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 Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:42 pm
Rei Seshiro II Nix ll Rei Seshiro Hola ^^ I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today! Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use. From the top down: 1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range? 2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai. 3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD 4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself? 5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful. Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^ Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your input very much. I'll go over a few points that you made. 1. You are correct. Someone with a significant amount of strength could break through the restraints and/or this technique would only slow them down compared to completely stopping the limb from moving towards her. And yes, it wouldn't work on someone firing a weapon at her. 2. The thing about this technique is that it cannot kill, only stun. I do have a variant I plan on using for my bankai with this technique. I have re-worded it a bit. 3. I made it this way only because that's her main skill. Compared to others she doesn't have very much skill in other types of fighting fields, except swordsmanship. I hope it's okay 3nodding 4. I updated the information so hopefully it's more clear. Weaker would be considered a lower seated officer, or even a Lieutenant rank. She cannot manipulate it to an extent where she can hurt them, but merely slow them down. It's due to the fact that she has a large reiryoku reserve and I guess it could be better said that she's exerting it. 5. I weakened the ability quite a bit and pointed out ways to destroy the blades. I gave them less power as well. Well, all that being said... I like it! I approve with the understanding of two things: Inbokeibatsu, as you have it now in Shikai, cannot cause death. And that you will also have to submit a Bankai before you can use it in roleplay. Alright with you? Yes on Inbokeibatsu. Do you mean I cannot RP with the character until I submit a bankai or just that I cannot use the bankai until I've submitted it? I have no problem not using it beforehand of course, I wanted it to be a surprise later on 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:48 pm
II Nix ll Rei Seshiro II Nix ll Rei Seshiro Hola ^^ I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today! Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use. From the top down: 1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range? 2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai. 3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD 4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself? 5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful. Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^ Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your input very much. I'll go over a few points that you made. 1. You are correct. Someone with a significant amount of strength could break through the restraints and/or this technique would only slow them down compared to completely stopping the limb from moving towards her. And yes, it wouldn't work on someone firing a weapon at her. 2. The thing about this technique is that it cannot kill, only stun. I do have a variant I plan on using for my bankai with this technique. I have re-worded it a bit. 3. I made it this way only because that's her main skill. Compared to others she doesn't have very much skill in other types of fighting fields, except swordsmanship. I hope it's okay 3nodding 4. I updated the information so hopefully it's more clear. Weaker would be considered a lower seated officer, or even a Lieutenant rank. She cannot manipulate it to an extent where she can hurt them, but merely slow them down. It's due to the fact that she has a large reiryoku reserve and I guess it could be better said that she's exerting it. 5. I weakened the ability quite a bit and pointed out ways to destroy the blades. I gave them less power as well. Well, all that being said... I like it! I approve with the understanding of two things: Inbokeibatsu, as you have it now in Shikai, cannot cause death. And that you will also have to submit a Bankai before you can use it in roleplay. Alright with you? Yes on Inbokeibatsu. Do you mean I cannot RP with the character until I submit a Bankai or just that I cannot use the Bankai until I've submitted it? I have no problem not using it beforehand of course, I wanted it to be a surprise later on 3nodding Yeah... I only meant that you'd have to have the Bankai approved before it's use. The character itself is still approved ^^ Oh wait! Have you gone and done the Shinigami captain application thing? It's down in the separate forums if you haven't yet. I'm off for the night... au revoir XD
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:52 pm
Rei Seshiro II Nix ll Rei Seshiro II Nix ll Rei Seshiro Hola ^^ I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today! Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use. From the top down: 1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range? 2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai. 3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD 4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself? 5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful. Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^ Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your input very much. I'll go over a few points that you made. 1. You are correct. Someone with a significant amount of strength could break through the restraints and/or this technique would only slow them down compared to completely stopping the limb from moving towards her. And yes, it wouldn't work on someone firing a weapon at her. 2. The thing about this technique is that it cannot kill, only stun. I do have a variant I plan on using for my bankai with this technique. I have re-worded it a bit. 3. I made it this way only because that's her main skill. Compared to others she doesn't have very much skill in other types of fighting fields, except swordsmanship. I hope it's okay 3nodding 4. I updated the information so hopefully it's more clear. Weaker would be considered a lower seated officer, or even a Lieutenant rank. She cannot manipulate it to an extent where she can hurt them, but merely slow them down. It's due to the fact that she has a large reiryoku reserve and I guess it could be better said that she's exerting it. 5. I weakened the ability quite a bit and pointed out ways to destroy the blades. I gave them less power as well. Well, all that being said... I like it! I approve with the understanding of two things: Inbokeibatsu, as you have it now in Shikai, cannot cause death. And that you will also have to submit a Bankai before you can use it in roleplay. Alright with you? Yes on Inbokeibatsu. Do you mean I cannot RP with the character until I submit a Bankai or just that I cannot use the Bankai until I've submitted it? I have no problem not using it beforehand of course, I wanted it to be a surprise later on 3nodding Yeah... I only meant that you'd have to have the Bankai approved before it's use. The character itself is still approved ^^ Oh wait! Have you gone and done the Shinigami captain application thing? It's down in the separate forums if you haven't yet. I'm off for the night... au revoir XD Thanks again! I was told that there is a temporary captain for the 12th division so at the moment I'm just classing myself as a 12th division member. Have a good night!
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