottedpath<
She looked straight at him and mewed, "I thought you would have agreed, since you love getting in trees so much, and proving me wrong. I guess you were smarter than I took you for. Also, I'm sorry I acted hateful towards you. That's the way I was trained. 'You don't argue, and you listen to every word I say', that was his saying. The reason I didn't bother trying to help you when you fell out of the tee earlier was because, I had watched my friend fall out of a tree, and my mentor said not to help them. They had a broken neck. They died quickly. 'If you can't get up, you're dead...' that's my mentor's only words when they fell. We had to sit there and wait for them to die. He taught me that, if you are going to fight in the trees, you have to know what you're doing, they obviously didn't." Her voice became cold as she continued, "if you were to have accepted my offer, you almost certainly would have died. No medicine cat could have saved you. I couldn't have taken you to them anyways, you would have died even faster." The deputy closed her eyes, "my point is, you thought before leaping into something stupid to prove yourself. You are ready to become a warrior, Smokepaw" and got up. She said nothing more, but stalked out of camp. She needed to refine her training...
((Out of camp))
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 1:42 am
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... He met her gaze as she spoke to him. Part of him was tempted to make his usual comments of her lousy mentoring. But just this once he kept his mouth shut and allowed her to continue. Her story caused his pelt to ruffle with uneasiness. He silently wondered how any cat could be so cruel, especially to a member of their own clan. What's worse, this cat was suppose to be their leader after Sunstar passed away. The thought didn't sit well with him. But beyond all those doubts and thoughts the last little bit nearly knocked him off his paws. He had a look of pure shock on his face, his jaw even dropped a little. "Your not yanking my paw are you?" he asked her when he had found his voice again. He looked a little doubtful, but Spottedpath was many things, a joker was not one of them. He watched her leave happiness feeling him! He didn't feel the least bit of sadness that he would no longer be an apprentice. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can.
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Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 2:33 pm
 >Silverpaw<Soft hearted Apprentice of Lotusclan When I came from the forest...
I can't really recall what happened...
Now I spend my life in the clans of stories... Young Silverpaw watched as her brother left the camp, it was probably bad of her but she couldn't help but feel a little jealous. Even though he would never admit it to her....or maybe he didn't know it himself, he had feelings for Spottedpath. Soon one day he'd realize this and Silverpaw would be left to deal with the clan alone. Her fur ruffled at the thought as foriegn feelings seeped into her. Not liking them one bit she jumped to her paws and trotted over to Smokepaw calling out "How's it feel to know you'll be a warrior any day now." there was a purr in her voice but it was forced. He looked to her with his chest puffed out. "Great, means I won't have to deal with having Spottedpath looking over my shoulders all the time." he told her. Three moons older then her Smokepaw was much bigger then her, even now she felt like he was towering over her. But she could see in his shining eyes that he was clearly proud of himself. "You'll have to take me out with you when your doing a border patrol." she eagerly suggested. Though Demonshadow often took her with him it'd be nice to go with a cat that's not her brother or mentor for once. My mother and brother were very sick....
But Demonshadow claims that's for the best...
Trying to be the best I can be.
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Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 3:32 pm
<Spottedpath>
She looked back at Demonshadow, and answered excitedly, "you'll see." as she leaped into camp. She quickly regained her composer, and padded over to her apprentice, her eyes twinkling. "I want you to lead the border patrol tonight. Go and get the cats you want to take. Smokepaw, this may be your last mission as a apprentice, do it well." Her eyes were peaceful as the lapping tide of the lake. If he failed this, it was on his own accord. He couldn't blame her, if he wasn't ready. The deputy sat down, she didn't have to do anything. If he messed up, she would hear about it when he got back. She didn't care if he made minor mistakes, she just wanted to know if he was ready to have the responsibility of a warrior.
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Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 10:34 pm
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... Smokepaw was having fun talking to Silverpaw, that was until he saw his mentor and that goody two shoe tom Demonshadow. As she approached him he could feel his warrior status slipping from his paws. He glowered at her, his fur ruffled up in all directions. There was no way he was going to let her take it from him just cause she spoke to Demonshadow. He was more then ready to defend himself with words. But what she told him took all arguement from him. He glanced toward Silverpaw, praying this wasn't a dream. "Did I just hear that right?" he asked the she-cat that looked just as confused as he felt right now. She slowly nodded her head "Yeah...But you don't have to worry Smokepaw I know you'll do well." she purred to him with a look that made it so it was impossible for him not to smile at her. He looked over at Spottedpath who was sitting next to Demonshadow. With a determined look he rose to his paws and walked over till he was standing right in front of her, ignoring the glare that he was receiving from the tom. "You want me to prove that I can do this then i'm choosing you as one of the cats that come along on the patrol." he told her, holding his head a little higher "That way when the patrol is over you will finally see that I am good enough to become a warrior." Now all he had to do was chose three other cats. He'd have to choose someone who was fast so that way should they run into trouble they could send a message back to the clan quickly. The rest should be muscle in case they had to defend the territory till the messenger was to bring back help. But who should I choose? he silently wondered to himself as he looked around the camp. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can. Kind Warrior of Lotusclan Family means a great deal to me...
