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Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 9:58 am
the most beautiful dream i've had and one that i want to remember in this dream i am in middle school and it has a bunch of my class mates from back then and siblings.
It first takes place in a mansion but some of the rooms just look normal not fancy. the first room you walk into is is tan the furniture the wall the lights aren't bright. there's a party going on but it's not a normal party. the people at the party are me, my older sister Maria, and Zack. The house is my parents house in the dream and when there isn't this party going on it's just me, my best friend Maddy, Zack, and my parents some where in the house. Maddy is never at one of the parties she's at her home with her parents. mariah has her own house and she isn't here when there are no parties going on and neither are my parent. Back to the party, well the guests at this party aren't normal either they are all from paintings in the house i'm guessing. Zack, Maria, and i all have powers. Powers that we use at the end of the night to kill the party guests, which sends them back to their paintings some how. the other guests are my two younger siblings Soren and Raven. Their back to the age they were when i was a teen. Soren is older then Raven. They do not have any powers but the do have water guns. I have the power to shoot out shooting stars out of my hands as long as they charge up enough they can go far. The power may sound weak but the stars are just gas and flame. They are spikes. I always aim for the face cause it kills instantly. Sometimes i have to shoot off right away because it takes a little for them to charge. Maria has a power i think its just a ray gun or rays shoot out of her hands. Zack has a power that sets up a decoy and he changes into a lime green suit. not as in tuxedo. And his motorcycle goes full lime green. I have a black motorcycle, all black. So on to the party. It was entertainment time at the party and it was a woman from a painting's turn. We called her baby mama or mama baby cause in the painting and at the party she has a lot of adult sized babies and on normal sized one. Well for her entertaining the party crowd she threw the regular sized baby. All the other paintings clapped at it and even all the adult sized babies. Maria, Zack and i just stood there giving each other 'what-the-hell-just-happened' looks. Well the rest of the entertain i can't remember but it was getting to the end of the night i'm guessing cause i charged a star up as much as i could and flew it into a picture frame a couple of times to test it and then i flew one into one of the painting's faces and he died instantly died. After that is a blur too. But the night ends up with me, Maria, and Zack shooting our powers at each other. I ran to my parents room and hide on the side oft he bed. I see Soren and Raven looking through the window laughing and soon i hear Maria and Zack's voice coming from out side so at the last second i crawl from the room as fast as i can. I can't remember who won the fight that night. The next morning Maria is gone, Maddy hadn't shown up yet, and Zack and my dad are working on their motorcycles. our house is some where is the mountains but it's very beautiful with lot's of lush green healthy trees and the grass is nice and soft. That day the sky was light grey or the clouds covering the sky were. I rode past my dad and Zack on my motorcycle. He went to his power and set up a decoy and rode after me. We were joined by Matt, Luke, Mackenzie, Susan, Jake, and guy that looked like Channing Tatum but younger (i don't know why he was there.) And a few others from my class. But our motorcycles turned into bmx bikes or mountain bikes. We stopped by a trio of kids in the shade of a pine tree. they said they wished they had a bike and Matt gave his to them till they got to where they needed then took it back. Then a weird part, we ended up by a wooden wall and wooden urinals the guys went in and the rest waited. Then we rode all the way to a store. It had no logo on it or anywhere near it but we all knew it as a Kohl's. It was big and the dim lights and all the dark wood cabinet's full of shining jewelry made it beautiful. Anything made out of wood there was the same wood as the cabinets. There was no music playing and everyone whispered or talked in a hushed voice to each other. It was peaceful and calming. Until we got a call from our science teacher who said she could aid us on getting to school or bring us to school. Hannah was the first to hear this. She handed the phone to me and i said what cause i couldn't understand the teacher through the phone. I finally asked Hannah what she said and she told me it. I thought the answer but forgot to say it and hung up. I heard my grandpa say there they are and i we all mad it outside to our bike except for me something was making me slow. I ended up getting caught and everyone else hid in the store but they accidentally left clues near them and got found. We said we had our bikes and we could ride them but Grandpa and a teacher at the school said no. It was Friday and we were suppose to have that Friday off and none of us wanted to be at school. They loaded us on a bus and while on our way we got stuck in traffic next to old antique trucks and other transportation vehicles. we escaped from the bus and started messing with them one had a lady in it and another had a lot of people in it wait for traffic to clear up. Something scared me and i screamed and clung to the nearest arm which happen to be Zack's but he pulled away and it seem to me he was mad at me. So until they got us all back on the bus i talked with Roger. Then on the bus i sat near Zack, yet again showing no interest in me. The the teacher said scoot over. I asked why and my grandpa said to enjoy the view. So i did. I was a huge flock of small white owls. At first i couldn't tell they were owls but after the bus got close enough i smiled realizing they were. We were driving on a cement bridge above a river or something dangerous. I saw a couch stuck, abandon, stuck in between a corner of a mountain and the bridge. The dream ends there.
