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 Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 11:05 am
 Personal______________________________________________ Personality:
Ophelia is said to have no regard for human life. She takes great pleasure in causing pain to others. Initially Ophelia comes across gentle and caring to the public and even in most private meetings with others. Though anything other than what her true intentions are is merely a façade to keep face with others around her.
During her years alive she had begun taking a great interest in science, being taught by her father, and it turned into something she loved. However, due to events, she turned this into an obsession when she was killed.
In Seireitei, her obsession with science evolved even greater. During her time with a rebel group, she had learned a great deal from a defective division twelve member. She was of course intrigued by this and set her sights on that division. She takes no regard for weaknesses and often states that everyone around her, even herself, are merely test subjects waiting to be examined. In fact, she is often outraged by weak people and desires their demise, though she would never outwardly express it unless she was going to kill them herself.
It is said she has a particularly large hatred for Hollows, more so than more normal shinigami. It is most likely due to the fact that she witnessed her family being eaten and killed by a hollow before being killed herself. It's believed that it was the first time she felt true fear and perhaps she despises them now with her current outlook on this as she despises weakness of any kind.Hobbies:
Ophelia's general hobbies only consist of experimentation. It has been suggested, though not proved, that she once tested an experiment of hers out on an entire rukongai sector in the past which caused mass destruction and death. She was imprisoned for a time but released due to insufficient evidence.
Favorite Color(s):
Ophelia loves the colour of red, though only the shade that human blood is. She is said to enjoy cutting people to see this colour, even when her own body is cut she is more fascinated with the colour of her blood than the wound she had received.
Favorite Activities:
Experimentation and fighting.
Favorite Foods and Drinks:
Ophelia isn't seen to eat or drink that much but she does enjoy raw fish and an assortment of soup. She loves different teas and is said, from time to time, to enjoy a small taste of others blood or her own.
Other Personal Likes:
Not known.
Least Favorite Color(s):
All except red.
Least Favorite Activities:
Ophelia hates to really help others. She invests her time into her own interests and the thought of protecting or helping someone achieve anything gives her no pleasure and can actually heighten her already incredibly short temper.
Character Theme: What Do You Want? - Goyte
History:
Ophelia was born in 1870 in a small city somewhere in Spain. She was born into a family of eight. Four brothers, four sisters and her mother and father. Her mother was actually of Japanese descent with her last name previously being Hirino, her father, Spanish. Ophelia had kept her mothers last name however for various reasons. At the age of seven Ophelia had began to show signs of great brilliance, her father, being an astrologer was amazed at how mathematically inclined his daughter was. By the age of 17, and after studying under her father alone for the past many years, Ophelia had gather an immense skill for inventions. However, her happiness would soon fall apart.
At 23, she had fallen in love with a man named Marick and they were to be wed. On their way to the estate of her betrothed, something attacked them. Ophelia was thrown from the carriage that they had been travelling in and she lay unconscious within a very deep ditch. When she awoke she heard a terrible sound. Climbing back up to the dusty road to find her family, she saw a horrible beast standing over top of them, they were all dead. It didn't seem to pay her much attention at first, though, it soon turned and attacked. However, the hollow merely killed her, it didn't have time to eat her as an unknown rescuer appeared and slew it. She was grief stricken, though her soul was successfully sent to Seireitei right then and there.
Several weeks had passed since arriving in the spirit world, but her heart was hardened and black. That event had completely destroyed the young bright happy woman she had once been. Taking on a twisted personality. She eventually was grouped with a unit of rebels that had been causing problems for Seireitei for some months. Here, she met a man from the 12th division. Learning that there was a sector in this world devoted wholly to science made her interest here far more reached. She wanted to attain this ability. Now the cause of the rebels to overthrow the current command and take command themselves seemed to become her own dream. She would kill the one who lead this "division" and take it as her own. She had now developed a lust, or, a thirst for this power.
However, the rebels were easily defeated by a single division. Some died, some fled and some were captured. She fled and went into hiding. Unaware of the powers of this world, she felt fear. Though she escaped she had no idea what would happen to her. Eventually she was found, but for other reasons. She was recruited to go to the academy and eventually become a shinigami. This, of course, made the aspirations she had felt a few months prior during the rebellion renew. She accepted and entered in the academy. Passing everything with ease, she eventually joined the 12th division and became a high ranking member. It is recorded that during the time when she was at the academy, almost a dozen students had gone missing and are still, to this day unaccounted for, though there were never any suspicions that it was in fact her.