It's why I planned to raise my sister...
But then I was offered a place in the clan...
The large tom followed his dear friend and deputy into the camp, curiosity prickling in his very paws. He was still by her side when they walked into the camp. When she spoke of allowing a mere apprentice taking on a patrol and being in charge of it he looked to her wondering what she was up to. He personally didn't think the little cat shouldn't be getting this chance but it wasn't his place to say. He walked away with her and sat close to the she-cat. Out of ear shot he leaned so that he was close to her "I sure hope you know what your doing?" he whispered so no one else could hear them. "My vote is still holding him by the tail over a pit of wild dogs." it was a joke of course but he had a hint of seriousness to it. When he saw Smokepaw walking over to them he pulled back and glared at the young tom. He spoke boldly and seemed determined to prove himself. As much as he hated it he had to give the young tom credit, he was seriously thinking about which cats to take. It's why I never left my mother though I knew she was going crazy.
After the loss of my mother and brother.
And for that kindness i'd gladly give my life.
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Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 10:47 pm
>Spottedpath<
She nodded to her apprentice, "very well, Smokepaw." She said nothing more, she wasn't going to get in a fight with him right now.When he left, she listened to the other warrior, and couldn't say anything in response before her apprentice padded back over. She was pleased by his thoughtfulness, and wondered curiously on what cats he would pick. Her green eyes glistened with hope. Maybe he could handle this. 'Let's just hope he knows what he's doing, and doesn't get ahead of himself..' She thought silently. She wanted to reassure her friend, but couldn't. She had no control over what the apprentice did, who he chooses, how he acts. She glanced over at her friend,and bumped his shoulder. She wanted to say, "he'll never pick you to go on the patrol if you act like that!", but the apprentice probably wouldn't choose him anyways.
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Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 12:40 am
Quirky Apprentice of Lotusclan My parents were kittypets...
But then we heard of them wanting to send us away...
Now were living amongst the clan cats... He raced back over to Silverpaw, stopping in front of her with a pounce "Who would you take if it was you?" he asked her, truly wanting the younger she-cat's opinion. "Well....If it was me i'd take Blackstripe. He may not be keen on listening to you but his eye sight is spectacular at night." Smokepaw eagerly nodded his head as he looked over at the rough looking tom who was over by the warriors den with his mate Lillystream. He could definitely see the she-cat's point, nothing got past the tom when it came to hunting and patrols. While he was looking the tom over she pointed with her tail to a light brown she-cat with long brown legs. "I'd also take spiderlegs with you, she may be snappy and annoying to be around but she is one of the fastest cats in the clan." The young tom tore his smokey blue gaze away from Blackstripe and looked over at Spiderlegs. He found it hard to hide his disgust, scrunching up his nose and sticking his tongue out. "You gotta be kidding me, she tried to claw my ears off the other day." Silverpaw giggled softly to herself and playfully chuffed him on the ear "Yeah thats cause you deserved it mouse brain. You know better then taking the last piece of prey when she's around." He rolled his eyes as he halfheartedly dodged her paw. It hit the tip of his ears but didn't really bother him. "So who else should I choose?" he asked her and watched her look around. Her yellow gaze lingered on two other cats but instead of telling her who she thought he should choose she asked him "Who else do you think YOU should choose?" He thought for a moment as he looked at the cat's "Stoneleap, he's led plenty of border patrols in the past so he'll be an obvious choice." he decided. He looked to SIlverpaw who gave a quick nod "And who else?" she asked with the patience of a queen. He wasted no time as another cat's name came to him "Mouseear!!! Her hearing is incredible!" he jumped to his paws and gave Silverpaw a quick lick on her cheek "Thank you so much Silverpaw!" he ran over to Spottedpath and skidded to a stop in front of her "I have chosen the cats to go on patrol." he spoke quickly, the words jumbling together even as he named them off "Blackstripe, Spiderlegs, Stoneleap, and Mouseear. But before you tell them I wish to go hunting first to present it to them as a peace offering." he seemed so proud of himself for thinking of this all by himself. For the first time he seemed like the eager apprentice who had been presented to her in the beginning. They loved me and my sisters greatly.
So me and my sisters came up with a great idea!
Trying to be the best we can. Kind Warrior of Lotusclan Family means a great deal to me...
It's why I planned to raise my sister...
But then I was offered a place in the clan...
With a roll of his eyes he mumbled loud enough for her to hear in a playful tone "Who says I wanna go on a patrol led by an apprentice." on that note he flopped down on his side and began cleaning his belly fur. "Besides I promised Silverpaw i'd take her night hunting and you know how I hate breaking promises to her." he meowed between licks. Though one wouldn't know he was actually looking at Spottedpath out of the corner of his eye. He wondered why she agreed to going on the patrol when she could be spending a peaceful night back at the camp. It's why I never left my mother though I knew she was going crazy.
After the loss of my mother and brother.
And for that kindness i'd gladly give my life.
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