Yeah that was the most awesome dream ever. I had one like it the other night before last night i think. It war just Me, Mariah And Zack shooting paintings at the party. Then it was me, Maddy, and Zack hanging out in Maddy's bedroom at the house. May i remind you maddy isn't at the house when the parties are going on but she is when they aren't, so she only sleeps at her house a maybe a couple nights a week. So pretty interesting. Let's hope the dream continues tonight.
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Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:26 am
Sorry for the long wait on part six just been dealing with more bull s**t lately.
Otome walks away back to her lunch and continues eating. Kikyo is staring off stunned from what otome said. *you-you-you took it. you-you took my arm....* "otome, don't you think that threat was a little too much." "what do you mean?" "she did lose her arm." "kinda made it sound like you took her arm." "please. it was just a threat to shut her up. my dad knows people like that. he doesn't know their history but i do. plus i wouldn't hire a bunch of thugs to do things to her. no i would hire some one at a higher class." Mr. paul swept up kikyo's lunch and threw it away. "Kikyo. you look pale. C'mon let's go to the infirmary." Kikyo didn't hesitate as Mr. paul led the way. Few minutes later Shigami pulled back the curtains fast. "kikyo! are you all right?" kikyo hesitated to speak for a second. *she could tell her best friend anything right? but shigami is very protective what would he do? would he stay quiet or would he retaliate?* she swallowed hard at the thoughts and what might happen. "N-no. I'm fine. I just tripped and i guess i looked pale to Mr. paul." Shigami sat down on the spiny chair and rolled near kikyo. He reached in to his bag and pulled out a lunch. "Mr. paul told me you spilled you lunch." he hands it to her. "But you didn't eat yet, have you?" "I snacked." they sat there until kikyo finished her lunch then they got ready to leave school. "hey kikyo?" "yeah?" "what's with the bat?" "oh this? remember i was going for the girls baseball team this year. well that was..." "oh, yeah. still what are ya going to do with it?" "not sure yet. i might sell it." "i see.'' they walked together with very little talk until they had to part way. Then they said good bye.
haha. the good part will come up soon. part seven might be the end. maybe....
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Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 8:55 pm
Kikyo walked through the park. The sky was grey today and it smelt as if it rained but everything was dry. Kikyo was at the center of the park when she heard a twig snap from behind her. She turned around to see otome coming from the shadows. "I've been looking for you kikyo." otome didn't look very neat. "funny I was thinking about doing the same. But then I decided to just go home." little did kilyo know shigami confronted otome about kikyo's fall. Otome confessed her love to shigami but was rejected harshly. She then threw a fit when she got home and decided she would kill kikyo to get to shigami. Otome took a sloppy step towards kikyo. She came quick at kikyo with a knife. Kikyo acted quick and hit otome with a bat and struck her several times on the head...... The thunder cracked out side as the rain started to poor. There was a ring at shigami's door bell. He opened it to his surprise a bloody, mud covered kikyo stood there. " kikyo? What are y-" kikyo flew at him and threw her arm around him sobbing. They fell to the floor. "k-kikyo? Why are you crying? Why are you covered in blood and dirt.'' kikyo continued sobbing. Shigami walked her over to the couch. "i-i-i killed otome and buried her...." kikyo started sobbing again. Shigami just sat there and stared. "you killed her..... k-kikyo where's the bat?" kikyo started to calm down a little. "I buried it w-with her.".... *next day* " otome? Otoem? Has anyone seen otome and shigami and kikyo?" everyone looked around the room asking each other. There was a shuffle at the door and it opened. In walked in shigami and kikyo. "ah! There you guys are have any of you seen otome? You had to kikyo you said you take the the same path as her!" kikyo froze and hesitated at Mr. Paul's words. She then glanced at shigami. "no this time I went to shigami's house to help me catch up with lessons. Mr. Paul studies there faces for a second. "oh. Well you guys came in late its lunch time. "yeah we fell asleep at the table and end up over sleeping." mr. Paul chuckled at the thought of sleeping at the table. The bell rings. "alright kids let's eat lunch. See you later." Mr. Paul leaves. Kikyo and shigami move desks around and sit down. Shigami takes two lunches out of his bag. They over heard a conversation while eating. "Ya know maybe otome disappeared because of black.mail." "What do you mean???" "A lot of girls have been black mailed to leave towns." "What's the mail???" "Going out with older guys for money. He he."....... The end.
That was the story I liked it I will come out with a new story later.
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:41 pm
Excellent use of dialogue, you've got an eye for it.
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:11 pm
thanks, so you coming out with any stories anytime?
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:38 pm
Rin Kimora thanks, so you coming out with any stories anytime? I have somethnig on my mind, just dont have it ready for story format. I have a large load of Writer's block at the moment
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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