Other Appearance Features: Ophelia has six long bony looking arms that protrude out her back. They move at her will and she often uses them instead of her normal arms. She has created them to be extensions of her own body and thus she can use them to cast Kidō spells, though limited to numbers of 1-20. While apart of her they do not share the same level of reiryoku or reiatsu as the rest of her body. (Noted that the only reason it says captain at the moment is because of the possibility that I may obtain that rank later on. If not, I will edit it accordingly)
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:30 pm
Zanpakutō______________________________________________ Name: Meido [めいど - Underworld] Element: Death/Dark
Appearance: It is an extremely long sword, larger than the typical ōdachi. It is over a meter in length. It is, however, always concealed in one of the many arms that Ophelia has created as apart of her body, though she has instant access to it when needed.
SpiritSpirit Form
Inner World: Inner World Shikai
Released by the command Senja [せんじゃ Judge] In its release state, the entire sword, from hilt to blade, dissolves into a purple mist that surrounds Ophelia's hands. Her fingernails then glow a dark purple and each one appears like a gateway into the stars, different colours and shapes moving across the nail at all times.
Shikai Abilities
Keito [けいと - Condemn] In this basic ability, Ophelia slashes her hand in the air towards an attack. Five crescent moon shaped energy waves appear and go towards target. They stop mid air in various formations. Once they are stopped they all open to full shaped moons. The person can see a different dimension in it as they are a type of portal. This attack however only work on projectile attacks such as Kidō. It sucks them in and traps them in Ophelia's Zanpakutō's world. Ophelia can control these to release things that she had sucked in, though not Kidō or other things that are considered variants. She can release solid objects that might have gotten sucked in by accident or otherwise. This ability has no offensive abilities.
Meido, Kiritsu [めいどきりつ - Underworld Law] This ability is the strongest offensive ability in her Shikai. Ophelia's nails, on both hands, grow to about the length of her original Zanpakutō. She uses them as she would her own Zanpakutō. However, their ability goes above simply attacking. If one of these nails were to hit an opponent on a limb, arms or legs, that particular limb would be repelled to attack her. For example, if she hit the arm that the opponent held his or her sword, that arm would automatically stop if her opponent was aiming to attack her with that limb. This ability can effect both legs and arms at once. It does not have an effect on any other part of the body.
Inbokeibatsu [けいばついんぼ- Final Judgement] In this ability, the energy that is contained within her fingernails leave and form ten large pillars that surround the enemy in mid-air just above them. The pillars proceed to drop and encircle them within, trapping them. Each one then transforms into a full circled Meido (portal). A full circled Meido forms immediately above them as well when the other Meido's open, along with one under their feet. After this process, each of the Meido's send a strong surge of dark energy into the targets body which can paralyse them and causes physical damage. This ability can be compared to a Kidō. For weaker opponents it can make them go unconscious, however, for stronger opponents, say seated officers, it would make their body numb and in a great amount of pain but they would be able to move, though it would be more like a crawl. Anyone that is placed in an unconscious state would still be able to hear and see along with feel pain. The process of the Meido's opening and striking the opponent happen quite quickly. Once trapped, escape is not easy. Only strong brute strength can break the Meido's as spiritual attack would be sucked in.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 1:57 am
Kidō______________________________________________ Ophelia is well known for her mastery with Kidō. She passed this field with higher marks than any of her classmates during her academy time. She is so proficient with weaker spells that she can easily cast them without reciting the incantation or saying their particular number. She is also known to twist Kidō around combining multiple spells into one attack that has a perfect fusion arrangement, making incredibly strong attacks. Though this is limited to weaker spells. Bakudō Level: Spells 1-89 | Ophelia can perform these level of spells with relative ease
Spells 90-99 | Ophelia can use these spells as well, however, they take far more concentration and energy to use. Hadō Level: Spells 1-89 | Ophelia can perform these level of spells with relative ease
Spells 90-99 | Ophelia can use these spells as well, however, they take far more concentration and energy to use. Yusō Chūdō Level: Spells 1-15 | Ophelia is able to perform all Yusō spells, however. From 14 on Ophelia's skill deteriorates rapidly and by performing them she is unable to do so for a lengthy amount of time. Ophelia is able to perform Yusō number 11 due to the nature of her reiryoku and her innate ability in Kidō. Chiyu Chūdō Level: Ophelia is efficient enough in Kidō to be able to use her reiryoku to easily heal injuries. However, she is not skilled in this particular kind of Kidō as she despises the thought of healing someone. Shien Hōhō Level: Spells 1-100 | Ophelia is able to perform all Shien Hōhō spells. Though, the higher the number, starting from 80, it becomes more difficult for her to cast multiple spells in succession. Hybrid Techniques: Ophelia does not know these particular techniques. Forbidden Kidō: Ophelia knows forbidden spells 14 and 96. She has not attempted a higher forbidden spell.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:02 am
Physical Abilities______________________________________________
Hohō Level:
Ophelia is very proficient in this technique. Enough so that she can keep up with other Captains.
Hakuda Level:
Ophelia lacks much ability in this field. Her skill level is average for a captain.
Zanjutsu Level:
Despite being a master Kidō user, Ophelia has high skills in the art of the sword. Though her appearance and attitude would suggest otherwise.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:03 am
Skills & Abilities______________________________________________ Athletic Skill:
Generally, Ophelia has little athletic skills.
Strength:
Ophelia is known to be actually quite strong, this, however, is mainly due to the incredibly strong arms that she created on her own body.
Speed:
Ophelia is regarded as a very fast opponent. While average compared to more elite, she can easily outdo opponents weaker than she is. She has completely mastered the simple more basic art of shunpo.
Agility:
Ophelia is extremely agile. Due to the fact that she can use her arms to drastically shift her body weight and the fact that she is extremely light.
Stamina:
Ophelia, being apart of division twelve and after countless modifications to her own body has immense stamina. She has never seen to be tired or in any way exhausted.
Durability:
Ophelia has amazing durability when using her six arms as their construction is by no means normal. She also has immense durability with her normal body. Modifications and experiments have produced this effect. Her body is no longer normal by any means of the definition.
Endurance:
Ophelia has immense endurance. She can withstand a great deal of attacks that would normally immobilize others. She can withstand a great amount of injuries that would cause others to succumb due to the pain as she usually modifies her nervous system and many other parts of her body before she encounters an opponent. Though this does not make her incapable of being seriously or fatally injured, it makes it simply far harder to break her down.
Flexibility:
Ophelia is quite flexible.
Master Reiryoku Manipulator:
Ophelia is a master at manipulating reiryoku, reshi and reiatsu. Mainly her own. She can do so to form different weapons made completely out of Reiryoku, such as the ones she has already invented. Because of her skill she can also create different combinations of Kidō together that would be somewhat harder for others uses not skilled in that field. She is also able to manipulate others to deaden their senses. By this, she can actually make them feel as if they have been doing something longer than they were, make them feel as if they are standing still for a short period of time, making them feel as if others are speaking slowly. Though these effects are temporary and rarely used by her.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:24 am
Inventions & Body Modifications______________________________________________ As a master of science, Ophelia has invented many of her own creations that she uses on either a daily basis in public or in private use.
Eda [えだ - Limb] Ophelia's most used invention and one she greatly prides herself in. She created six functioning limbs that are actually apart of her body, they move, can hold heavy objects and can even cast weaker spells. They are extremely durable as well. The most interesting fact is that she can detach and reattach them at will. She is sometimes seen using only two, four or all six. Each one of these limbs is 1.5 meters long. 0.3 meters longer than her sword.
Sachi Kessei [さちけっせい- Harvest Serum] This rather basic formula acts as a dissolving agent which, when consumed by a target, dissolves their outer flesh and bone, leaving their inner organs perfectly intact. It coats the organs and prevents damage done to them. Ophelia herself has developed a complete immunity to this serum and to her it is like drinking water.
Atsuen Ken [あつえんけん - Extending Blade] This particular invention is something that Ophelia often uses instead of her actual Zanpakutō. By manipulating her reiryoku into a blade-less hilt and guard, a long blade made completely out of spiritual energy appears. By swinging it, multiple blades appear out of the tip, forming the appearance of a chain. The blades have the normal destructive power of any normal blade, however, she is able to break through thin walls or damage thicker ones due to the speed that the blades can reach. They are not particularly hard to break for someone if they hit either the first blade or the very middle blade of the extension. It is also, however, quite possible to break it by hitting it any any point except the last blade, though the aforementioned spots are the way to break it the easiest. There seems to be a limitless length in which they can reach. This, too is concealed in one of her created arms. As as a scientist, Ophelia has made a number of body modifications and continues to do so throughout her time in the Seireitei. She alters parts back and forth depending on what she is doing. She is able to modify any part of her body and it's not possible to tell what has been modified or what has happened to that particular body part as a result of the modification. There is only one known constant modification that Ophelia never changes.
Cyber-optic Communications - This implant allows her to visually see others who have a similar implant or through certain visual devices. The image displays on her retinas. On top of this, she has sub-vocal communications where her voice is not heard allowed but rather in her head, others can hear her thoughts whom she is linked to.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:49 am
I hope you like it! Let me know if adding my bankai right now is necessary, I wanted to wait and make it a surprise for something I might be planning but have no problem adding it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:14 pm
Oh my gosh, it's beautiful! I really like all of the ideas and powers, and Ophelia seems like a very interesting and entertaining character to interact with. Unfortunately, I am a huge push over and softie, so I'm going to get someone else to look over the profile as well, just to make sure I'm not being my squishy, lenient self. But overall, good job, and I'll make sure it gets approved as soon as possible.
P.S. You don't need Bankai at the moment. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:36 pm
a.renee.w
Oh my gosh, it's beautiful! I really like all of the ideas and powers, and Ophelia seems like a very interesting and entertaining character to interact with. Unfortunately, I am a huge push over and softie, so I'm going to get someone else to look over the profile as well, just to make sure I'm not being my squishy, lenient self. But overall, good job, and I'll make sure it gets approved as soon as possible.
P.S. You don't need Bankai at the moment. ^^Thanks! Super eager to get this approved and start role playing. Have something I want to do in the free zone, if I can that is.
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:01 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 8:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:33 pm
Hola ^^
I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today!
Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use.
From the top down:
1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range?
2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai.
3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD
4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself?
5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful.
Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:30 pm
Rei Seshiro Hola ^^ I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today! Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use. From the top down: 1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range? 2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai. 3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD 4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself? 5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful. Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^ Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your input very much. I'll go over a few points that you made. 1. You are correct. Someone with a significant amount of strength could break through the restraints and/or this technique would only slow them down compared to completely stopping the limb from moving towards her. And yes, it wouldn't work on someone firing a weapon at her. 2. The thing about this technique is that it cannot kill, only stun. I do have a variant I plan on using for my bankai with this technique. I have re-worded it a bit. 3. I made it this way only because that's her main skill. Compared to others she doesn't have very much skill in other types of fighting fields, except swordsmanship. I hope it's okay 3nodding 4. I updated the information so hopefully it's more clear. Weaker would be considered a lower seated officer, or even a Lieutenant rank. She cannot manipulate it to an extent where she can hurt them, but merely slow them down. It's due to the fact that she has a large reiryoku reserve and I guess it could be better said that she's exerting it. 5. I weakened the ability quite a bit and pointed out ways to destroy the blades. I gave them less power as well.
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:40 pm
II Nix ll Rei Seshiro Hola ^^ I'm Rei, and I'll be judging this profile today! Like Renee, I am a fan of the Meido idea for techniques (Huge Sesshomaru fan here!), and I am interested in seeing how this plays out in RP. I like most of the abilities myself, but some of them are potentially overdone, or just not suited for their conditions of use. From the top down: 1. Meido, Kiritsu: I assume that a significantly powerful foe could force their way through this repelling effect? Or that someone using long range techniques would not be affected by it's repelling effects, since they are not trying to strike at your character from close range? 2. Inbokeibatsu: I could see this ability more for Bankai than Shikai. I like it's potential, but I also am not entirely fond of the way it's worded. I don't think you'll abuse it, but I think to avoid anyone getting their panties in a knot, I am going to request that you reword it to sound less powerful, and/or move it to your Bankai. 3. I'm always happy to see a Kido user, but I question the particular skill level of this in a Squad 12 captain. I realize that this is a large part of her combat style, so this point is mainly just me speaking my mind on the subject. Pay it no mind if you don't want to. XD 4. Master Reiryoku Manipulator: I just want to see more details in it. Mainly, what you consider to be "Much Weaker" than herself, and what you mean by "Deadening" their senses. I assume it to be a temporary effect, and not one capable of completely blocking a sense by itself? 5. Atsuen Ken: Last one. I just don't really like it. You've already got such a well done Zanpakuto and abilities, that I don't think this item is really needed. If it does stay, I would recommend it not be so powerful. Ok, that's all I see. Please quote or PM me when you're done editing ^^ Hi! Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your input very much. I'll go over a few points that you made. 1. You are correct. Someone with a significant amount of strength could break through the restraints and/or this technique would only slow them down compared to completely stopping the limb from moving towards her. And yes, it wouldn't work on someone firing a weapon at her. 2. The thing about this technique is that it cannot kill, only stun. I do have a variant I plan on using for my bankai with this technique. I have re-worded it a bit. 3. I made it this way only because that's her main skill. Compared to others she doesn't have very much skill in other types of fighting fields, except swordsmanship. I hope it's okay 3nodding 4. I updated the information so hopefully it's more clear. Weaker would be considered a lower seated officer, or even a Lieutenant rank. She cannot manipulate it to an extent where she can hurt them, but merely slow them down. It's due to the fact that she has a large reiryoku reserve and I guess it could be better said that she's exerting it. 5. I weakened the ability quite a bit and pointed out ways to destroy the blades. I gave them less power as well. Well, all that being said... I like it! I approve with the understanding of two things: Inbokeibatsu, as you have it now in Shikai, cannot cause death. And that you will also have to submit a Bankai before you can use it in roleplay. Alright with you?
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